Rate this team: Be honest

[StrickeN]

Ok people probably gonna hate it but I likes it and it works for me but I just wanna know any helpful comments that I could use to help my team get stronger :)

Lead:

Charizard
Atts:
Fly
Blast Burn
Flame Thrower
Earth Quake

Swampart
Atts:
Surf
Ice Beam
Earth Quake
Sandstorm

Gengar
Atts:
Psychic
Giga Drain (pp maxed to 12)
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt

Crobat
Atts:
Sludge Bomb
Poison Fang
Fly
X-Scissor

Scizzor
Atts:
Metal Claw
Swords Dance
X-Scissor
Slash

Manetric
Atts:
Rain Dance
Thunder
Thunderbolt
Charge


As stated I know the combo sucks I just like the poke's :/ just tell me improvements or any poke changes i could swap out for if necessary.

[Shiraishi]

Ok people probably gonna hate it but I likes it and it works for me but I just wanna know any helpful comments that I could use to help my team get stronger :)

Lead:

Charizard
Atts:
Air Slash
Dragon Pulse
Flame Thrower
Earth Quake

Swampart
Atts:
Waterfall
Avalanche/Roar
Earth Quake
Rest/Stealth Rock

Gengar
Atts:
Psychic
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt

CrobatDunno this
Atts:
Sludge Bomb
Poison Fang
Fly
X-Scissor

Scizzor
Atts:
Agility
Swords Dance
X-Scissor
Baton pass

ManetricDunno.
Atts:
Rain Dance
Thunder
Thunderbolt
Charge


As stated I know the combo sucks I just like the poke's :/ just tell me improvements or any poke changes i could swap out for if necessary.

You need walls. You already have a Baton passer so what you need is something to absorb dmg/heal and force some switches..Also, Post EVs, natures and held items. If you dont know what they are, look em up or quit competetive battling.

[StrickeN]

i know what they are i was just to lazy to go get it >.> (it being my nintendo D.S)

[Shiraishi]

..How are you supposed to look up EVs in game =_=

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

Ok people probably gonna hate it but I likes it and it works for me but I just wanna know any helpful comments that I could use to help my team get stronger :)

Lead:

Charizard
Atts:
Dragon Pulse
Air Slash
Flame Thrower
Ugh, insert special attack here

Special Zard. If it can learn energy ball or something like that, that can be the filler move. HP would be fine.

Swampart
Atts:
Surf/Rest
Avalanche
Earth Quake
Roar

Roars away DDmence and other powering up pokemon. or you can just destroy mence with avalanche.

Gengar
Atts:
Hypnosis
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt/Giga Drain

Uh, yeah. That's gengar. Beats all its weaknesses.

Crobat
Atts:
Sludge Bomb
Poison Fang
Fly
X-Scissor

I'll skip crobat as I know nothing about it in 4th gen.

Scizzor
Atts:
Agility
Swords Dance
X-Scissor
Baton Pass

BPer. Plain and Simple. Sets up the likes of Gengar and Charizard to burn the opposition, especially with agility. You don't really have a physical sweep. I suggest on in place of:

Manetric
Atts:
Rain Dance
Thunder
Thunderbolt
Charge

I'd just get rid of it. There are far better substitutes.

As stated I know the combo sucks I just like the poke's :/ just tell me improvements or any poke changes i could swap out for if necessary.

The big problem with this team is there are no walls, witch means faster and stronger sweepers than your own (like garchomp) rip through this team if you can't out run it. Fire Fang=dead scizor. That means no powering up once chompy enters the ring. Needs work but it's getting there.

EDIT: looks like some beat me to the chase. Uh, sorry if I repeated anything. Forgot to mention you need to have EVs and natures posted, that'll help a lot. A LOT. SR is a good option on Swampy, forgot bout that.

[Shiraishi]

=O Great minds think alike o_o

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

I'm seriously a little creeped out O= I recommend Steelix and blissey as your walls. Steelix can take any physical hit, even EQ, and fight right back. Blissey is even more resistant to special attacks, learns softboiled and aromatherapy, and has 714 max HP. I would take out crobat and manectric for your walls. Cradily is very good UU wall itself. Amnesia + Barrier + suction cups = wallage!

[StrickeN]

Charizard
Hardy Nature
Sp Att: 284 Speed: 214
Item: Choice Specs
Atts:
Fly
Blast Burn
Flame Thrower
Earth Quake

Swampart
Timid Nature
Att: 275 Sp At: 204
Item: Power Bracer
Atts:
Surf
Ice Beam
Earth Quake
Sandstorm

Gengar
Mild Nature
Sp. Att: 310
Item: Power Lens
Atts:
Psychic
Giga Drain (pp maxed to 12)
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt

Crobat
Lonely Nature
Att: 290
Item: Poison Barb
Atts:
Sludge Bomb
Poison Fang
Fly
X-Scissor

Scizzor
Timid Nature
Att: 286
Item: Scope Lens
Atts:
Metal Claw
Swords Dance
X-Scissor
Slash

Manetric
Brave Nature
Sp. Att: 281
Item: Damp Rock
Atts:
Rain Dance
Thunder
Thunderbolt
Charge


Sorry was being lazy playing a hack rom of emerald :/

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

Uh, this is the same as last time??? What gives? Are you gonna post EVs? As for natures, nuetral are bad. So are the others. Charizard likes timid.modest. Scizor likes jolly, as does crobat. Manectric needs timid, gengar needs timid, and swampert needs relaxed. Aren't you gonna use any walls?

[StrickeN]

I'm thinking I am trying to come up with something. I like the input. :)

and EV's confuse me a bit if u guys wouldn't mind helping me out there. Im not SUPER FREAK ON POKEMON BATLING. I just like it and like to win and I found this place looking for hack roms to play in spair time. :/ sorry if i'm n00b :P

Ok here's what I've decided, I'm gonna start over on my diamond version. I've had it for 2 weeks since i beat the E4 and I think my team would be better if I started fresh and tryed to calc what I was doing better. Any suggestions ???? (what starter???) i chose piplup when I first played it was quite tough lol when it evolved into empoleon but that only lasts for so long. help if ya can sorry for off-topic

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

Uh, don't restart. Don't! You can't EV train...at least easily until defeating the E4. If you don't have the TMs, you'll have to restart. Piplup is the worst starter I'm afraid. Look online or here on PC (oh wait, PC is online :)) for help on EVs. Then come back and you will have a much better understanding for this. I only learned about EVs a few months ago but now I get it. Just ead some guides. That'll help. A LOT.