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BurstX
April 13th, 2008, 01:35 PM
HELLO AND WELCOME TO KAGEX AND ACHA’S (OR ACHA AND KAGEX’S) SUPER SPRITE FACTORY, THIS FACTORY WILL FEATURE SOME OLD COMICS, AND SOME NEW ONES, SO HERES THE COMICS.

POKEMON BATTELERS



Character Bios: http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/codybio-1.png http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/ashleybio.png http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/mikaylabio.png
COMICS:
The Journey Begins pt1 (http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/mycomic1.png)
The Journey Begins pt 2 (http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/comic-2.png)
The Journey Begins pt 3 (http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/mycomic2-1.png)
Now We're Getting Somewhere...Sort-of (http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/comic4.png)
Pokemon Battelers (http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/pokemonbattelers3p5-1.png)
Introductions (http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/comic6.png)
Island Eight (http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/comic7.png)
New Recruit (http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/comic8.png)


CUSTOM MAPS
batteler base http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/pokemonbattelerbase.png
Eight Island http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/eightisland2-2.png
Contest Hall http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/contestarea-1.gif



LATEST COMIC:
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/comic8.png

POKEMON ODD

http://i18.tinypic.com/8ad239g.png
I hope you enjoy these comics, cause I sure as hell don't like how they take so long to make XD

Whatever the perticular comic is rated, from G - PC-15 ratings

Character Bios:

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpt.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpweebo.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpgary-1.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpsam.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpriley-1.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpjeeves.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpmrmecha.png http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa202/burstninja/pokemon/dphunter.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/dpsosguyv2.png http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/keevoosilowette.png

(From left to right)

T
Pokemon: Magikarp, lotad(floaty)
Bio: Usually The Boss of things, accepting only what he thinks is right. His sister is Riley.

Weebo
Pokemon: Oddish
Bio: Has no mouth, so he speaks in muffles. He happly goes along with his friends, no matter how stupid thier plan is.

Gary
Pokemon: Ralts
Bio: Being Sarcastic and Agrevated most of the time, He is the most annoyed one of the group. His best friend of them all is Weebo, since he is the only one who goes along with his way.

Sam
Pokemon: Skitty, cherrim(sunny)
Bio: Extremely rich, and Happy-go-lucky. She can support the group the most, and is always concered about her friends.

Riley
Pokemon: Staryu, teddiursa
Bio: She's the kind of type who will be the voice of reason. Her brother is T, who she must control so he dosen't get in his own way.

Jeeves
Pokemon: Duskull, Chingling
Bio: the Katz family butler, who was sent to go along with the group. He will help the kids, especally risking his own life to save them.

Mr. Mecha
Pokemon: Porygon
Bio: Pokemon scientist and Inventor, He is probably the most handy of the group. MOST of his inventions work like a charm.

Hunter
Pokemon: Bannette(Wicky)
Bio: Sarcastic, Territorial, and sometimes can be emo and go sit in a corner.

SOS
Pokemon: Quilava, Lileep
Bio: Is a Red "Special Offence solider". Always takes any objective and treats it like if he was deactivateing a bomb.

???
Pokemon: ???
Bio: ???

Comics:

Rating system: G PG 14+

1: Cliche and Faggy starters? well, maybe... (http://i6.tinypic.com/82m92ms.png)
2: Freakin' Ghosties (http://i19.tinypic.com/71mddmt.png)
3: An exciting rescue? Nope. Not enough Panels. (http://i15.tinypic.com/82ag09y.png)
4: MEH EYES!!! *Blood Splat* (http://i5.tinypic.com/6lvouaw.png)
5: Blue Scadoos?! (http://i10.tinypic.com/86yxb0y.png)
6: Don't Piss Off Jeeves (http://i9.tinypic.com/6l1uyys.png)
7: You got mail! (http://i1.tinypic.com/7xlvfc4.png)
8: Watch out for the fangirls, Gold! (http://i8.tinypic.com/6xvphg2.png)
9: Lets see what's behind Door Number 2! (http://i2.tinypic.com/85vyxlk.png)
10: WTF IS THAT?! (http://i15.tinypic.com/6ytyrty.png)
11: My Girlfriend who lives in Canada! (http://i32.tinypic.com/34j6m8k.png)
12: The truth that's going on with the weather... or the affair, depends... (http://i25.tinypic.com/72wp50.png)
13: It's poorly made, BUT IT STILL BURNS!!! (http://i28.tinypic.com/2pt5e9w.png)
14: Note to self: Don't make sandwiches for hikers (http://i27.tinypic.com/298pb7.png)
15: Ladies and Gentlemen, I think we have a spaz (http://i32.tinypic.com/eg9we8.png)
16: Life's gonna suck when you grow up (http://i28.tinypic.com/wjgbbb.png)
17: HOLY BAJEBUS! (http://i32.tinypic.com/of9fz4.png)
18: Floating Lotads? 0.0 (http://i26.tinypic.com/2jfbvok.png)
19: Kisuke is a sammich head! (http://i25.tinypic.com/108foz4.png)
20: Fate loves irony (http://i31.tinypic.com/50sffm.png)
21: You rock old man! (http://i25.tinypic.com/23suq0i.png)
22: What Floaty does when he's offscreen (http://i29.tinypic.com/kampm1.jpg)
24: If you value your life, you will not ask (http://i31.tinypic.com/155kvnt.png)
25: The Calmest Way Possible (http://i31.tinypic.com/291yyjm.png)
26: *Scoot Scoot* (http://i28.tinypic.com/2hguz3o.png)
27: Comic References (http://i30.tinypic.com/205eb75.png)
28: Don't Complain About Censors (http://i27.tinypic.com/11l2deu.png)
29: *Punt* (http://i26.tinypic.com/wb9k0i.png)

credits:
sweetsmoochum from pokecharms
pokesho
Tinypic (for hosting)
The Spriters Resource (For sprites)
Tbone (For set up)
Paint
Microsoft Word
My friends (For support)
Blue Guy
Tutti
Avenue Q
Gymleaderlily
Klippy
Photoshop

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
April 13th, 2008, 01:41 PM
News update:

Okay, now that the thread is up, here is why we formed our comics together:

1. To take up less room
2. Make a comic we both make.

it's going to be an eeveelution comic, and I'll be paint drawing my comics.
Burst will be using sprites.

okay guys?

be prepared for updates!

BTW, not forgetting to mention credits for my comic in the old orignal thread:
Located here (http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=119378)

BurstX
April 13th, 2008, 01:44 PM
...uh so hello people, um acha im gonna update your character bos to the new sprite kay

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
April 13th, 2008, 01:46 PM
whatever. I'll get started on my eeveelution comic 1 later.

I'm signing off.
byez.

GreenStorm
April 14th, 2008, 12:14 PM
I like both of them. But try not to use MD sprites with R/S/E or FR/Lg. Other than that, it has a great plot.

BurstX
April 14th, 2008, 12:16 PM
...i dont know about acha, but i dont think that i want to make pokemon ows for every pokemon i need, its easier to just use mystery dungeon.

GreenStorm
April 14th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Well, that would be really annoying. Anyways, I'm looking forward to both of your next comics!

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
April 15th, 2008, 12:32 PM
...i dont know about acha, but i dont think that i want to make pokemon ows for every pokemon i need, its easier to just use mystery dungeon.

When did I say you mave to custom make your sprites?

T_T

Use whatever you want, burst. But I doubt you could easily find Glaceon & Leafeon sprites.

anyway, I finshed the eeveelution drawings, so my new comic will be up and running soon!

BurstX
April 15th, 2008, 12:36 PM
...wat are you talkin about, that was a responce to this commemmt

I like both of them. But try not to use MD sprites with R/S/E or FR/Lg. Other than that, it has a great plot.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
April 15th, 2008, 02:22 PM
...wat are you talkin about, that was a responce to this commemmt

He means we should stop using mystery dungeon in our comics.

simple as that.

As for me, I'm sticking with it. It works better.

BurstX
April 17th, 2008, 10:14 AM
i would like to announce that eight island has finally been finished in fr/lg style, here it is

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/eightisland2-2.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
April 27th, 2008, 06:02 AM
News update and thread saver notice:

Kage has made a new Battlers, and you can except the new odd soon.
(Just as soon as I get up off my ass and finish it XD)

Anywho,
The eeveelutions comic is still be pondered, so please stay tuned for devolpments.

That is all.

OMFG EDIT:

Burt is only 16 panels done, but luckily, I got up[ off my ass and made a comic.

Enjoy!

25: The Calmest Way Possible (http://i31.tinypic.com/291yyjm.png)

Showapool Kwesi
April 30th, 2008, 11:27 AM
It's a good job you both own this.

Because you can both constantly post 1 after the other without it being double post XD

Lol. But good comic.

Not so fond with Battelers.

And you spelt Battelers wrong.

-----------------------------------

Odd is way better.

And in the politest way I can...

I think, Acha would have a better thread if it wasn't joint with your comic.

No offense though.

BurstX
April 30th, 2008, 11:33 AM
It's a good job you both own this.

Because you can both constantly post 1 after the other without it being double post XD

Lol. But good comic.

Not so fond with Battelers.

And you spelt Battelers wrong.

-----------------------------------

Odd is way better.

And in the politest way I can...

I think, Acha would have a better thread if it wasn't joint with your comic.

No offense though.


well one, this big factory was achas idea, so yell at him, and two BATTLERS IS SUPPOSSED TO BE SPELT WRONG!!!...sorry, but people always say it, and it slightly bothers me

Showapool Kwesi
April 30th, 2008, 11:36 AM
Yeh, I realised in one of the comics you explained, "BATTELERS" is supposed to be spelt wrong.

But really, I don't think it is. I think you made a spelling mistake and realised it throughout the comic so made a silly excuse to cover it up in a joke that was really badly written, you could of made a more believable reason for why Battlers is spelt "BATTELERS"

And I wasn't yelling at anyone, your comic is good, his is great. Better than yours, yours is good though, still should have a thread, I just think it lowers the standard of the comics. I was voicing my opinion.

Thanks / Showapool Kwesi

BurstX
April 30th, 2008, 11:40 AM
Yeh, I realised in one of the comics you explained, "BATTELERS" is supposed to be spelt wrong.

But really, I don't think it is. I think you made a spelling mistake and realised it throughout the comic so made a silly excuse to cover it up in a joke that was really badly written, you could of made a more believable reason for why Battlers is spelt "BATTELERS"

And I wasn't yelling at anyone, your comic is good, his is great. Better than yours, yours is good though, still should have a thread, I just think it lowers the standard of the comics. I was voicing my opinion.

Thanks / Showapool Kwesi

...okay for one thing dont make false accusations, battelers is an acronym, but i cant tell you wats it stands for...and sorry for the yelling comment, im in a bad mood

Showapool Kwesi
April 30th, 2008, 11:43 AM
Again, that was my "OPINION" thats what I, "THOUGHT!" is was not an accusation, don't get over excited here. Trying to make a bit of silly drama.

I still think that Battelers is just a spelling mistake, I also think everyone will agree with me, but it doesn't matter.

Can't wait for the next, Pokemon Odd.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
May 19th, 2008, 11:22 AM
Well, I thank you for enjoying the series, kwesi,
but... you shouldn't really bash Kage.
In fact, He actually is the co-creator of Odd.

He even made Hunter, so without him,
there would be no hunter, or Wicky,
and even a hunter storyline right now.

So, thanks for the views, and I hope your enjoy more of the Odd series.

anyway, to end on a good note,
here's a new episode! :D

26: *Scoot Scoot* (http://i28.tinypic.com/2hguz3o.png)

Showapool Kwesi
May 20th, 2008, 07:06 AM
Wooop!

Great episode, I wasn't bashing him I just don't like his comic, doesn't mean its bad. It is just an opinion.

影の鳥
May 20th, 2008, 12:53 PM
wow cool comics!!^_^... i also like eight island!!!

BurstX
May 20th, 2008, 12:54 PM
hurray i finally have a fan woohoo

Silver Destiny
May 21st, 2008, 03:51 PM
Cool comics my favorite is the journey begins part 3...cool sprites!!!

Cobalt36
May 31st, 2008, 03:00 PM
Well, i must say...yeah, Acha did better. i'm sorry, kage, but it is true. His is more developed and flows nicely. Not that your's is bad, but just not good :(.
Can't wait for the next ODD.

Oh, and i DO think Battelers is "spelled right," kwesi.

BurstX
June 1st, 2008, 02:48 AM
well achas should be better, this is like his 6th comic where battelers is my first, but thanks for the comment

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
June 1st, 2008, 05:20 AM
speaking of Odd, I finished up a new comic during this weekend.
now, fresh out of paint factory:

27: Comic References (http://i30.tinypic.com/205eb75.png)

There is a lot of foreshadowing, information, and explanations (not to mention a battle! :D) in this comic. I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

GreenStorm
June 1st, 2008, 05:42 AM
I just read it. Although I thought that you guys stopped because I haven't seen this thread with new posts.

Cobalt36
June 1st, 2008, 08:02 AM
Nice comic! "Sex offenders, comic jokes, and still gay Weebo!" should have been the title :D!!! And, KageX, i wasn't aware it was your first and his sixth; it's good for your first attempt. Maybe you should include more bloody make-out deaths!!!

Keep it up guys, it looks good!

BurstX
June 7th, 2008, 08:26 AM
well im in the mood for an update, heres a preview for the new chapters

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/preview.png

Ridley
June 7th, 2008, 07:27 PM
Hey, I've been meaning to check out this comic but I never found the thread till now...Or maybe I didn't try that hard? Anyways I like the comics. Keep up the good work guys!

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
June 28th, 2008, 12:19 PM
*stops thread from dieing*

I don't think so.
because it's time for...

A NEW EPISODE!
okay guys, this one I don't recommend little children reading.
However, It's not up to the level that "My girlfriend who lives in Canada" was up to.
This one almosts hits the limit.
enjoy anyway.

28: Don't Complain About Censors (http://i27.tinypic.com/11l2deu.png)

BurstX
July 2nd, 2008, 05:38 PM
...well i have good news bad news and somthing random

good news im gonna start a new comic
bad news battelers is over

random news i have two random comic strips in g/s/c style if you guys like it i may continue but im not sure

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/jhotojourney.png

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/burstninjax/ep2.png

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 2nd, 2008, 06:02 PM
OMFG MORE NEWS:

New comic!

29: *Punt* (http://i26.tinypic.com/wb9k0i.png)

Hopefully the last comic didn't leave you guys TOO awkward.

BurstX
July 3rd, 2008, 05:25 AM
...that last panel wasnt ironic at all...lol ill update the first post

[NovaPirate]
July 3rd, 2008, 08:58 AM
KageX, what I find problematic with your comics is that you go to fast. You need to delve into the characters, really show us the history of the town. How do Marina and Jimmy know Cody? What was everyone's reaction, why were Marina and Jimmy there?

Also, work up a bit on grammar and speech bubble placement.

It should go like this;

First comment
Response
Second comment
Response

It goes from highest to lowest, in chronological order. Work on your grammar, capitalization, punctuation, etc. Just a few mistakes, but they bug me. (well/We'll p.s./P.S. cody/Cody)

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 5th, 2008, 07:50 AM
One day late, But we still have a:

4th of July: Potato Salad (http://i25.tinypic.com/k9ccab.png)

There is going to be a new special section for holiday comics.
Enjoy the first of the specials :D

Mitchman
July 11th, 2008, 12:26 AM
AHAHA 27 was awkawrd. But latios and latias thing was...intrsting. In a bad way. 28 now waseven better and that g/s comi kage was XD out loud/

jimsta
July 11th, 2008, 06:54 PM
Acha I would love to know were you get your PMD and PMD2 sprites please tell me. I know it says Spriters Resource but I cant find all(most) there?

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 11th, 2008, 07:38 PM
Click (http://z6.invisionfree.com/Shinou/index.php?showtopic=5)

My favorite website for MD sprites not on the spriter's resource.
It's in spanish, BTW.
But don't worry, all the names are in english.

jimsta
July 11th, 2008, 07:46 PM
Cheers it will help alot with my comic

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 27th, 2008, 06:40 PM
*KAboom*

Hey, guess what? So this factory doesn't keep flipping from active to almost dead, here are these little numbers to keep you guys occupied:

TLT (For all you don't know, The Lengendary Trio).

Okay, it's not what it was before. we got a better layout, and.. just read T_T
(BTW, the characters are not going to be R/S/E heros in Kanto. It's good ol' R/B/G/Y/FR/LG
characters! ^^

So, Here's TLT #1:

1: Red <3 Katrina the Grown-up Hitch (http://i37.tinypic.com/142ak5j.png)

Mitchman
July 29th, 2008, 04:18 AM
Xd pretty funny acha. Pretty funny.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 29th, 2008, 06:06 AM
It's funny how they're so easy to make, too.

2: COMMERCIALS!!!1 :D (http://i37.tinypic.com/2vm7py0.png)

3: Right in the Eye (http://i37.tinypic.com/sv58d4.png)

4: Squirtle? M’kay (http://i33.tinypic.com/2uqoz1s.png)

5: The Porti-Dex Button (http://i36.tinypic.com/5v23uv.png)

that should keep you guys occupied!

Mitchman
July 29th, 2008, 08:24 AM
XD yeah for 5 minutes. But nonetheless its funny. its the porti-dex button! Also hmm that blue sure loves sweating.

jimsta
July 29th, 2008, 10:47 AM
I Loved Pokemon Odd will it still have new ones?

aggrononer612
July 29th, 2008, 04:43 PM
they all look good i dont wat to say

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 29th, 2008, 06:26 PM
^^"

anyway, I found a problem in the pokedex pic, so here is a remake and new comics:

5 (Remake): The Porti-Dex Button (http://i34.tinypic.com/2iql2qx.png)

6: Just walk away... (http://i34.tinypic.com/2d6upds.png)

7: OMFG!!!1 (http://i34.tinypic.com/295u6i9.png)

@ jimsta: Odd is not dead, I'm just fireing off these comics to keep the thread alive.
They are easier to make, and fun to see progress, so you guys have always something
to talk about :D

Mitchman
July 29th, 2008, 10:16 PM
XD De dee deeee! I love it plain love it.

[NovaPirate]
July 30th, 2008, 07:14 AM
I was hoping for a Magikarp. Darn. That would have just been ridiculous.

"When I evolve, I'LL GET YOU ALL!"

C'mon, it's Magikarp, that's like the number one Pokemon for funny abuse. Like kicking.
Anyways, the first couple comics were a little effy, the jokes weren't too funny. But you got back in the groove. Can you ask Kage if he is going to update, considering he hasn't shown up in forever.

BurstX
July 30th, 2008, 07:39 AM
why would anyone want an update from me my comics suck

[NovaPirate]
July 30th, 2008, 09:26 AM
Well alright then it looks like KageX is being a wimp for the time being so yeah.
If you post a comic, expect to get crit, can't take crit, then don't post your comic. Honestly, you're a pretty darn good spriter, just work on a plot and minor grammar issues and you'll be about as good as Acha, if not better. No kid.

You have good ideas, you just need to refine them. Trust me, my comics were .jpeg TUP comics with Red and Blue as main characters. I know I still can't keep a comic running, but I've practiced for probably about three years and I've grown a lot. You might want to go on an official hiatus, and practice comic making. Not all comics need to be posted. Unless you're really happy, most comics are just for practice. NovaPirate signing out. :]

Edit;
Acha, don't get sucked into a PokeChow copy. Please don't.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 30th, 2008, 10:04 AM
;3810670']Well alright then it looks like KageX is being a wimp for the time being so yeah.
If you post a comic, expect to get crit, can't take crit, then don't post your comic. Honestly, you're a pretty darn good spriter, just work on a plot and minor grammar issues and you'll be about as good as Acha, if not better. No kid.

You have good ideas, you just need to refine them. Trust me, my comics were .jpeg TUP comics with Red and Blue as main characters. I know I still can't keep a comic running, but I've practiced for probably about three years and I've grown a lot. You might want to go on an official hiatus, and practice comic making. Not all comics need to be posted. Unless you're really happy, most comics are just for practice. NovaPirate signing out. :]

Edit;
Acha, don't get sucked into a PokeChow copy. Please don't.

?
pokechow copy?
um.. k sure.
I'll make sure I don't make it similar to that...
is it because of the slowpoke or something?

[NovaPirate]
July 30th, 2008, 02:30 PM
Yeah, the Slowpoke was getting me worried. But I have faith in you not to pull that off.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 30th, 2008, 03:21 PM
Don't worry, slowpoke never going to be a pokey clone.

anyway, new comic:

8: Pop Goes the Shellder (http://i34.tinypic.com/5n29s3.png)

[NovaPirate]
August 1st, 2008, 07:30 AM
Are they gonna become best friends? Because that seems like a stunt you wold pull.
Of course, this is somewhat reminiscent of that one Pokemon episode where stupid Larvitar kills all the Shellder but one and then POOF. Slowpoke evolves.

This is a very long fishing hole seen. I've never seen a comic with fishing this important.
Nao dun forget to update Odd, or to finish Odd.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
August 1st, 2008, 01:40 PM
;3816355']Are they gonna become best friends? Because that seems like a stunt you wold pull.
Of course, this is somewhat reminiscent of that one Pokemon episode where stupid Larvitar kills all the Shellder but one and then POOF. Slowpoke evolves.

This is a very long fishing hole seen. I've never seen a comic with fishing this important.
Nao dun forget to update Odd, or to finish Odd.

noa dont you worra,
Odd will be updated soon.

and yesh, everyone becomes bestie friends magically.
because I said so :D