Please Rate My Team

[Cyberboy]

Hey, this is the 1st competitive team I've made (I Know its crap but bare with me please):

Lucario - Choice Specs
Nature - Timid
HP - 6 evs, Sp.att - 252 evs, Spd - 252 evs
- Aura Sphere
- Dragon pulse/ Ice Beam / HP Ice
- Dark pulse
- Vaccum Wave/ Psychic

I think this is almost standard Specs Luke.not sure. Ice beam is only there for if I can't get HP Ice.


Swampert - Leftovers
Natue - Impish
Hp - 252 evs, Def - 125 evs, Sp.def - 125
- Avalanche/ Counter
- Waterall/ Hammer Arm
- Earthquake
- Curse

I wasn't really sure what to do with swampert, I want it to be able to decently resist both speacial and physical attack though.

Umbreon -Leftovers
Nature - Bold
Hp -252 evs, Def - 129evs,Sp.def - 129.
- Wish
- Toxic
- Mean Look
- Baton Pass

Nothing much to say about this one. Can help to heal the team.

Gallade - Choice scarf/ zoom lens
Nature - Adamant
Spd - 32 evs, Atk -252 evs, Sp.def - 266 evs.
- Psycho Cut
- Night Slash
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge/ Swords Dance


Weavile - Choice Band
Nature - Jolly
HP - 6 evs, Atk - 252 evs, Spd - 252 evs.
- Ice Shard
- Night slash
- Brick Break
- Pursuit

Ice Shard always strikes 1st and pursuit if for if they decide to switch,

Dusknoir - Impish or Bold??
Hp - 252 evs, Def - 129 evs, Sp.def -129
- Shadow Sneak/ Shadow Punch
- Firepunch / Thunderpunch
- Will o wisp
- Pain split

Hmm perhaps I should put some Ev's into attack too?

Please tell me what you think, and make suggestions to way I might be able to improve them. THANKS!

[BrainDamage]

Hey, this is the 1st competitive team I've made (I Know its crap but bare with me please):

Lucario - Choice Specs
Nature - Timid
HP - 6 evs, Sp.att - 252 evs, Spd - 252 evs
- Aura Sphere
- Dragon pulse/ HP Ice
- Dark pulse
- Vaccum Wave/ Psychic

I think this is almost standard Specs Luke.not sure. Ice beam is only there for if I can't get HP Ice.

Luke doesnt have access to Ice Beam


Swampert - Leftovers
Natue - impish
Hp - 252 evs, Def - 180 evs, atk - 6
- Avalanche
- Waterall
- Earthquake
- stealth rock

I wasn't really sure what to do with swampert, I want it to be able to decently resist both speacial and physical attack though.

you dont need sp. def since you have dusknoir so run the above set and umbreon who can take special hits, but overall isnt useful as a special wall

Umbreon -Leftovers
Nature - Bold
Hp -252 evs, Def - 129evs,Sp.def - 129.
- Wish
- Toxic
- Mean Look
- Baton Pass

Nothing much to say about this one. Can help to heal the team.

fine i suppose

Gallade - Choice scarf/ choice band
Nature - Adamant
Spd - 252 evs, Atk -252 evs,.
- Psycho Cut
- Night Slash
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge/ Swords Dance


gallade and weavile on the same team is pretty pointless. either one or the other also, never put a non-attacking move on a poke holding a choice item

Weavile - Choice Band
Nature - Jolly
HP - 6 evs, Atk - 252 evs, Spd - 252 evs.
- Ice Shard
- Night slash
- Brick Break
- Pursuit

Ice Shard always strikes 1st and pursuit if for if they decide to switch,

this is what i run on weavile. Ice shard annoys like a bad itch

Dusknoir - Careful
Hp - 252 evs, Def - 76 evs, Sp.def -180
- Shadow Sneak
- Firepunch / Thunderpunch
- Will o wisp
- Pain split

Hmm perhaps I should put some Ev's into attack too? nope

Please tell me what you think, and make suggestions to way I might be able to improve them. THANKS!

changes in bold
dont have time to help you go through your major weaknesses, but there are some basic changes

[Mike™]

I really wouldn't get rid of Pert's STAB move.

Vacuum Wave would be better on Specsluke for things that outspeed him.

No Special Wall = my name is Dark http://th180.photobucket.com/albums/x43/iflip4dolphins/th_Azelf.png, I will now destroy your team, kthnxbai. Or any other special sweeper, for that matter.

[Jimmyray]

Woah, I haven't been here for ages =) Anyways, it seems a great team.

Impish Dusknoir, Bold would minus attack, which is like, no. Definately squeeze Vacuum Wave on Lucario, and finally, could you squeeze a rest in on Swampert?

[Mike™]

Oh yes, Dusknoir doesn't need Attack EVs unless you plan on using a gimmick set of some sort.

[Cyberboy]

gallade and weavile on the same team is pretty pointless. either one or the other also, never put a non-attacking move on a poke holding a choice item



Okay I've ditched Gallade, Can anyone suggest somthing good to take its place?
Does not have to be a physical sweeper can be anything...

[abralord]

Go with a breloom over a gallade. :) i think you should know how to run the breloom.