Untitled - Caution: Some Lib bashing

[Ciera]

I don't know if this is against some rule or something, but I wrote a poem about my feelings. There is some Kerry/Edwards bashing, and some overall Liberal bashing...

The first two lines are twisted lines written by Jadakiss, a Bush hater. Well, lets just say, Im not a fan of Jadakiss...

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Why do you say he blew up the towers?
Why do you call him a coward?

Gimme one good reson, if you would
Or would you hide behind Kerry, if you could?

You stupid Libs, why do you lie?
You say Bush is a murderer, but why?

Clinton's the one to blame for the reconstruction
He is the one who cause the destruction

You Libs controdict the constitution of America
Sadly, that includes my sister Erica

Stop blaming Bush because your life sucks
Maybe youre screwed because you wasted so much

You live in a cruddy home, so? I do not.
My dad did something, and wont be stopped.

Kerry and Edwards have no chance to win
Not if they first burn for their every sin

Bush has brought new hope to many
Conservatives have luck, do Libs have any?

When I listen to the news, I get mad
Liberal television tries to bash Bush, it is sad

I wish I could slap him silly for everyone
But Kerry doesnt deserve my job well done

Just because youre poor doesnt mean anything
Stop blaming Bush, you stupid left wing

I am a conservative through and through
And my loyalty to Bush is true

Election 2004 is very important, get out and vote
Pick Kerry, and to you I leave a note.

George W. Bush all the way
I hope to God he is here to stay

I am Ciera, and I approve this message.

(( I have a sister named Erica, she lives in Akron, OH ^^ ))

[~Ozy~]

*Puts away Anarcho-communist political leanings*

Alright, from a technical aspect this is pretty good. You haver an excellent sense of rhythem in the poem, although I feel your rhyming could use some work. But that could be just me.

Secondly, and all politicking aside, poetry is no place for politics, whatever side you're with. The issue isn't that it can't be done, it's more that you can't support what you say and have it be effective poetry. The essential element of any political statement, debate, or whatever is that you back up what you assert. You can't do that in a poem. Thank you, and good night. *Bows*

[evee]

bush lovers *gag*im a canadian and its so funny how we can see everything that goes on past a invisiblel ine much more clearer then the americans can and its right in there homeland.....im so angry after reading that that i could go on and on and on but in fear of being booted i will just say i entrely disagree with everything. ill take a line out that really struck a nerve

You stupid Libs, why do you lie?
You say Bush is a murderer, but why?

well let's see.....oh i got it probabley because he put more people in the electric chair then anybody else when he was govenour (spelling) of texas and what else.....o i know how about iraq killing mother fathers sons and daughters......i understand this is not ap lace for politice so if you would want to further debate this feel free to e-mail me at atticus010@hotmail.com

however on a diffrent note it is writen with a good rythm and looksl ike you took some time on it.
peace

[Arcanine]

You can't post something like that, it is a Political topic and is bashing (it's going to bring people flamming and stuff).
*Closed*