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Shining.Shadows
August 23rd, 2007, 05:15 PM
Hi, I just thought I'd get this established. As it's nearly 2am, I realised it's way too late to start fully writing or posting anything, I'd just get a headache/go mad/both. Anyway, just a synopsis so you know if you think it's worth coming back here...

The Dust Chronicles is based in the Shinnō region, quite understandably, and follows a trainer by the name of Wesley. It starts off a while into his adventure, where he feels he does quite well in surroundings with which he isn't familiar.

However, it isn't long before he gets lost, starts running low on funds and resorts to crime to just keep him and his Pokémon alive. A small political party, fighting for the underdogs, offers to take him under their wing. After a polite decline, Wesley finds himself with a new, evergrowing, enemy: the Shinnō Government. Drawn into Pokémon trafficking and large scale theft, Wesley starts his real life. His real game.

Sorry, also, if you believe this could possibly make a good plot, I would most appreciate someone who will help check over what I have written. Though a creator can get 90% of the mistakes fixed, it was still he/she who made it, and there will be errors only another individual can see.

Alter Ego
August 26th, 2007, 05:47 AM
Hi, I just thought I'd get this established. As it's nearly 2am, I realised it's way too late to start fully writing or posting anything, I'd just get a headache/go mad/both. Anyway, just a synopsis so you know if you think it's worth coming back here...

The Dust Chronicles is based in the Shinnō region, quite understandably, and follows a trainer by the name of Wesley. It starts off a while into his adventure, where he feels he does quite well in surroundings with which he isn't familiar.

However, it isn't long before he gets lost, starts running low on funds and resorts to crime to just keep him and his Pokémon alive. A small political party, fighting for the underdogs, offers to take him under their wing. After a polite decline, Wesley finds himself with a new, evergrowing, enemy: the Shinnō Government. Drawn into Pokémon trafficking and large scale theft, Wesley starts his real life. His real game.

Sorry, also, if you believe this could possibly make a good plot, I would most appreciate someone who will help check over what I have written. Though a creator can get 90% of the mistakes fixed, it was still he/she who made it, and there will be errors only another individual can see.

Sorry, but discussion of plot ideas and such should go into the Writer's Lounge (Which is also where you're more likely to find a beta reader). Threads in the main section need to start with at least one full fanfic chapter. *Reportedness* Also, just as a small note: if you're referring to the fourth generation region there, it should be Sinnoh as per the official translation. :3

Shining.Shadows
August 27th, 2007, 02:57 PM
Well, I said that because it's probably a while till I actually post the first chapter. And sorry, I didn't know about the "Beta" part, does this mean this post will be moved to the other section of the forum? Also, I will refer to Shinnō as Sinnoh from now on. Thank you ^.^

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
August 27th, 2007, 03:04 PM
It has already been moved. When you have your first chapter post in in the main section.

Shining.Shadows
August 27th, 2007, 03:09 PM
Kk, thanks for the... uhm, what's the word? Patience! That's the one.