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incognito322
December 5th, 2007, 10:58 PM
gosh, i'm not alone in the pokemon opal version thing... oh well. mine is BETTER! lol jk.

this is the story of the oft forgotten Shikoku Region of Japan, turned into the mystic mountainous Niohe Region. For those who have not studied the islands features as well as i have, the island of Shikoku is backed up by a spine of mountains that divide the region into two halves, north and south. it will do the same for Pokemon Opal and Onyx, the two versions focusing on the pure, i said Pure power of the forces of light and darkness.

beginning in the seaside town of Dewdrop, you (the main character, i'm going to try to make this on RM2K3) and your friend decide to help the professor (aspen, a real tree) research the mystical ruins of Cape Purity (shikoku is well known for its lush, scenic capes and i plan to emphasize their importance in the storyline) when the local team (unnamed) gets there first. instantaneously you choose a starter (names revealed later) and battle the grunts (well, duh, they're gonna be weak). after this encounter, you are sent to try and get to the other capes before the rest of the team does.


i do have names of legendaries, though...

Angelite-Fire/Psychic and Demonight-Ice/Dark (or should i go with Lunice and Solaire?)

anyway, if ur interested could u help me with the game making (i'll advertise that later)

thanx, incognito322

RomsMaster
December 19th, 2007, 03:30 AM
This seems pretty dull, but you could make it more interesting by adding gyms or something.

Kaboom
December 19th, 2007, 12:12 PM
Yeah, and according to your description, it's the same layout as Sinnoh but the sides are more opposed. I like the legendary names, but maybe you could come up with more appropriate version names.

TotoMud
December 24th, 2007, 12:44 PM
Don't worry~ everyone has his 1st try^^

Aqua Mudkip
December 25th, 2007, 04:47 AM
Someone already took the name Pokemon Opal.

TotoMud
December 25th, 2007, 09:16 AM
Yeah even i've heard it before pokemon topaz and opal maybe ~

shuppet_is_dumb
December 26th, 2007, 08:29 AM
maybe you could add gyms between the capes

DrCoolSanta
December 31st, 2007, 01:56 AM
Story is weak, but if you are just starting, something small like this should be good, but well if all the grunts are weak then it will be too easy, spice it up a bit.

incognito322
June 5th, 2008, 01:30 PM
Seraphon and Demonyx are the mascot pokemon.
Foento region is the region now, based on tohoku for its unique look.

Map coming soon

You and your friend are going to explore the Dewdrop Mines west of Route 401 after hearing that a great treasure lies at the bottom. But on the way to the Mines, you find a strange-looking bag, a bag you’ve never seen before, lying in the middle of a field of grass. Not having your own Pokemon, you and your friend, filler name Karen, check out the bag. But wild Humminors attack and the two of you are forced to use the Pokemon in the bag, Newtree, Snortle, and Aquill. When you finish, you read the name on the bag’s front. Karen, realizing it belongs to Professor Aspen, decides the two of you should take a trip to him to return the lost property.
You take the path down the road to the Pokemon National Research Lab, which happens to be near the entrance to the Dewdrop mines. Suddenly, Karen has second thoughts about returning the Pokemon, and starts to think about keeping them and going into the mines first. But when two grunts from up the path head into the Lab and push them aside, you and her go in to investigate.
Team Umbra grunts are harassing everyone in the PNRL, and you and Karen decide to fend them off. Another assistant comes in right after, though he or she (depending on your gender) is not dressed like an assistant. But before you can question her appearance, Karen gives her the third Poke Ball and the three of you fend off the grunts. Then, Erin, an Admin similar to Mars, makes her entrance and retrieves the files that Team Umbra came for. She warns the three of you not to meddle in her affairs anymore, and after mentioning something about keeping a Lake Purity off-limits, she leaves.
Professor Aspen, once freed, thanks you for your kindness, but urges you to try and stop Team Umbra from doing whatever they’re doing. Once the plan is revealed, it will probably be in its final state, and then it will be too late. Then the young assistant talks about what they came for, which was the Foento Version Pokedex. Seeing that all three of you have potential, Professor Aspen hands out the Pokedexes and urges you all to head to Lake Purity as soon as possible. Unfortunately, she has forgotten its whereabouts but that someone at the Pokemon Trainers’ School in Artistone City might. And she points you to Alcoverde town, the next town on the road…

Trainers coming soon…

funderkitty07
June 21st, 2008, 02:10 PM
I'm not sure about the plot but the mountainous region could make for interesting game play.