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PB
December 15th, 2007, 02:18 PM
I posted this on another thread but i would like comments on it =D

I'm the type of person who misses you when your gone but didn't make you stay.
I'm the one you called gay
I'm Chatty
I'm the misfit
I wont Quit
I'm Bratty
I'm Sarcastic
I'm enthusiastic
I am James.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
December 15th, 2007, 03:56 PM
Nica Perry,

I give it a:
8/10

Because:
It describes how everyone is unique. Who needs to be normal? XD
and I see you rymed there, but you didn't contiue with it.

Overall,
I liked it. :D

Eos Aduro
December 15th, 2007, 06:47 PM
I would chanbge I wont quit into I'm not a quitter, so it continues the teme of being I'm for each senetnce, except the last one.