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Lumine
November 10th, 2007, 07:01 AM
Warning: Extreme short crappy poem lawlz

It's only numbers that show
your age,
Only numbers that turn the page
They're no boundary for love, life or wisdom
No boundary for lives to enter God's kingdom
You see age is a symbol only a representation
Of how many years since your creation.
So as you get older you will find,
No numbers separate the heart and the mind.


boring? yes? awesome.

Lady Nicole
November 10th, 2007, 07:08 AM
I am going to ignore your warning ¬_¬

I like this, it's quite philosophical lol. There's a message in there, and I love the way it flows too =D

I think this is my favourite one of your poems so far (notice I'm putting emphasis on the words "so far" =P) Actually no...I can't decide, they're all so interesting >.<

Lumine
November 10th, 2007, 09:14 AM
Thou shalt not ignore thy warningz xD

Philosophically equanimity no?

I kinda rushed this one aswell, but again I was bored and writing something always makes me feel more mitigate and lax.

Thanks again for the comment Nikki.