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DavyJones4our
March 28th, 2008, 07:02 AM
Do you fear death? Do you fear that dark abyss?
All your deeds laid bare, all your sins punished?
I can offer you an escape: a choice to postpone judgment that you deserve.
Join my crew, one hundred years before the mast. Will ye serve?

Will ye abandon humanity and fully submit?
Part of the crew, part of the ship.

All your loyalty, to the Dutchman placed;
And to he, who commands the helm.
No longer man, but now a beast,
For malice, and massacring: your identity is replaced.

Will ye have murderous desire with every hit?
Part of the crew, part of the ship.

With a thirst for souls, and with a hunger for death.
Wicked tounge salivates, for malice and sadistic intent.
Cruelty and hatred flow in your veins,
Unforgiving on the sea of evil and pain.

Will ye lose hope and faith for a heavenly lift?
Part of the crew, part of the ship.

"Part of the Crew, Part of the Ship" by Davy Jones

Midori Chi
March 28th, 2008, 06:32 PM
It was cute. XD (Well, I mean that, even through the dark words used)
I felt like the writer was a pirate and I was some kid who wanted to be a pirate. Very fun, with a bit of dark. : 3

Mr.Roserade
April 3rd, 2008, 09:13 PM
My lord, that was great

Wicked tounge salivates, for malice and sadistic intent.<Great word choice

Toblerone
April 27th, 2008, 03:24 AM
Arrrrr, that was good! I liked it alot!