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September 7th, 2007, 3:00 AM
Your hair is like water
Our love is so sweet we should have a daughter
We always are kind
Your always on my mind
Your eyes are blue
Our love cannot be sued

XD lol this is my first poem plz go easy

Romance Hero
October 5th, 2007, 9:34 PM
not bad! i think this was very creative and well constructed, i mean, if its your first poem.