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mewunlimited
April 3rd, 2008, 09:48 AM
This is a story i have been pondering on for such a long time

its about a secret organization called the pokebandits trying to capture mewtwo.
but unlike team rocket they plan on capturingall the mews.

but mew sends a spirit message into the world before it is captured.

and it happens to meet a boy called tristan and his trapinch.

together along with some other pokemon tristan can save the mews!

But the resenthent in mewtwo has manifested. . .
to form the next legend. . .

il show the story later

prolouge

Night time
A place you will never go

‘Mew!’
‘Shut up you dirty pokemon!’
‘Psywave!’
‘Psychic!’
Wonders shall never cease
‘Boss we have one’
‘Good work men. Lets see team rocket beat that!’
Our world is changing
‘Mew! Help me!’
‘I will! Soul release!!’
‘Get her!’
When champions fall. A legend is born
‘some one helllp’

Jubilife city
A boy called tristan

‘We are going to trash and smash! Right trapinch?’ says tristan
‘Traaaapinch’ answered trapinch

Avey
April 3rd, 2008, 11:22 AM
Best story ever.

It was way too short, contained loads of grammar and spelling mistakes, made no sense and had no effort put into it whasoever.

Write it on MS Word next time and try to make it at least three pages long, with proper grammar.

Astinus
April 3rd, 2008, 12:08 PM
This story does not meet any standards of the Fanfiction section. Read a few of the stickied guides in the Lounge and try again.

Just as a brief hint: It's hard to make a story of just dialogue. You need to add more to this.

This thread is now closed due to lack of quality.