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/Circa
March 12th, 2008, 09:23 PM
This is just a storyline I put together, it's not finished, but I want some suggestions.
Also, some names suggestions would be appreciated aswell.

Storyline:
You start off in Corral town, a town full of wonders and mysterious. This region is ----, a region full of beautiful scenery, large mountains and forests cover three quaters of the region. While the rest of the region has incorperated modern day technology, which is causing havoc amongst other parts of the region. Since technology has been improving, they are searching for land amongst the other parts of the village. They have been sending letters to residents telling them to move, or they'll crush the houses along with the people inside them. The whole region is now in a political/enviromental war. But thats not all, several other dark things ly around in this region. There is another side to the story, a Pokemon side. The Pokemon in this region are fighting over something, something unkown to alot of the inhabitents of the region. Something that looks very small, but can do something very big. This 'item' controls everything and everyone in the whole Pokemon world, and since the Pokemon have learnt to fight against one another the way the humans do, it is causing a major problem. Considering that a major company knows about this small item. They are digging large pools everywhere in the region searching for it. They are trying to learn to communicate with Pokemon but it is doing no good. This region, which used to look like a large resort, now looks like a large dump. Their are construction sites everywhere, and large plains that are now completely flat. But where is this item, what caused all this? And why... That is for you to find out.

Part 1








You heard something outside, it sounded like an explosion. A big one. You run downstairs to find your whole house empty.. Whats going on? When you open the door you quickly close it again, you cant beleive your eyes. Something very horrible has happened, this is no longer a world of Pokemon. It is a world full of hatred and revenge, Pokemon are fighting against each other. But whats even worse, is that the thing they're fighting for isn't anywhere to be seen. You decide to find what your mum left you, it's a small package. When you open it, you realise there is 5 Pokeballs, And another one, containing a Pokemon. You also find a Pokedex, some medicine and a peculiar paper. Reading it aloud it says:"The time of sorrow and death is upon us. The great ones have chosen our fate, and unfortunately for us it is a dark one.The orb of Truth is hidden somewhere on this planet, but we cannot find it. The end is upon is!"Your journey begins...

Part 2:
"Sir, the mining corporation has ended our deal." said a young lady.
"What? Why is this?" the older man spoke with an angry, yet polite voice.
"It seems that they have given up, they think this thing doesn't even exist"
"If it didn't exist, what are we fighting for? Round up the Pokemon, they can work for us now.."
"But sir! That would be.."
"Shush you!" The older man cut the lady off. "We should do it, if we have any chance of succeeding, This whole world is completely ruined, but if we have this orb then we shall make it better, for us that is... So hurry up."
The man turned his attention to the large bowl below him, not a food kind of bowl, but a large pit that was cut by several hunder miners.

Some ideas on the story would be helpfull, I plan on righting a fan fiction on this, which I can follow for ideas on my hack. I will write more up when I get the chance. Because this is just the introduction. But if you want some other information, look below.

Screenshots:
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/1.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/4.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/3.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/2.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/7.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/6.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/5.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/12.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/9.pnghttp://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/8.png







Features:• Many new events.• Dark secrets inside the region.• New scripts for the game.• New graphics (because this is one of my strengths)• Different storylines/sidequests featuring in the game.• Play two different sides.- Help the region.- Help the company (or are you?)


What I need:• Some name suggestions.• Some town suggestions.• Maybe someone who can provide me with a good palette?• An overworld set.

Credits:• Don Patch - Small grass decoration.


• WAH/Peyi - Large TreesThank you for reading!

Night_Blue
March 12th, 2008, 09:28 PM
I have two overworld sets,but not created by me
Its some D\P pokemon and D\P trainers
Do you want them?

/Circa
March 13th, 2008, 01:15 AM
I have the next bits of the story ready, one part is in the view of the hero, while the other is viewed from a major company.

Here it is: (i'll put it in the first post aswell)

Part 1
You heard something outside, it sounded like an explosion. A big one. You run downstairs to find your whole house empty.. Whats going on? When you open the door you quickly close it again, you cant beleive your eyes. Something very horrible has happened, this is no longer a world of Pokemon. It is a world full of hatred and revenge, Pokemon are fighting against each other. But whats even worse, is that the thing they're fighting for isn't anywhere to be seen. You decide to find what your mum left you, it's a small package. When you open it, you realise there is 5 Pokeballs, And another one, containing a Pokemon. You also find a Pokedex, some medicine and a peculiar paper. Reading it aloud it says:
"The time of sorrow and death is upon us. The great ones have chosen our fate,
and unfortunately for us it is a dark one.
The orb of Truth is hidden somewhere on this
planet, but we cannot find it. The end is upon is!"
Your journey begins...

Part 2:
"Sir, the mining corporation has ended our deal." said a young lady.
"What? Why is this?" the older man spoke with an angry, yet polite voice.
"It seems that they have given up, they think this thing doesn't even exist"
"If it didn't exist, what are we fighting for? Round up the Pokemon, they can work for us now.."
"But sir! That would be.."
"Shush you!" The older man cut the lady off. "We should do it, if we have any chance of succeeding, This whole world is completely ruined, but if we have this orb then we shall make it better, for us that is... So hurry up."
The man turned his attention to the large bowl below him, not a food kind of bowl, but a large pit that was cut by several hunder miners.

X-Buster
March 13th, 2008, 03:12 AM
If you Need a World/Region Map Editor? You can Count Me In..!

mistersmeargle
March 13th, 2008, 08:58 AM
My heads not with me today, I'm usually better with the ideas, here's an idea for a town:
Kushu Port (From the japanese word for squid)-Located in the south-west it's main source of income is fishing for Octillery. Once in a while, some fisherman will turn up a fossil and bring it to the Kushu Prehistory Research Lab.

Hellsing
March 13th, 2008, 09:41 AM
Well, the story's pretty good, just, of course, random spelling errors only I care about. Also, I'm pretty good with OWs, but you need to tell me what the designs are like. But who the heck cares about me? xD. ANYWAYS, for a tip on the story, explain more on WHY they would tell them to move. If it's because of the orb, say that the villagers were, like, obliged to excavate for the orb or something, idk. Hope I didn't waste 30 seconds of your life making you read this.

PS
Mysteries, not Mysterious. People might get confused. And it's Lie. but w/e.

Vegeta™
March 13th, 2008, 09:43 AM
Well my the rom im working on is called "Dark Reign" i guess you can have it.

/Circa
March 14th, 2008, 01:08 AM
If you Need a World/Region Map Editor? You can Count Me In..!

Nah, since AM 1.9 i've pretty much eased up on that.

My heads not with me today, I'm usually better with the ideas, here's an idea for a town:
Kushu Port (From the japanese word for squid)-Located in the south-west it's main source of income is fishing for Octillery. Once in a while, some fisherman will turn up a fossil and bring it to the Kushu Prehistory Research Lab.

Thats actually a good idea :p. I might just change the name, and a little bit of the story.
Thanks.

Well, the story's pretty good, just, of course, random spelling errors only I care about. Also, I'm pretty good with OWs, but you need to tell me what the designs are like. But who the heck cares about me? xD. ANYWAYS, for a tip on the story, explain more on WHY they would tell them to move. If it's because of the orb, say that the villagers were, like, obliged to excavate for the orb or something, idk. Hope I didn't waste 30 seconds of your life making you read this.

PS
Mysteries, not Mysterious. People might get confused. And it's Lie. but w/e.

Eh? All I need are overworlds for the hero, maybe blue hair though? :p.
I might improve the story later, i'm more interested in getting the bases of it done.
I'll show a map for the first town later, and then i'll do the route, which will have something to do with the quake :P. And an excavation.

Mysteries/Mysterious, both words. Mysteries is describing alot of things, while Mysterious is stating something. idk.

Well my the rom im working on is called "Dark Reign" i guess you can have it.

I'll add it to the list, when I get five good names i'll add a poll.

Update:
Here are some screens, see how you feel after looking at these:
Note: Photoshop came out reverse, so look from the bottom up.

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/12.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/11.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/9.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/8.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/7.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/6.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/5.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/4.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/3.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/2.png
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj26/CheesePeow/Hack%20Stuff/1.png

X-Buster
March 14th, 2008, 04:08 AM
You cant edit the region/world map image in Am1.9 only the data, you still need to use the tut of Mastermind_X to edit it and I know how..!

Megiddo-san
March 14th, 2008, 05:45 AM
Unless you're mapping it exactly like Kanto. Excellent work so far.

Hellsing
March 14th, 2008, 08:40 AM
Mysteries/Mysterious, both words. Mysteries is describing alot of things, while Mysterious is stating something. idk.


Nah, I know they're both words, just you should've used Mysteries instead.
Anyways, blue hair, eh? I'll see to that..

Oh yeah, and it's believe, but meh. You probably find me really annoying..heh..

/Circa
March 14th, 2008, 07:43 PM
You cant edit the region/world map image in Am1.9 only the data, you still need to use the tut of Mastermind_X to edit it and I know how..!

I'm confused know :S.
To edit the flight locations and names in the map you can use AM 1.9, LU-HO created that function with mastermind_x.
And the image isn't really that hard, i've done it before :S.

Unless you're mapping it exactly like Kanto. Excellent work so far.

What do you mean like Kanto? There really isn't anything like Kanto in the game >_<.
(Except for the insides, which i cant be stuffed changing)
The first town goes downwards to the next route..

Nah, I know they're both words, just you should've used Mysteries instead.
Anyways, blue hair, eh? I'll see to that..

Oh yeah, and it's believe, but meh. You probably find me really annoying..heh..

Thanks for the OW's :D.

UPDATE!
I'm writing up more of the story, but some of this might get you a bit freaked?

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/2717/13gd0.png
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/555/14hq0.png
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8627/15bq7.png
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6444/16dq8.png
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2707/17zo8.png
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/3936/18qz0.png

Don't mind the unmapped areas.
And the last screenshot happened to be caught during some lightning!

Megiddo-san
March 14th, 2008, 08:08 PM
I mean that unless the map is the same as Kanto, you'll need more than A-map 1.9, as X-buster said.

/Circa
March 14th, 2008, 08:10 PM
I mean that unless the map is the same as Kanto, you'll need more than A-map 1.9, as X-buster said.

Ohh. lol
I can change the map easily, flight locations can be done in AM.
But the image is pretty simple to change aswell, i'll just use unLZ.
It's not actually hard :s.

~Wind~
March 15th, 2008, 08:24 AM
can i be a character in this hack?im not a trainer so i dont need a sprite, but heres an OW,

EDIT:OW wouldnt load properly X<

/Circa
March 15th, 2008, 09:12 PM
I've got two names ideas.
I'm actually thining of having them both.
I'm going to make a poll, so check there ;p.

X-Buster
March 16th, 2008, 04:39 AM
Ohh. lol
I can change the map easily, flight locations can be done in AM.
But the image is pretty simple to change aswell, i'll just use unLZ.
It's not actually hard :s.

You can find the Tilemap in 190 using unLZ.GBA but searching for the Tile base, its very impossible, you need to create your own Tilebase using HEX(cyclone is useless for some reasons) and insert it in the ROM and Repoint it..!