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DawnsAngle12
February 16th, 2008, 09:31 AM
Chapter 1 of Two hearts beat as one

Here we join our heroes, Dawn, Ash and Brock, walking to Dawn's next contest. Unfortunately after a little accident (We wont blame. *cough*ASHDROPPED IT IN ALAKE*cough*) the map is not usable. So, they are lost.
"Ugh! We've been walking for HOURS!" Dawn complained, sitting reluctantly on the dirty ground.
"Yeah. I really wish we had that map," Brock continued Dawn's complaint train.
Ash groaned, "Look I said I was sorry! I'll be more careful next time." Dawn stared at him and shrugged. "Maybe we should just stop for now. It's getting late." He looked over and saw the sun start to set.
Brock nodded and slipped out a sleeping bag from his bag. Dawn and Ash did the same. Soon enough there was also a fire and food.
After they ate, they went to sleep. But, Ash and Dawn werent successfull. "So, you excited for the next contest, Dawn?" Ash asked quietly.
"I guess so. I'm just a little nervous," Dawn admitted.
"Dont be!" Ash smiled sitting up, "You'll do great! Just like the last contest."
Dawn sat up too, "But if i was so great, then why didnt i win?" Ash sighed, unable to answer her question. They just sat there, staring into each other's eyes.
"Uh, guys?" Brock interrupted and the two jumped, screaming. "Go to bed already."
Dawn lay down and thought to herself, 'What was that? Why did my heart skip a thousand beats?' She sighed, falling asleep.
Ash stared at her exhaling and inhaling motions. He wondered why his heart had skipped a million beats. After thinking for a while, he fell asleep.


AUTHOR NOTE: Did you like it? My first fanfic. I hope it was good!

Peanuts97
February 16th, 2008, 11:45 AM
I think if you can continue this in the right way,I'll definately keep an Eye on it....

DawnsAngle12
February 16th, 2008, 05:43 PM
Thank you! I will definitly try to continue the right way!

DawnsAngle12
February 16th, 2008, 06:28 PM
Chapter 2 of Two hearts beat as one

Dawn awoke to the sound of whispering. It was Brock and Ash. She decided she shouldn't listen, but immediatly thought different when she heard her name.
"So, you think you might like Dawn huh?" Brock had said. Ash groaned.
"Probably. What explains the fact of my heart skipping a gazillion beats," Ash replied. Dawn was stunned. She couldn't believe her own ears. Ash liked her? "I really don't know." Dawn sat up and went to Ash. She grabbed his face and kissed him. Dawn deepened the kiss and opened her eyes to see a pokemon. Actually a luvidsc. Why was she kissing a Luvdisc? The luvdisc spoke.
"Dawn. I know your secret. You have feelings for Ash." It said.
"What am i supposed to do about it?" Dawn wondered.
The luvdisc smiled and sloated off, "Just follow your heart. Follow your heart....heart.....heart......."
Dawn screamed and woke up. She opened her eyes to see her two friends hovering over her. "Are you okay Dawn?" Brock asked.
"What? Oh! I'm okay thanks." Dawn stood up and walked away. "I just need to be alone."
"Wait!" Ash was held back by Brock.
"She just needs time," He said. Meanwhile, Dawn was sitting on a rock and playing with her hair.
"Who am i kidding?" She asked a random pokemon. "He doesnt like ME. He's got that other girl. what was her name?" She sighed, "OH yeah. Misty."
The Burmy jumped on her lap and snuggled her. "Your so cute. Thanks for trying to make me feel better. But, i just am so sad. I think I do like Ash. But..." Tears formed in her eyes, "I just dont know." Dawn took off her hat and used it to wipe tears away and sniffed.
"I should just forget about it." She told the Burmy. Burmy shook it's leaf covered head and sat on Dawn's blue hair.
"Burmy Bur Bur Burmy!" It replied.
"I shouldn't forget it? Why?" Dawn asked taking it off her head and placing it on her lap.
"Burmy Bur Burmy!" The Burmy smiled.
"Your right!" Dawn stood, the Burmy on her shoulder. "Ash hasnt seen her in the longest time and who KNOWS what their relationship is like. Thanks Burmy. Bye!" Dawn ran off to the guys but stopped after she heard something.
"Ash, it's not your fault that you cant get over her," Brock said.
Ash sighed, "We've been through so much together. I wish I could just talk to her about this." Dawn frowned. 'He's talking about Misty.' She thought to herself.
Dawn couldnt take it anymore. She walked off and sat on her rock again.


BEFORE DAWN'S ENTRANCE

"Man, i dont know why i keep getting nervous around her. WHy did my heart freakin skip so many beats!!? It so weird. Do you think i like Dawn? I mean, ugh! Its all my stupid fault that i like her so much!"
"Its not your fault you cant get over her." Brock said.
"We've been though so much together. I wish i could just talk to her about this." Ash sighed.
"Maybe you should. It would be the best. Who knows, Maybe Dawn likes you back." Brock replied, his hand on Ash's shoulder.
"Yeah, I will once i see her. Thanks Brock." Ash grinned ear to ear.

DawnsAngle12
February 16th, 2008, 06:30 PM
Chapter 2 of Two hearts beat as one

Dawn awoke to the sound of whispering. It was Brock and Ash. She decided she shouldn't listen, but immediatly thought different when she heard her name.
"So, you think you might like Dawn huh?" Brock had said. Ash groaned.
"Probably. What explains the fact of my heart skipping a gazillion beats," Ash replied. Dawn was stunned. She couldn't believe her own ears. Ash liked her? "I really don't know." Dawn sat up and went to Ash. She grabbed his face and kissed him. Dawn deepened the kiss and opened her eyes to see a pokemon. Actually a luvidsc. Why was she kissing a Luvdisc? The luvdisc spoke.
"Dawn. I know your secret. You have feelings for Ash." It said.
"What am i supposed to do about it?" Dawn wondered.
The luvdisc smiled and floated off, "Just follow your heart. Follow your heart....heart.....heart......."
Dawn screamed and woke up. She opened her eyes to see her two friends hovering over her. "Are you okay Dawn?" Brock asked.
"What? Oh! I'm okay thanks." Dawn stood up and walked away. "I just need to be alone."
"Wait!" Ash was held back by Brock.
"She just needs time," He said. Meanwhile, Dawn was sitting on a rock and playing with her hair.
"Who am i kidding?" She asked a random pokemon. "He doesnt like ME. He's got that other girl. what was her name?" She sighed, "OH yeah. Misty."
The Burmy jumped on her lap and snuggled her. "Your so cute. Thanks for trying to make me feel better. But, i just am so sad. I think I do like Ash. But..." Tears formed in her eyes, "I just dont know." Dawn took off her hat and used it to wipe tears away and sniffed.
"I should just forget about it." She told the Burmy. Burmy shook it's leaf covered head and sat on Dawn's blue hair.
"Burmy Bur Bur Burmy!" It replied.
"I shouldn't forget it? Why?" Dawn asked taking it off her head and placing it on her lap.
"Burmy Bur Burmy!" The Burmy smiled.
"Your right!" Dawn stood, the Burmy on her shoulder. "Ash hasnt seen her in the longest time and who KNOWS what their relationship is like. Thanks Burmy. Bye!" Dawn ran off to the guys but stopped after she heard something.
"Ash, it's not your fault that you cant get over her," Brock said.
Ash sighed, "We've been through so much together. I wish I could just talk to her about this." Dawn frowned. 'He's talking about Misty.' She thought to herself.
Dawn couldnt take it anymore. She walked off and sat on her rock again.


BEFORE DAWN'S ENTRANCE

"Man, i dont know why i keep getting nervous around her. WHy did my heart freakin skip so many beats!!? It so weird. Do you think i like Dawn? I mean, ugh! Its all my stupid fault that i like her so much!"
"Its not your fault you cant get over her." Brock said.
"We've been though so much together. I wish i could just talk to her about this." Ash sighed.
"Maybe you should. It would be the best. Who knows, Maybe Dawn likes you back." Brock replied, his hand on Ash's shoulder.
"Yeah, I will once i see her. Thanks Brock." Ash grinned ear to ear.

DawnsAngle12
February 16th, 2008, 06:33 PM
I spelled a word wrong. So posted it twice. Sorry

Peanuts97
February 16th, 2008, 11:34 PM
Just to say...Use the Edit Button to Edit your Post.

EDIT:Please because I Rated and Read yours plz could you do the same with "The Journey" in pokemon fan fiction! Thanx!:P

Melody
February 17th, 2008, 03:05 AM
With a little work on your spelling and some more effort on details in the story, You could very well be a good fanfiction writer.

Just remember, when writing a fanfiction, to not rush yourself. If you do rush to finish it, you'll end up with something that leaves you lost or just ends too soon for comfort. Keep working and dont give up and I'm sure you'll do well.

DawnsAngle12
February 17th, 2008, 09:21 AM
Thanks guys your all great with advice

DawnsAngle12
February 17th, 2008, 10:45 AM
Chapter 3 of Two hearts beat as one


Dawn finally got a grip and went over to the camp. But she saw a man with blue hair, a meowth and Jessalina. "Are you jessalina? From the contests?" Dawn asked.
"Yeah twer- i mean, Dawn," The fake Jessalina smirked. Underneath, Jessie thought to herself. 'Stupid twerp. She can lead me right to Pikachu.'
"We were wondering," The blue haired man jumped in front of 'Jessalina'. "If you might be able to bring us to a source of water and food."
"Oh, sure! My friends and i are near a river and we wouldn't mind giving you guys some food. Come on!" Dawn brought them to the camp.

"Geez! Where is she!?" Ash asked, pacing back and forth. Brock watched as he ate an Oran berry.
"Calm down, she'll come!" Brock replied.
"How can he calm down?" A voice replied. "He's just the Ash I knew three years ago."
"Misty???" Ash asked. The turned and saw her. The two ran over and hugged her tightly.



"So, this is it," Dawn led them into the clearing. Once she saw the three talking, she regretted it. When she turned, the trio was gone.
"Your Misty, arent you?" Dawn asked. Misty stood and shook her hand.
"Nice to meet you Dawn," Misrty smiled. Dawn nodded. She let go of Misty's hand and walked over to the lake. She saw her reflection and asked it for an answer. 'An answer to what?' Dawn asked herself. Inside, she was sobbing.

AUTHOR NOTE: Wow, didnt see Misty come in huh? Well your not the only one. I didnt either. Well, reply and tell me what i should improve or what you think of it. The next chapter is when they go to the city. And tell me what the name of the city should be also. Thanks for reading!

DawnsAngle12
February 17th, 2008, 08:49 PM
Chapter 4 of two hearts beat as one

"So, Misty, we were going to head off to Aeromask City." Brock told Misty. Misty sat next to the two boys.
"The City of Wind?" Misty asked, "That contest is always hard. I hope Dawn wins." Misty smiled at Dawn. Dawn faked another smile and looked at Ash. She raised an eyebrow at him. He was looking straight at her. When he looked away, Dawn thought she saw a blush. Shaking her head she stared at the ground.
"Dawn?" The sound of Ash's voice pulled her away from her daze. "We're going now."
"OH! Right!" Dawn stood and joined the three as they started to walk to Aeromask City. After they walked for at least an hour, Dawn had enough of Misty already. Misty and Ash never stopped fighting. Once she saw the City, she ran down the hill and entered the Pokemon Center. "Excuse me, Nurse Joy," Dawn got Nurse Joy's attention.
"Hello there!" Nurse Joy responded.
"I'd like to register for the Aeromask City Contest please," Dawn gave Nurse Joy her name.
"Okay your all set. The contest starts tomorrow at noon. Do you need a room?" Asked Nurse Joy.
"Can I have two rooms with two beds in each please?" Dawn asked. Dawn would have to sleep in the same room as Misty the big mouth.
Nurse Joy handed Dawn two room keys. Dawn was pushed away by Brock and dropped the keys. While Brock began, once again, an obsession for the innocent nurse, Dawn picked up the keys. When she went to grab them, Ash and her finger's touched. They looked at each other and gasped. "I got it," Dawn said picking up the keys. Dawn stood and saw Brock being dragged away by Misty.
"Okay, so here's your room key Ash and Brock. Misty and I will sleep in the same room. See you in the morning." Dawn gave Ash the key and grabbed Misty, hauling her to the room. "We have so much to catch up on!" Dawn faked a happy mood.
"So, Dawn, you excited for the contest tomorrow?" Misty asked Dawn.
"You bet!" Dawn replied. They sat on the beds next to each other and watched TV. "I just dont believe i remembered to register this time."
"Your funny!" Misty smiled. "Listen, it's only 5:30. Why dont you and I have a little battle to practice for the battle round." Dawn stood.
"Okay then," The two were outside in the courtyard before they could say, 'Let's go.'
"Pachirisu! Come on out!" Dawn let out her friend. Misty took out her pokedex and looked it up.

"Pachirisu." It said, "The Ferret Pokemon. It makes fur balls that crackle with static electricity. It stores them with berries in tree holes. It also makes electricity with pouches in its cheeks and shoots charges from its tail. It lives atop trees." Misty closed her pokedex and thought.
"I'll use Starmie!" The Starmie came out and yelled its name. "Okay, lets begin!"
"Okay! Pachirisu, use sweet kiss!" Dawn commanded. Pachirisu sent a kiss in the direction of Starmie. Starmie dodged it.
"Starmie, use water pulse!" Starmie sent a dangerous wave of water to Pachirisu.
Dawn thought, 'Well, if Pchirisu can send waves of electricity to the wave, it'll hit Starmie and cause it a lot of damage. I got it!' Dawn pointed to the wave and yelled, "Pachirisu, use thunderbolt!"
A lighning bolt hit the wave and immediatly shocked Starmie. Starmie fell and stood up slowly. "Starmie!" Misty growled, "Starmie use swift!" Stars were sent to Pachirisu. But, Pachirisu was just landing and the stars hit it, making it fall.
"Oh no!" Dawn gasped. "Are you okay? Pachirisu use quick attack!" Pachirisu ran side to side and hit Starmie. Starmie shook a bit.
"Starmie! It's okay! You can do it!" Misty encouraged. "Use muddy water!" A wave of gross mud filled water was sent out of starmie and missed Pachirisu by inches.
"Pachirisu finish this battle with iron tail!" Dawn screamed. Pachirisu yelled it's name as it flipped in a ball in the air and its tail glowed. It hit Starmie hard, causing it to flip and land on its back. Starmie just sat there, unmoving.
"Well. I guess you won..." Misty stared down at her Starmie. "Wow. Great Job! Did you know I am a Gym leader?" Dawn gasped.
"You are!?" Dawn ran over. "I beat GYM LEADER!?" Misty nodded and called back her Starmie. Dawn called back Pachirisu and they walked back to the room. After changing and talking a little, they fell asleep.

DawnsAngle12
February 18th, 2008, 06:36 PM
Chapter 5 of Two hearts beat as one

"Okay!" The announcer began, "Here we are! The Aeromask City Pokemon Contest! Boy that is a mouthfull!" The announcer continued her introduction as the contestants prepared in the back.
"Okay Pachirisu, Piplup and Buneary." Dawn pet her pokemon, "We can do this! We are going to WIN!" Dawn was in her customary pink dress with her blue hair constricted in a hair band. Dawn just knew she was going to win this time.
"First up Jerry!" The contestants went one by one until finally it was Dawn's turn in the appeal round. "And now, Dawn!"
"Okay, Piplup, spotlight!" Dawn threw Piplup's pokeball and out came Piplup. "Okay! Piplup, use bubblebeam!" Piplup shot bubbles throught the air.
"It seems as if Dawn is preparing a special appeal we havent yet seen." The announcer recalled.
"Now use blizzard! Then, bide!" Dawn commanded. The bubbles froze and then fell to the ground, but before any of them hit, the blast of energy from Piplup turned them into snowflakes. The crowed went silent as everyone enjoyed the snowflakes falling slowly.
"Amazing! Dawn used only three appeal moves to create snow!" The announcer broke the silence. "Let's see what the judges have to say."
"Truly beautiful! I love the snowflakes," The first judge smiled at Dawn.
"I agree. The mixture of the moves really caught my eye," The second judge said.
"Yes, the beauty of bubblebeam and blizzard and the rage of bide. A great mixture!" Nurse Joy finished.
"Thank you Dawn!" The announcer waved to Dawn. Dawn called back her pokemon and skipped off the stage.
"Great job Piplup!" Dawn congratulated Piplup. Soon after some other appeals, the announcer told them who would make it into the next round.
"Jessalina, Jerry, Adam, Zeke, and..." Dawn shivered, "Rebecca!" Dawn fell on her knees and felt a teardrop fall.
"I-I didnt make it..." She gulped. Then, she felt a hand on her shoulder and looked next to her. "A-Ash... I-I didnt-" She began. But, Ash stopped her.
"We know. I'm sorry Dawn." Ash tried to cheer her up, but no use. Dawn fell into Ash's chest and sobbed.
"It's okay Dawn, maybe next time," Misty hugged Dawn. Dawn sobbed even harder remembering she was there. Brock also joined in the group hug. After they watched the end of the contest, Jessalina being the winner, they went to dinner.
"Dawn, you didnt eat ANYTHING. Are you sure your okay?" Brock asked the depressed Dawn.
"Yeah, im fine. Just not hungry..." Dawn replied, playing with her napkin. "I am gonna head to the Pokemon Center. I need a little rest..." Dawn walked out fast and sat outside in the courtyard.
"I cant believe i lost. After i beat Misty! She's a gym leader!" Dawn sent out Pachirisu, and hugged it. "I am so depressed Pachirisu. What should i do?"
"Try again," A voice said. Dawn turned to see Ash.
"I cant... I stink at this. My mom is much better." Dawn admitted.
"Dont think that way Dawn!" Ash said, sitting next to her. "I think your great. In fact better than great! Wonderfull and beautiful and-" Ash stopped short , he hadnt meant to go THAT far. "I um..."
"Do you really think that?" Dawn asked looking into Ash's brown eyes.
"Yeah.." Ash replied, taking Dawn's soft hand. Ash pressed his lips against Dawn's. Dawn stood perfectly still for a second. Then, she grabbed Ash's hair and pressed him against her so he couldnt go away. After a few minutes of a kiss, they parted.
"Wow.. that was... awesome," Dawn smiled, eyes still closed. "What about Misty?" Dawn asked.
"I dont like her. I like YOU. She's like a big sister to me." Dawn nodded and put her head on Ash's shoulder. Dawn finally understood the meaning of love.

AUTHOR NOTE: IT'S NOT OVER YET! The next chapter is when Team Rocket comes in. But, their plan doesn't fail this time. DUH DUH DUH DUH!

Melody
February 18th, 2008, 11:05 PM
I stand by my Previous comments and I've noticed that you should also use paragraph format for dialouge like this:
Ash says "Pikachu, Use Thunder!"
Pikachu then looks at the opponent and lets off a volley of thunder with as it yells "Piiikaaaachuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!"

Be sure to start a new line every time you switch characters speakiing. Also keep an eye on your spelling. And easy way do to that is type your fic up in Word and use it's spell check. And PC even has a built in spell checker. Just click the spell check and install it and it'll save you a lot of trouble. (PS, It only works if you have microsoft word)

Finally, Dont hesitate to describe what the characters are doing. Dont tell me with words, Show me with words. Paint a picture in my mind.

Keep up the good work and dont give up. You'll get the hang of it.

DawnsAngle12
February 19th, 2008, 06:24 PM
Okay, I'll do that for now on.But whenever i try to make a paragraph. It doesnt work... Thanks though!

DawnsAngle12
February 19th, 2008, 06:53 PM
Chapter 6 of Two hearts beat as one

AUTHOR NOTE: This is in Dawn’s point of view so yeah. LOL


I don’t know what got into me that day. I totally blew that contest. But I did get something good out of that day. A boyfriend. Ash is really something special once you get to know the guy. He sweet and kind and… Honestly there isn’t any word in the whole world to describe how wonderful he is. I love his jet black hair and his brown eyes. But, sometimes, when we travel… they make me have a craving for chocolate. I bless yesterday and how I shared my first kiss with they guy I really like. Especially when we watched the sunset together. The colors of the rainbow filled the sky as the sun crept away, ready for bed. Well, anyway, it is the next day and I cannot wait to see Ash.
“Dawn?” Misty’s voice shook me out of my thoughts.
Rolling over and opening my sapphire eyes, I saw her leaning down and smiling. “What?” I asked innocently, even though I sort of had a clue of what she was so happy about,
“Oh you KNOW what, Dawn.” Misty started poking me. I slid out of bed and tried to hide my smile. “Come on. You know it was you last night sharing kisses with Ash.” I froze. Oh no, she knew. I acted as if I had no clue what she was talking about.
“I don’t know what your saying. Are you feeling okay?” I placed a cold hand on her forehead. She removed it and raised an eyebrow. I couldn’t take the stare. “OKAY! Fine… I did kiss him.”
She made a high pitched squeak and hugged me. “You guys are soooooo cute together!”
I felt my lungs shrink, and coughed, “Misty…. Cant breath!” Her grip loosened as she let go and started dancing around.
“OH! I cannot wait until Brock finds out!” She giggled and ran out before I could say to stop. Still in my Glameow pajamas, I ran after her.
“BROCK!” She was already knocking at the door. I tried to pull her away, but no use. She was way to strong. “OPEN UP! I HAVE SOMETHING TO TELL YOU!” Misty pulled my hand away from her fist, which I tried to hold at least an inch away from the door.
Brock finally answered the door and I groaned. “What? What is all the fuss about?” Misty blurted out the news and Brock immediately joined Misty in her possessed happy mood. It was sort of scary.
“Ash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Brock said in a very sing song voice. “OOOOOH AAAAAAAAAAAAAASH!” Ash walked out of the room in his pajamas and rubbed his eyes. He looked at my worried face and got the message.
“What is going on?” He asked. Misty went over and giggled.
The goofy smile on Brock and Misty’s faces wouldn’t go away. “Come on Ash. Don’t be so ridiculous. We both know you two kissed yesterday.” Ash nodded and I mentally kicked him for it.
“Come on, lets go,” Brock cooed. After breakfast, we decided that we should get going. There was a gym somewhere and Ash wanted to check it out. Ashhh…….. Ash…. Giggle. Uh… sorry. Lost track of myself there. Where was I? Oh yeah, so we were walking to the next tiny town when a big hot air balloon floated up above.
“Oh just what we needed! Team Rocket!” Misty smirked,
Jessie smiled evilly, “Oh would you looky here! Seems as if the old twerp has joined us once more. We should use our old motto to welcome her.” Jessie waved to James and Meowth. “To protect the world from devastation.”
James joined, “To unite all people within our nation.”
“To denounce the evils of truth and love.”
“To extend our reach to the stars above.”
“Jessie,”
“James.”
“Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of light.”
“So surrender now and prepare to FIGHT!”
“Meowth that’s right!” A long pink glove grabbed Pikachu as it struggled loose. It tried to use thunderbolt, but no use. Team Rocket already had it in a glass case and was flying away quickly.
“PIKACHU!” Ash screamed. Pikachu was gone...

Paladinatius
February 20th, 2008, 05:04 PM
Good Stuff, Dawn is so cool I think it's nice that she's with Ash and not yucky Misty

DawnsAngle12
February 20th, 2008, 05:49 PM
Thanks! I love replies so, reply alot! I love critizism!

DawnsAngle12
February 20th, 2008, 06:36 PM
AUTHOR NOTE: This chapter includes violence and some language. So, yeah...

Chapter 7 of Two hearts beat as one

I went over to Ash as he fell the ground, tearing. Placing a hand on his shoulder, he looked up and wiped away a tear. He stood and growled, "That's it. Team Rocket has gone too far... I will be avenged." His voice scared me a little. Because he seemed to be too angry, I backed off and stood next to Misty. After Ash screamed into the sky, I became worried.
"Ash," I began. He turned and looked at me hoplessly. "We will find Pikachu. Not to worry." I tried to sound cheerful, but it didn't help at all.
"Dont you get it, Dawn?" Ash started to raise his voice, "Whever you freaking say "Dont worry" is when i freaking worry more! Pikachu is far away now and I probably will never find him! NOT TO WORRY? YEAH RIGHT! HE'S GONE! GONE!!! AND ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY IS 'NOT TO WORRY?' I BET YOU SAY NOT TO WORRY BECAUSE YOU MISS YOUR MOTHER! SHE ALWAYS EXPECTS YOU TO DO YOUR BEST AND ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY IS NOT TO WORRY! YOU KNOW WHAT! I THINK THAT'S RETARDED AND STUPID! IF YOU MISS YOUR MOM SO MUCH! GO HOME!!!!!!!!" I stared at him as tears glided off my face. He hit my weak spot. I did miss my mom. I cannot believe he could be so fickle! Five seconds ago he was pumped for the next gym and now he's treating me like dirt.
"You know Ash.... I thought I could trust you... I thought you were my knight in shining armor. But now, you proved me wrong," I started to cry. He stared at me angrily and I moved back. "F-fine. If you w-want me to leave... FINE! I WILL! BUT YOU DONT HAVE TO TREAT ME LIKE I'M A PIECE OF $hit! YOU DONT DO THAT TO SOMEONE!!!!" I ran off and wiped tears from my eyes. Once i got into the pokemart, i bought as many superpotions as i could carry and i ran off for home.
But, i stopped short thinking about how I still cared for Ash. No, i think i loved him. So, walking back the other way i knew what i was going to do. I was going to get him his best friend back.


I finally spotted Team Rocket. They were sitting on the grass, peering at Pikachu. I watched as i saw them hit him and yell. James got out a whip and held it up. I immediatly ran in front of Pikachu and allowed the whip to smack my arm. I felt a warm liquid run down my arm as I screamed.
"Let Pikachu go!" I entreated. "You dont deserve him!"
"Are you kidding?" Jessie smirked, "We spent four f*uc*king years trying to get him, you think we're just going to give him up?"
James took me by my blue hair and dragged me to a tree. He tied me up and places a ring of barbwire around my neck about two inches away. I screamed and yelled, but no use. With my hand and arm bleeding, i called out Pachirisu. "Pachirisu, use thunder to set Pikachu free!" A flash of light appeared and Pikachu was out of the cage. They both used Thunderbolt on the group, and they blasted off. But, only two of them
"You tiny b i t c h..." Jessie walked up to me, "You think your strong enough to defeat me?" She took out a knife and put it up to my neck. She slitted a line on my neck and it bled a lot. I screamed in pain, but she seemed to enjoy that. She placed the blade on my neck again, but i stepped on her foot, making her cut through the barbwire. I tried to run, but she caught be my arm. I screamed as she punched me hard in my jaw and eye.
Before I knew it, I was out cold. I then heard my name being called, "Dawn? Dawn! Dawn wake up! DAWN WAKE UP!" It was Ash. I tried to open my eyes, but i was too weak.
"Ash? Uhh! My neck. Ouch! My arm. My head hurts and my jaw hurts...." I complained. I felt warm liquid roll down my cheek and realized my forehead was bleeding. "Ash! It hurts! Make it stop! OWW!" I sobbed. Ash brought me into his arms and cried too.
"I know, Dawn, I know!" He rubbed my back. My breathing became light and i fainted.



Author's note: Sorry to make it a sad chapter ending, But an writer's gotta do what a writer's gotta do... And that's write! So , BE HAPPY!

DawnsAngle12
February 21st, 2008, 06:10 PM
Chapter 8 of Two Hearts Beat as One

AUTHOR NOTE: This is in Ash's POV


"I know, Dawn, I know!" I told Dawn as she cried in pain. After a few seconds, i realized she was fainted and I stood, with her in my arms and called out Staravia. "Staravia, use fly and fly us to the pokemon center."
After Staravia landed in front of the pokemon center, i lifted Dawn off the bird carefully and ran into the building. There, Nurse Joy gasped and asked what was wrong. "Bring her into the emergency room!" Nurse Joy told me. I took Dawn into the emergency room and there, I watched as Nurse Joy stuck and IV in her arm and took xrays of her everywhere. "She only has a fractured jawbone, a slit in her neck and a bad gash in her arm. But, otherwise, she should wake up in a few hours. May I ask you to leave so I can patch her up?" Nurse Joy asked me.
"Okay..." I walked out of the room and saw Brock and Misty. "S-she's okay..." Misty nodded and Brock sighed.

It was about a half an hour when Nurse Joy walked out of the room and allowed us to go in. I ran in first and saw Dawn sleeping in the bed. There were a million black and blues all over her and she looked pretty bad. I walked to the bed and touched her delicate cheek. It was soft and still damp from tears. I moved my hand to her lips and traced them. I looked over her features and made a mental picture of her sleeping in my mind. How pretty she was when she exhaled and inhaled gently.
"Ash?" It was Brock. "We're going to leave. Misty's hungry and I need to go and talk to Officer Jenny about Team Rocket." I nodded as they walked out. Looking back at Dawn, I smiled. My hand traced on her neck and i stopped as i looked at the slit in it. I frowned as I saw her flinch as i touched it. Then, when i began to touch the cut on her arm, she screamed.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Dawn was flailing around like an idiot. "HHEEEEEEEEELP MEEE! DONT HURT ME! PLEASE! ASHH! HELP! NOOO! NO WHIP PLEASE! NO MORE BARBWIRE!" She opened her sapphire eyes and they were filled with tears. Once she saw me, she sobbed. "ASH! You saved me!" She sat up and wrapped her arms around me. Then, i realized what Jessie DID to her. Jessie beat her. Hard. With a whip and barbwire. BARBWIRE!
"It's okay Dawn! Your safe now. Everything is going to be okay." I told her. She paused.
"Just.. Say you love me," She whispered.
I thought and smiled, "You know i do."
She looked at me and said, "Love me. Ash, that's all I ask of you..." Then, I kissed her and played with her hair. "As long as your mine, nothing bad will happen."
"Just remember Ash... After today. Always. Never stop to Think of me." Dawn said. Then, it hit me. She thought she was going to die.
"No Dawn! Your not going to die! I told you as long as your with me, nothing bad will happen. I will always love you forever and I want you to know that! The person who's going to die is Jessie. She's being put to death because of hurting you. Know this, Dawn, No one mourns the wicked." Then, Nurse Joy came in and smiled at us.
"I'm sorry Ash, but you have to leave now. I have to run one more test on her. I think that the whip used on her had poison in it." Then, Dawn screamed and I hugged her once and walked out of the room.


DAWNS POV

I was in pain. It hurt and I wanted Ash. I dont like tests and i really dont want to die. I sighed as the IV was stuck in my arm and i fell asleep.


AUTHOR NOTE: I never knew i could write sad things... well, that is what happens. The next chapter is the last chapter.

DawnsAngle12
February 22nd, 2008, 05:43 PM
If you like my story, can you reply. Because i like to write more when you reply. It's more fun for me and for you.

DawnsAngle12
February 23rd, 2008, 09:34 AM
Chapter 9 of two hearts beat as one

"I think she's waking up!" I heard Misty's voice say quietly. Then i heard a sigh and a door open. I fluttered my eyes open and saw everyone gathered above me.

"W-what's going on?" I asked concerned. I sat up, but there was a sharp pain in my stomach so i quickly lay down again. "My head is spinning..."

"Dawn," Misty said, "We have to tell you something..." I looked at them half scared.

"The poison in the whip that James hit you with spread throughout your bloodstream. It is impossible for me to get it out," Nurse Joy tried to explain. I raised an eyebrow, unsure about what she was saying.

Brock frowned and quickly said low, "Your going to die..."

"Or you might have a physical disability for the rest of your life..." Misty sighed. I screamed extremely loud. So loud that i didnt hear my pokemon escape their balls.

I stopped screaming and looked at them. "What about co-ordinating! What about my friends! What about my POKEMON!?" I asked all at once. I sobbed hard as i heard everyone leave. I took Pachirisu, Piplup and Buneary in my arms. I hugged them as we all cried.

"Not to worry guys. I wont die. I dont want to at least. I love you!" I told them. I opened my arms and smiled as they clung to my arms.

"Buneary! Buneary!"
"Pachi! Pachirisu!"
All my pokemon cried, but, Piplup was crying the most. It was my frist Pokemon after all. I brought Piplup into a hug and it stopped crying.
"I love you Piplup." I sniffed.

Then, I looked up to see Ash. I smiled up at him. My pokemon went ouside. I was weak. really weak and i felt like a banana peel. "D-Dawn..." Ash tried to say my name, but he hesitated.

"I guess, this is it huh.." I cried. Ash bent down and hugged me. I flug my arms around his neck and kissed him with all my might. He seemed suprised, but eventually kissed me back. When we parted, I leaned my head on his shoulder. "I- I love you Ash,"

"I love yo-you too." Ash wiped away a tear and he looked at me. "I can't believe that your going to leave me.'

"I really dont want to Ash," I told him. Then, Nurse Joy came in with an unrecognizable grin.

"I have just found a way to get the poison out of Dawn!" She cheered. I gasped. "Through surgury, i can inject the poison away from your heart. And from there, I am going to take it out of your bloodstream!" I smiled and hugged Ash hard. I cried harder. But, this time, tears of joy.

"I'm going to LIVE!" I screamed. Everyone came in, including my pokemon and gave me a tight hug. "I love you guys!"

"We love you too, Dawn!" Everyone cheered.

DawnsAngle12
February 25th, 2008, 03:30 PM
Chapter 10 of two hearts beat as one

Dawn stepped out into the bright sunlight outside the Pokemon Center. She had already gone through three hours of surgery and she wanted to see her friends. She spotted Misty and Brock sitting next to a tree talking. Dawn walked over with her hair in a ponytail and smiled radiantly. The two stood and gave her a hug. "I cant believe it's finally over!" Dawn exclaimed.

"I know! I never thought that something like this could happen! But, you lived through it and that's all that counts." Misty recalled. Dawn started to cry and Brock asked what was wrong.

"No, it's just... I am so happy to have such caring friends like you. I love you guys!" Dawn tightened the hug. Then, somebody tapped Dawn and she turned quickly. Before she could realize who it was, lips smashed against her's. They parted and Dawn saw who it was.

"A-Ash..." Dawn smiled.

"Well, we will leave you two lovebirds ALONE," Misty smirked. Brock dragged her away and into the Pokemon Center.

"Ash, I did it," Dawn informed. Ash shushed her and cupped her cheek with his soft hand. Dawn placed her had over his and smiled widely. "Ash.. I love you,"

"Dawn," Ash started but instead placed his lips on her's. "I love you too." Dawn kissed him again and he deepened their kiss. When they parted, Dawn looked over and saw Misty and Brock through the window.

"Typical," Dawn laughed. Ash looked over and raised an eyebow. Then, they turned and kissed once more. The sun set and it was the perfect ending to a perfect story.


AUTHOR NOTE! Okay, it was a short chapter, but it summed it up pretty good. Thanks for reading!