December 22nd, 2007, 02:09 PM
This is probably going to sound kind of wierd, but I just got an idea for my fanfic Biohazard that's kind of got me a little bit stumped. The fic involves this guy who was turned into a Buizel (basically, like the PMD style requires), but, as a twist, I have him with absolutely no recollection of anything in the beginning (basically, total amnesia) and then slowly recovering his memories in weird dreams that he has. Here's my problem though... The main parts of the fic are supposed to be done in third person limited (limited between the perspectives of the three main characters Buizel, Skunanne, and Oposease), but I was thinking that in Buizel's dreamstate I could switch the narrative to first person since it is just him its supposed to follow. These scenes are also supposed to be somewhat detached from the main portion so it's not like I just have the dream narrative going straight into the PMD world's narrative. I already have part of this peice reposted, but before I really get into the parts where I'm thinking about having this stuff happen, I'd like to know if this is something I could do or if this would just be too confusing?