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destinedjagold
March 23rd, 2008, 07:08 AM
well.., I was bored and sad tonight, so yeah, I wrote this little poem.
Hope you'll like it. ;)

tonight's full of stars,
it heals all my scars,
the moon's full and white,
it brightens my sad life,

the air is peaceful and cold,
The shadows are yet unfold,
I walk through it so bold,
It's my story never been told,

I travel alone at night,
with the moon as my light,
and the stars as my audience,
in this roleplay of silence,

this road is endless,
but I could care less,
i walk on this path,
destination is what I lack,

this journey is difficult,
and what would be the result,
of this endless journey of mine,
but meh, I know I'll be fine...

GreenStorm
April 15th, 2008, 02:32 PM
Really good poem! I can't believe no one complimented on this. Touching. =)

Binary
April 17th, 2008, 08:57 AM
Wow, a lovely poem DJG. It's really touching and you can really feel something in it.
It seems as you're telling a journey of life , but nice poem!

melod.ii ous demyx~♪
April 17th, 2008, 10:47 AM
That is a wonderful poem~

I love the idea, and it's so touching ;-;
The third paragraph is my very favorite~ The "stars are my audience" line to be exact.

Oh, it really is beautiful, and paints a pretty picture~ <3
I'd love to say more, but I'm lacking words.

Nice work~
Write more for sure, Des~

Toblerone
April 26th, 2008, 11:54 PM
I really liked that! You should DEFINITELY write some more!