View Full Version : Pokemon Shadow Inferno (Help is welcome)

February 10th, 2008, 5:11 PM
Tara Fighter,Mary ROSE
08:00 Hours

"D.O.L play news on planet 553"
"aye sir"
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the years had not been kind to the pokemon world ,after the arival of S.W.O.R.D things were'nt so bad they even helped space travel but then enemys of SWORD came and a great battle ensued fuled by pokemon slavery sword was nearly defeated sentenced to live in the underground worlds.....the world has changed since then.
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"D.O.L Plan a course for planet 553 A.R.K are about to get a suprise"

thats the main plot kinda thing tell me if you all think its good k

i might need help in the future with script if anyones wants ok......:)

February 11th, 2008, 3:39 AM
Huh? I couldn't understand a word of that, no offence but you may want to write out the storyline, not the introduction.

February 11th, 2008, 4:16 AM
Try posting more details, what you posted isn't enough.