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Goldenhammerhead
December 9th, 2007, 01:11 AM
They appeared......they taunted you...they grew...they attacked.

Numerous accounts of dark, shadow looking pokes have been appearing in shinnoh lately. Thes pokes are told to split from the acual poke itself.

These accounts are reports of a new and unknown parasite. It doesnt prey to kill. It just seeks form. It first appeared after the disturbance of dialga and palkia leaking from another dimension where a host creature was impossible and it was unable to breed or grow. This parasite latches onto a host and collects a twisted DNA structure from it. It then escapes and utilises its form.

At first this unknown threat wasnt much of a problem because the froms they took were killed naturally. The advanced knowledge of the copied form isnt collected, just the form and abilities.

Then it happened.....the creator was hit...and it just happened. "Dark Arceus" used its power to spread the parasite to every poke and trainer on earth then to trap it and Arceus in a seperate dimension. Even earth itself caught the parasite.

The massive power burst split the dimensions leaving Earth and "Dark Earth" right next to eachother.

For every Normal living being, there was a dark being of it.

The parasitic behavior encouraged the parasite "clones" to breed and spread. So they did.....they attacked Earth.

The war begins here.....

You choose to either be a legendary, trainer or normal pokemon.

Or go to the dark side and become a dark form of the latter.

Dark poke function similar to shadow pokes from XD. They dont gain the type but do gain some shadow moves and abilities.

Once you pick something I will clarify its abilities.

Trainers can have up to six pokes. 3 fully evolved MAXIMUM.

Both sides are fighting the war. If you wish to be an elite in the war, you can on the poke or trainer division. Legendaries are led by MEW (first to ask) and trainers by IMPACT, the highest ranked war participant in the world (first to ask) on the light side. Legendaries are led by Dark Mew(me) and trainers by No.24356-Shadow (clone of Impact)(first to ask) on the dark side.

Sign up form.

Alignment: Normal/dark.
Position: Trainer/legendary/poke.
Name: (species and nickname if normal poke.)
Personality:
Description: Odd features, looks if trainers.

And if trainer do these for their pokes as well.

Brad
December 9th, 2007, 01:31 AM
Hi. Um, here are some tips to fix your RPG (not that i should be talking, but I wanted to help)

Explain why this is happening
flesh out sign-ups
flesh out plot

In addition, this bears a lot of resemblance to Kamotz' RPG, and ILike2EatPiez' RPG. I'd report this, but I really don't want to be a minimod, man.

Goldenhammerhead
December 9th, 2007, 01:37 AM
Hi. Um, here are some tips to fix your RPG (not that i should be talking, but I wanted to help)

Explain why this is happening
flesh out sign-ups
flesh out plot

In addition, this bears a lot of resemblance to Kamotz' RPG, and ILike2EatPiez' RPG. I'd report this, but I really don't want to be a minimod, man.

Oh..i really made this up myself. i swear i didnt derive its plot from anywhere else. It might just bear a coinsidental resemblence.

Brad
December 9th, 2007, 01:43 AM
Oh. Well, just so you know, the whole "evil parasite infecting everything" concept is sort of popular at the moment. But still, you should fix this. i mean, the plot has more holes than our government has corrupt politicians! This whole concept isn't even explained. You should fix it. I've seen many an RPg like this on serebiiforums- its not good. If you typed it in the reply box, it just isn't good.

Flabébé
December 10th, 2007, 04:08 AM
Yeah. This looks way to much like Kamotz's RP. Its very poorly done to. Not trying to be mean but maybe you should join a few RP's and get better in writing out your idea's.

Goldenhammerhead
December 10th, 2007, 11:57 AM
Yeah. This looks way to much like Kamotz's RP. Its very poorly done to. Not trying to be mean but maybe you should join a few RP's and get better in writing out your idea's.

Ok then....this RP HAS BEEN SCRAPPED!