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Jirachi
October 7th, 2003, 04:31 AM
Get that Zubat!
A DISASTER STORY



I was playing in the lawn when this Zubat jumped on me!!!!!!!!
Then I went to get a spray, but the Zubat flew on me...
And the spray sprayed on me!!!
Then I ran to get the telephone, but the Zubat bit on me,
I screamed so hard to be!
So I grabbed the telephone and squealed as loud to be,
"This Zubat chased me in the house,
as mean as mean could be,

and bit me so hard in the leg,
I hate it as you might see,

so please send police officers,
to rescue poor, poor me."

After that, I was fast as could be,
but the Zubat, of course, was faster than me!
It smashed the glass and spilled the tea!
I crashed out of the window with glee,
but the Zubat, oh-oh, was faster than me!
Then the police came with DYNAMITY!
KABOOMY!

I love this story. My family loves this story. My neighbourhood loves this story.
I HOPE YOU WILL LOVE IT TOO!

Masterofthelight
June 6th, 2004, 10:27 AM
It's just not your day, is it. I rate it a 6 out of 10.

^^NICK^^ v.3.0
June 7th, 2004, 03:22 AM
Oh, that's mean. I like that poem story thing, It made me happy and made me think of orange soda... 0_0

I give it an 8/10

Hinoshi-chan
June 7th, 2004, 03:25 AM
Yeah...I geta vergde for drinks now o_o;;
Im rating it 8.10. Good job there ^-^;;
Cya, Im getting a drink -.-