View Full Version : a story about an elephants life

March 3rd, 2008, 11:33 PM
right first things first i did not write this, my 9 year old sister did, and she asked me to give her some feedback on it, of course, i'm a wee bit biased, so i'm gnna ask you lot to post views on it for me.
file is attached below keep in mind it isn't finished yet. thanks