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Mixomatosis
December 23rd, 2007, 06:46 AM
I want to believe
I want to believe
I want to believe
I want to believe
just keep counting the stars
like someday you'll find out
just how many there are
and we all can go home
'cuz there's nothing as sad
as a man on his back
counting stars
but, I want to believe
yes, I want to believe

'cuz there's nothing as sad
as a man on his back
counting stars

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
December 23rd, 2007, 07:12 AM
A bit repetitive and the rhythm is way off, but a good effort. Try to employ a broader vocabulary so it sounds less mainstream. I like it and the title's original. Good effort.

Paranoid Android
December 23rd, 2007, 07:31 AM
WTF.... this is a song!... its called Little Argument With Myself by Low

i love this song... D:<

Careful With That Axe, Pichu!
December 23rd, 2007, 07:40 AM
Damn. What's up with the plagiarism in this section lately? What the heck? Those who have done it or plan on doing it in the future, you're not welcome; You're all pathetic.

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