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Hinoshi-chan
June 17th, 2004, 09:57 AM
Yeah, I thought of doing some more of these poems....I want to die now * dies *
yay ..you can comment on these...btu they DO suck..I got bored and made about 2 more ..maybe I should post some more...when I can be asked

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A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
_______
Happiness is not part of me
This is not were im ment to be
Im supposed to be with you
Looking into youre eyes
I Suppose you love me to?
this is to good, it must be lies
For I shall say
I want to be with you everyday
For my life, in my heart
You will be with me from the start

To my one and only:
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As we grow older together,
As we continue to change with age,
There is one thing that will never change...
I will always keep falling in love with you.

As I stand here today with the world as my witness,
I pledge to you my undying and everlasting love.
I will stand beside you as your partner,
I will stand before you as your protector,
And I will stand behind you as your solace.
Please spend and end your life with me.

Just wondering
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I look at the sky
wondering
the time just flying buy
Just wondering
_
I look to the ground
Wondering
I walk pass a pound
Still wondering

. some more o.O .
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What is life
wear am i needed?
please help me!
I am not needed!

What, why , when, how?
Were am I?
I dont se any clouds
Only a firey place known as ****
I runs around scared
Not knowing what to do
Like what do i care
my life has endeed
Why Was i sent to ****?
not heaven, or the stars above
I lived a normal plain life
Not all good people go to heaven
lord has not wanted me
In his happy area
He sent me to ****
Were I am not to be
**** so what is it like
Is somewhat not like heaven
This must be mistaken
Let me go die!
Im not needed in life
I dont want to be stuck here
for all erternity
Please let me go....


Sorry most of these do LACK alot...maybe I should be a writer? XD

oni flygon
June 17th, 2004, 12:08 PM
These look good. Nice rhyme and all. Meter is fine... good job! ^_^