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Itzcoliuhqui
March 14th, 2008, 04:55 PM
I want to write a good fanfic that I could make into a homemade fangame. Does anyone have any good suggestions?

Here's a summary (or whatever you'd call this):
Main Character: Crimson; The 12yr old son of Red and Leaf/Green. Turned into a pikachu by a freak accident. Must find a way to turn back into a human.
Major Character: Azura; The 12yr old neice of Blue and daughter of Prof. Daisy. Helps Crimson through training and support. Collects Gym Badges and fills a Pokédex throughout the story.
Summary: Crimson and Azura head to Prof. Daisy's Lab to get a Pokédex. Team Disease invades lab to steal top secret files. Crimson distracts the grunts while Azura and Daisy escape with the files. An explosion from the battle combines Crimson with a Pichu Egg and he wakes up as a pikachu.

bobandbill
March 15th, 2008, 01:13 AM
Hmm... the idea isn't bad - just remember to back it up well, use good descrption, have a good storyline and all those other thing both a story and a game need. How Crimson becomes a Pikachu might need to be a bit less vague as well... (explosion followed by 'oh I'm a Pikachu! seems way to vague IMO). Also, make the character reactions realistic - how will Crimson react to being a Pikeachu? How (if so, that is) will he try to turn himself back?)

Eridicate any plotholes as well in the planning and writing - otherwise they will be quite evident in the game... *thinks of Pokemon Colosseum*...

Don't rush it as well - such a project will take its time to turn out well.

Good luck with your project!