View Full Version : Bring More Knifes

April 2nd, 2008, 3:28 PM
It hit me
like knives
I have no reason to believe
I have no reason to try
Why am i alive?
Why do i want to die?
Why is the stress so painful?
Why are my feelings so numb?
Why do I have to keep trying?
Why can't i just give up now?
It isn't because i want to
I want to keep fighting
keep trying
keep believing
but its just to hard to do all of that now
its too painful to believe for a better tomorrow
that the pain will just go away
because thats impossible.

Hey, i'll see you in the alleyway tonight
and could you do me a favor?
Bring More Knives.

April 2nd, 2008, 9:16 PM
Well...first. It's "knives". XD;

Secondly, it seems like the poem might be about cutting/suicide during the first stanza, but the second ends with either the character fighting someone in an alleyway or the suicide of the character in an alleyway.

Still, it's nice. Could use some improvements, but I'm sure you'll get better. :D

April 3rd, 2008, 2:59 PM
I wrote a sequel to this on Aim and sent it to my friend, but i did not save it.
It was a lot better than this.

*EDITS-I'm stupid*