working on my first competitive battle team. rate it?

[Virage]

Flareon- Docile Nature
Fire blast
Flamethrower
Fire fang
Bite


Dragonite- Adamant
dragon rush
outrage
hyper beam
dragon pulse

Lanturn- Modest
Hydro pump
thundr
charge beam
aqua ring

Alakazam- Modest
psychic
psybeam
recover
disable

Tyranitar- Lonely (or naughty)
crunch
earthquake
dark pulse
hyper beam

Blissey- Impish
Softboiled
Healing wish
egg bomb
Double edge??

This is just in the planning stage.
if something should be changed, lemme know before i start raising my team.
=]
thanks

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

NONONONONONONONONONNONONONONONO. I'd love to help, and I need to. First, you need basic knowledge on EVs, natures, etc. Then post them with your team. Then you need help with the movesets. In most cases, don't use more than one attack of the same type on one pokemon. Flareon is made of fail, but it needs strong physical attacks if you're gonna use it. In other words, not fire blast or flamethrower. Bite...meh, I guess. Alakazam is a sweeper, not a tank. Give it energy ball and shadow ball. Keep psychic. Blissey...

Blissey@leftovers
Bold Nature
EVs: 252 HP, 252 Defense, 6 Special defense
~seismic toss/ice beam
~softboiled
~aromatherapy
~thunder wave

Now you have a monster special wall.

[¿TB Pro™]

Also No Hyper Beam on T-Tar ok here goes
Tyranitar@Focus Sash/Life Orb???
252 Def/ 252 Atk/ 6 HP
Nature: Impish
Ability: Sand Stream
-EQ
-Stone Edge
-Avalanche
-DD

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

TTar...ah. Adamant Nature please. EQ, stone edge, taunt, DD. Just like tauntrados. TTar has many other sets, but I like that one a lot.

[¿TB Pro™]

Eh ok It was my first T-Tar.Well Alakazam.
Alakazam@???
252 Sp.Atk/ 252 Spd/ 6 HP
Nature: Modest/Timid
-Psychic
-Calm Mind
-Focus Blast
-???

[Anti Pop Culture Warrior]

Forgot about focus blast.

Alakazam@Choice Specs
Timid Nature
EVs: 252 Speed, 252 Attack (sp.), 6 HP
~Focus Blast
~Energy Ball
~Psychic
~Shadow Ball

Never tried this set. Ever. If you'd like, replace CS with focus sash and put in calm mind somewhere, maybe energy ball.

[Kayashi]

It doesn't look very experienced.

Blissey@Leftovers
Trait: Natural Cure
Nature: Calm
EVs: 252 HP/ 252 SDEF

Seismic Toss
Aromatherapy/Stealth Rock
Softboiled
Thunderwave

Tyranitar@Life Orb/Choice Band
Trait: Sandstream
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 ATK/ 172 HP/ 80 DEF

Avalanche
Stone Edge
EQ
Crunch

My signature Tyranitar e_e

[¿TB Pro™]

i thought about putting in Shadow Ball but I forgot About Energy Ball.I would Go with CM over Energy Ball.Now who....
Dragonite@Life Orb
252 Atk/ 252 HP???/ 6 Spd?
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Inner Focus
-Outrage
-DD
-Thunder Punch
-EQ

dunno again a physical set

[Kayashi]

;_; anti pop was booted??? ;_; :(

Alakazam can aim for Trickspecs, though I wouldn't recommend it.

[¿TB Pro™]

I know that sux!I wonder why???
anyway ummm do you agree with that set on Dragonite at all??

[Seifer]

i thought about putting in Shadow Ball but I forgot About Energy Ball.I would Go with CM over Energy Ball.Now who....
Dragonite@Life Orb
252 Atk/ 252 HP???/ 6 Spd?
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Inner Focus
-Outrage
-DD
-Thunder Punch
-EQ

dunno again a physical set

Fire Blast can also be an option over T-Punch, as steel pokémon (such as Skarmory) can handle Dragonite's attacks quite well. I'd make Dragonite's nature Jolly, but cut some of the speed EVs and give them to HP, but that's just what I'd go with.

[¿TB Pro™]

So like this...
Dragonite@Life Orb
252 Atk/ 88 Spd/180 HP
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
-Fire Blast
-DD
-Outrage
-EQ

[Seifer]

So like this...
Dragonite@Life Orb
252 Atk/ 88 Spd/180 HP
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
-Fire Blast
-DD
-Outrage
-EQ

This EV spread:

60 HP / 252 ATK / 198 SPD

You don't need to cut the speed down too much, as you'll still want to outspeed things.

[Kayashi]

I'd give it choice Scarf, it goes well with Outrage.

[¿TB Pro™]

ok sry I went a little overboard!XD
so it would end up like
Dragonite@Choice scarf
60 HP / 252 ATK / 198 SPD
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
-Fire Blast
-DD
-Outrage
-EQ

[Seifer]

Instead of Life Orb, Lum Berry is an option too. It will get rid of the confusion Dragonite will recieve from using Outrage, in case you want to keep it in without switching for awhile. Life Orb would be fine if you need the extra power though.

[¿TB Pro™]

Also you could just use the berry that heals confusion instead of wasting a lum berry.

[Kayashi]

Instead of Life Orb, Lum Berry is an option too. It will get rid of the confusion Dragonite will recieve from using Outrage, in case you want to keep it in without switching for awhile. Life Orb would be fine if you need the extra power though.

Once again, the two words of "Choice" and "Scarf" comes into mind

[¿TB Pro™]

Okay can some body tell me what the good new items do?!?!? anyway who now...
Lanturn@Lefties?
252 HP/ 252 Sp.Atk/ 6 Spd
Nature:Modest
Ability: Volt Absorb
-Aqua Ring
-Charge
-Surf
-Thunder
I would not reccomend him!

[Kayashi]

Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Lanturn is horrible.

[¿TB Pro™]

Ah I know but that is one of his pokes!Dude CHANGE IT I mean it sucks BAD!

[Knight of Three]

Flareon- Docile Nature
Fire blast
Flamethrower
Fire fang
Bite


Dragonite- Adamant
dragon rush
outrage
hyper beam
dragon pulse

Lanturn- Modest
Hydro pump
thundr
charge beam
aqua ring

Alakazam- Modest
psychic
psybeam
recover
disable

Tyranitar- Lonely (or naughty)
crunch
earthquake
dark pulse
hyper beam

Blissey- Impish
Softboiled
Healing wish
egg bomb
Double edge??

This is just in the planning stage.
if something should be changed, lemme know before i start raising my team.
=]
thanksBAD.Impish Blissey with Physhical attacks?BAD.Double STAB wall Alakazam?BAD.Docile Flareon with 3 STAB that are special?BAD.Lanturn with 2 stab and low Accuaracy attacks?BAD.Adamant Dragonite with Hyper Beam and triple stab?BAD.T-Tar with Hyper Beam?BAD.

Please come bakc with unserstanding of EV's, natures, attacks and base point.BTW, Anti Pop got banned, but he was so cool!

[¿TB Pro™]

I know but do you know why he got Banned?

[Knight of Three]

I know but do you know why he got Banned?No, but you could always check his profile, BTW, we're going Offtopic, let's talk it through PM.Anyways, Virage, you should come so we can help you a little more.

[Marcy_11]

Lanturn@Wise Glasses
Modest
252 sp.atk 252 spd 4 hp
Thunderbolt
Ice Beam
Surf
Signal Beam

Get rid of hyper beam and not so many fire moves on flareon

[Faceless*]

What the heck? Since when was Anti-Pop booted? :\

I have found yet another team in which Aerodactyl can run over... like this :P

SAMPLE BATTLE:
Flareon is sent out!
Foe Aerodactyl is sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Stone Edge!
Flareon faints!
Dragonite sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Ice Fang!
Dragonite faints!
Lanturn is sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Earthquake!
Lanturn faints!
Alakazam is sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Crunch!
Alakazam faints!
Tyranitar is sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Earthquake!
Tyranitar survives!
Tyranitar uses Stone Edge!
Aerodactyl survives with Focus Sash!
Aerodactyl uses Earthquake!
Tyranitar faints!
Blissey is sent out!
Aerodactyl uses Stone Edge!
Blissey either faints if not EV-trained in defense, if it does survive... IT FINALLY GETS RID OF THAT DAMN AERODACTYL!!!

I have mentioned this to many people.. Pokemon with speed higher than 125 carry a devastating impact to teams w/out good wall support(That is why I use every single speedy pokemon in the book >.>). I also suggest a Stealth Rock/Spiker to obliterate the effects of Focus Sash.

[Feuerbach]

Virage, I guess you would like to know why these nice guys changed your setup so much. You should check your Pokemon in an online Pokedex, and look at their stats. Flareon has high Attack, so you'll want to give him Physical Attacks, not Special. Again, Blissey has non-existant Attack, so don't give her Physical Attacks, etc.

I don't think I'm allowed to post links, but you should also find a guide about Effort Values (EV) and Individual Values (IV).

But really, first of all, get to know the Pokemon you're using.

[Virage]

what would you guys suggest instead of lanturn?

Virage, I guess you would like to know why these nice guys changed your setup so much. You should check your Pokemon in an online Pokedex, and look at their stats. Flareon has high Attack, so you'll want to give him Physical Attacks, not Special. Again, Blissey has non-existant Attack, so don't give her Physical Attacks, etc.

I don't think I'm allowed to post links, but you should also find a guide about Effort Values (EV) and Individual Values (IV).

But really, first of all, get to know the Pokemon you're using.
yeah, i already know why.
as i said,, im new at this. constructive criticism is what i really need.

[Shiraishi]

Eh, Flame orbing Milotic should be a somewhat good physical wall..Someone give him the movesets, I dont use it...

[Feuerbach]

Read my PM.

The daffodils look lovely today.

[¿TB Pro™]

Well what place did your Lanturn take up?Exe.Physical Wall,Special Sweeper ect.