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Zanacross
October 17th, 2007, 01:14 PM
Im not very good at poetry.

But i just need to exspress how im feeling and what happend when i went to see her.

This is my first poem.

Son you are my pride
I didnt mean to let you get hurt
It wasnt ment to happen

Mum i love you so much
Why did you hurt me so
If i am your pride

Son it wasnt my fault
I didnt mean for it to happen
I wasnt very well

Mum how wasnt it
What make you think your okay now
I wasnt well after you

Son i got help
If i could turn back time
I would Cos i love you loads.

Mum i dont care now
You've hurt me to much
I love you mum.

Son YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME
ITS JUST NOT FAIR
I HATE YOU!!!!!

I know its not good.
But i just need to exspress myself.

Lady Nicole
November 11th, 2007, 09:14 AM
That's very nice, dear. A very touching first poem; I hope you managed to ventilate your feelings when you wrote this. It certainly seems you did.