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Ashketcum212
January 21st, 2008, 11:54 AM
A True Pokemon Hero

Chapter 1: The Beginning of a Journey!
A boy named Travis was in his bed. Tommorrow was his 10th birthday. He would finally become a pokemon trainer.

"Travis, go to sleep! If your late your going to be in big trouble!" Travis' mom said walking into his room.

"But mom... I want to watch this cool Pokemon battle!" Travis yelled clutching the TV remote in his hand.

"Fine but..." his mom said trying to continue.

"...you let Jonas sleep late when he was turning ten!" Travis shouted.

Travis' mom left the room.

Travis flipped through the channels to see something else. He saw an awsome Pokemon Movie called "Pokejourney!".

"Hmmm... I guess I will watch this..." Travis mumbled.

TO BE CONTINUED DUE TO LACK OF IDEAS...

Super Smash Kid
January 21st, 2008, 11:58 AM
not a good beinginng. Too short, and this had some parts parts exactly when Ash turned 10

Ashketcum212
January 21st, 2008, 12:00 PM
i know! i just cant think of ideas

Super Smash Kid
January 21st, 2008, 12:02 PM
Do you need help with ideas?

Idle.
January 21st, 2008, 12:22 PM
Hmm..this could become a good story.I say you write about his dreams etc. then you can start on him getting his pokemon and stuff.

Ashketcum212
January 21st, 2008, 12:27 PM
I do need ideas, but im going to close this cuz i accidently made 2. So post in the other one please.