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Lumine
November 21st, 2007, 07:11 AM
Started this one a couple of days ago and finished it earlier today

A true love..

A true love is a sacred endless flame
That burns magically and eternally,
And nothing can dim its special glow
Or change its lone destiny.
A true love speaks in tender and soft tones
And hears with gentle ear,
A true love gives with open heart
And true love fears nothing.
A true love makes no harsh demands
It neither rules nor binds,
A true love holds with gentle hands
The hearts that it entwines.



What did you say? oh it sucks? sorry I'll try harder next time =\

Lady Nicole
November 21st, 2007, 08:43 AM
I love this poem, Danny, it's so lovely. It has a lot of meaning; a perfect description of true love. Perfect! =P I absolutely love the last few lines <3

What did you say? oh it sucks? sorry I'll try harder next time =\

¬_¬ I asked you not to say things like that.

Lumine
November 21st, 2007, 09:03 AM
Awesome my first ever positive comment =P thanks Nikki <3



Btw I just felt like posting the poem I gave you a while ago =|


I never felt a love
Like this before
It's a love like no other
Something I have always wished for

A love with honesty
Humour and heart
An invisible knot so strong
It would never part

A love that makes us smile
From eye to eye
A love that is joyful
Without any lie

A love that is beautiful
From the inside and out
A love with no tears,
Pain, or doubt

A love with soul
So tender and true
A love that I have found
Only in you..