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Cherrim
July 21st, 2004, 01:44 PM
Mrr... I'm too lazy to upload this to DA at the moment, so I figured I'd share it here. XD

Anyway, the picture is of Atemu/Yami Yuugi as Pharaoh... except when he was a kid. Like... little and cute(r). <3 I drew and inked it on paper and coloured it in Photoshop Elements. o.o I couldn't colour gold if my life depended on it. ._. And I'm very bad at inking. *sweatdrops* I like how the lighting on his skin came out, though. =\ Mreh... *attaches*

o_o Constructive critisism, please~

Shana
July 21st, 2004, 01:47 PM
Oh wow, that's really good! I like how you did the shading, but maybe a little more under his chin? Overall, it's a great piece! Keep it up!

TRIFORCE89
July 21st, 2004, 02:00 PM
Yay! You finished it! ^_^

Youre not bad at inking. Although I dont know if whats showing is actual ink or CG ink. Well the non-CGed ones that Ive seen are inked really well. Out of all the CG pics, Ive seen of yours, I like this one the best. *check DA to make sure, he meant that* Yep, Im sure.

As Star already said, the shading is really good. Ack! I cant give you criticism! *thinks* Umm, that gold plate on his shoulder could use some more shading. Will that suffice?

Spirit
July 21st, 2004, 04:03 PM
Lyke omg.Holy cow that is sooo good. ^_^ Excellent Job

Cherrim
July 21st, 2004, 04:10 PM
^_^; Thanks guys~

Star - Gah... you're right, it really could use more shading there now that you mention it. @@;

t89 - =\ I kinda rushed the inking on this because I was bored. I touched it up a bit in PSE, but the main part that bothers me is the thick line for his cheek and the overlapping lines for his chin. XP

edit: Typo that didn't even make sense in the least. o_O;;

TRIFORCE89
July 21st, 2004, 04:15 PM
Your picture was bored? O_o LOL Yeah, I noticed the cheek one, but I can't see the chin one. It's still good though.

Cherrim
July 21st, 2004, 04:24 PM
Hey, I'm tired. ;p *fixed the typo* >_>

*adds something to make this post not spam* o_O;;

I drew this on the plane on the way back from Halifax. ._. I was bored, and the person next to me was listening to ugly music... and there was nothing else to do, so... yeah. Mrr... I don't know what it is, but it looks nifty. =\

TRIFORCE89
July 21st, 2004, 04:37 PM
I probably have more reason to be tired than you do. I have less blood in me than when I woke up this morning. Err...getting off topic. Sorry about that.

Nice umm...whatever it is... umm...feathery birdie dragon type thingy. I like sketches a lot more than "finished" pieces (that's why I never finish any of mine). And I love your hand drawn images much much more than your CG ones. I like the shading of this picture.

Jinona
July 21st, 2004, 05:38 PM
OMG that atem one is soooooo cute I like the way you draw him I couldn't help but smile which I must thank you for since I havn't had much to smile about recently. I really like that little gryph/dragon thingy you did to that looks cute I wish I could draw like you.

Kayleigh
July 21st, 2004, 05:47 PM
Oh wow, those pictures are really nice! I especially love how you drew that bird creature thing. ^_^ You sketch really well.

The only thing that I see wrong would be on the picture of Yami Yugi. It looks like he only has four fingers on the hand that's hanging down, lol. It may have been intended, because usually you can't really see the fingers in pictures like that, if I'm making any sense. It happens to me all of the time.

Anyways, great job!

Teara
July 21st, 2004, 05:58 PM
That lookz really good if you azk me ^_^ I'm not even a yu-gi-oh fan and I thought it waz cute. It'z too bad picturez get that weird edge dizcoloring when zaved, but I don't know if anything can be done about that --_--
Az for the gold, I wonder if maybe making it juzt a little lighter on a zmall part of the gold would make it look more realiztic neh?

But it'z ztill really good and I hope you continue to draw ^_^

PichuSecretBase
July 22nd, 2004, 05:01 AM
I see soem white ness around it which should have been cleaned up. What type of pen did you use. It dosent seem to be very dynamic The coloring is really cute. I like the hands ^^ But on the thing on his right arm *our right* That part for the highlight should have been in a cell look or major contrast to white ^^

Nice shading on the second pic ^^

Anna-chan
July 22nd, 2004, 08:08 AM
*drools* Soooo kawaii-full!!!!! *claps*

Cherrim
July 22nd, 2004, 02:25 PM
Kayleigh - Yeah, it's the style. XD;; I'm very bad at drawing fingers, so I normally cover it up by using that kind of.. style. Mrr... I can't explain it, but I see it in the Love Hina manga, so I swiped it. XD;

PSB - =\ Cell shading never looks good in conjunction with soft shading... well, most of the time anyway. @_@; I do agree that the gold could use more direct contrast between the dark and lighter parts, though. XP

^_^ And thanks again, guys. This is the best feedback I've ever gotten on a post here. :3 *glomp~*

digi-kun
July 22nd, 2004, 03:57 PM
OMG its so goodly...*looks bak at ygo eps with Atemu flashbaks* eh...not too bad of representation good job.