View Full Version : Dawn, Shawn, that rhymes!

April 9th, 2008, 2:29 PM

Diary Entry of Dawn
June 7, 2008

Tomorrow's is the day. The day, I am going to become a master co-ordinator! And it's my birthday! I'm turning twelve. The next contest coming up was the Juyanback Contest and I am sure I will win. Brock says that I need as much sleep as I can get. Whenever I say, not to worry, he sighs and shakes his head. I've been traveling with Ash and Brock for a while now. I think about two years. It's been great! All those adventures we had and will get into.

Well, Ash, great guy. He's still nice and sweet and is really funny. He says he wants to become a Pokemon Master. I hope he will! He also is becoming more brave every day and sometimes Brock worries about him.

Brock is the brotherly type. He is nice and smart and a great cook! I love his baking so much that i always ask for cupcakes in the shape of Piplup! They're too cute! Piplup likes 'em too. Well, it's late and I really should get to bed. 'Night Diary!

10:12 A.M.
June 8, 2008
Pokemon Center, Juyanback City

"Dawn! Wakey, wakey!" a voice cleared Dawn's dream as she yawned and sat up. Opening her crystal blue eyes, she saw the sun smiling into the room. A dress was thrown at her as she was getting out of the warm, comfortable bed. Which, she really didnt want to leave. "C'mon! Your going to be late if you dont hurry up!"

"What?" Dawn rubbed her eyes to see Ash standing there holding her shoes and a pink bow for her blue locks.

Ash chuckled and gave Dawn the shoes and the bow. "The Juyanback Contest, Dawn! Hurry it up!" With that, he ran out of the room and shut the door. Dawn yawned and put the dress on her bed. It was late, she could tell and she was too tired. Maybe, she should have went to bed when Brock said to. Dawn sighed and walked into the bathroom. She brushed her teeth, did her hair and washed her face. Then, she slid into her traditional pink dress, shoes and bow. After fixing her bow, she shuffled into the hallway of the Pokemon Center.

"Oh, i see your up," Brock's voice said cheerfully. He was holding a tray with a mouth-watering meal. Dawn eyed the meal and tried to control her stomach.

"Er, yeah. I'm up! What's with the meal?" Dawn asked. She pointed to the orange juice, orange and pancakes. Brock chuckled and gave Dawn he platter. "For me?" Dawn smiled. Brock nodded.

"Ash and I thought you might need an energy booster before the contest." Brock informed. Dawn thanked him and began eating at a table. The boys watched and Dawn felt awkward.

"You guys want some pancakes?" Dawn asked. The boys looked at Dawn, then at the pancakes, to each other, then the pancakes, and back to Dawn.

"Yeah!" Ash yelled. Nurse Joy handed them plates and they enjoyed the meal.

11:30 A.M.
Juyanback Contest Hall
Conversation Between Miss Rachel Garwood and Dawn

"Hey, your Dawn. right?" A female voice asked. Dawn turned and saw a Goth girl about fifteen.

"Yeah, that's me. And you are...?" Dawn asked. The girl got out of her leaning on the wall position and uncrossed her arms. She walked up to Dawn and looked her in the eye. She was a good two feet taller than Dawn and quite scary. Dawn gulped and eyed the black eyes hypnotizing her.

"I'm Rachel. My freinds call me Rae. Well, they would if i had any freinds.You've been warned. Something bad is going to happen. I would drink some coffee." The Goth girl backed off and walked away. Dawn cocked her head and raised an eyebrow. She jumped and ran to the coffee stand.

12:00 P.M.
Juyanback Contest Arena
Dawn's Turn

Dawn took a deep breath and walked out on the stage. She yawned and shook her head. Taking out her Pokeball, she called out Pipup. "Piplup! Spotlight!"

"Piplup!!!" The over excited Piplup entered with sparkling bubbles. The audienced wowed and Dawn though, Jackpot.

"Okay! Piplup, bubble beam at the sky!" Dawn pointed up. Piplup raised it's small, blue head and shot bubbles towards the sky. "Now, quickly, use ice beam!" Piplup shot an ice ray and the bubbles froze. They started falling and Dawn yelled, "Now...." yawn. "Use sweet" yawn. "Kiss!"

Piplup shot hearts at the bubbles. The frozed bubbles were caught in the hearts as the floated around innocently. The audience cheered and the judges smiled. Dawn jumped up and then yawned again.

"SHE FAINTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" A man shouted. The silent audience peered at the small co-ordinator and indeed, she was unconsious.

"Looks like the judges are thinking whether to take points off of the faint or to just let it slide. And, the doctors are coming out and examining poor Dawn." The announcer explained.

"Okay, we have thought about it and......." One of the judges began.

To read more, reply! Tell me what to improve! I tried, it's only my second fanfiction.

Post Office Buddy
April 9th, 2008, 4:09 PM
Is this going to be a continuation of diary entries? Either way, you do a good of using the diary.

April 11th, 2008, 11:13 AM
The things that say dates, times and places, just is to inform you guys about that stuff. Dates, times and places :)

April 13th, 2008, 11:45 AM
Juyanback Contest Hall
12:01 P.M.

"We've decided and Dawn wont be disqualified or have points taken off of her faint." The judge announced. The crowed cheered as Dawn was taken on a stretcher to the hospital.

Juyanback Hospital
1:30 P.M.
Conversation between Ash, Shawn and Dr. Jeffery

Ash stood as he saw Dr. Jeffery leave Dawn's room. "So?" Ash asked.

"She's fine, Ash. We just cant figure out what's wrong with her. Whenever she stands, she just faints. Could have something to do with the liver or bladder areas," Dr. Jeffery explained. Ash gasped and lowered his head.

A man walked toward the two and stopped in front of Ash. "Hello, I'm Shawn De Chagny. (pronounced De Shanee) I would like to ask permission to test your girlfriend for Ellanore's Revenge." Shawn asked.

Ash gasped. 'Ellanore's Revenge?' He thought. 'That's the most uncommon disease in the whole world! How could Dawn have that!?' Ash nodded. Shawn walked inside of the room and locked the door.

Dawn's room
1:33 P.M.

Shawn smirked and whispered, "My dear, Dawn. I know what you have. Obviously it is Ellanore's Revenge." Dawn's eyes fluttered open and she gasped. The most handsome person was standing over her.

"Uh... hi..." Dawn reluctantly smiled. Shawn looked at her crystal blue eyes.

'Oh no... not what i wanted. She's gotta be asleep for me to inject the poison! Or the prophecy will occur! I cant let that happen.' Shawn hesitated. "Hi. You better go back to sleep Dawn. Your sick."

"Are you an Angle?" Dawn asked. Shawn was flattered. He smiled and Dawn said, "Okay, Angle, I'll go back to sleep."

"My name's Shawn. 'Night Dawn." Shawn said. Dawn instantly was asleep. Shawn sighed and took out the needle. He poked it in her soft arm and watched the poison sink in. It was done. She could never be a co-ordinator ever again.

A/N: Okay, i know it was short, but i am sick and dont feel like writing. Sorry! Next chappie will be coming soon though!

April 23rd, 2008, 5:19 PM
Sorry i havent been writing lately. i am so busy because my bat mitzva is coming up. I am so unexcited. it gets annoying reading about your torah portion. BLEH!