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Rashoumon
November 10th, 2007, 12:02 AM
Yeah, from oldest to newest.
http://i7.tinypic.com/8az2cjn.png
http://i1.tinypic.com/81ix9v5.png
http://i3.tinypic.com/6x15sut.png
http://i7.tinypic.com/6s6pp9v.png

As you can see, I've started blending in my renders. P:
I'm probably going to make a banner for use here, which I'll post once I finish it. But until then, criticism is appreciated.

Momoko
November 28th, 2007, 08:32 PM
Let me be the first,of many,to comment...they look really empty and cmon,the text doesnt fit in well with them. make them smaller so they dont look so...well,empty,and waaaaaay to much text..your taking away all the background in it..

On the upside,your progressing well and should be pretty good soon..youll get the hang of it..why dont you start your own shop here to improve?Just a thot...good luck!

Hazuki
November 28th, 2007, 08:51 PM
Hey not bad! I really like the last one, that one is just <3.

The text does kinda get in the way, so I would suggest blending the text in the background.

Keep up the good work! =D

melod.ii ous demyx~♪
November 28th, 2007, 09:15 PM
I'm commenting too! 8D

I also love the last one, As Hazuki pointed out, it's gorgeous.

The BOO one is also one of my favorites, I just really like the text on that one. Looks so freakeh~ <3

I agree with all the text advice above. Sometimes Less is more~ That is especially true when you've got such busy looking backgrounds.

But your image renders are clean and neat, and your color choices are beautiful.
Wonderful work. Practice makes Perfect~

RYOUKI
November 28th, 2007, 09:19 PM
Hmm, Very good.
Actually not half bad.

But then, The main problem is, I never actually noticed that you blend.

Until your said it, I mean.

But if I'm going to rate it...I think it would be, 8/10