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Fire Eagle 2010
April 17th, 2008, 03:52 PM
I don't care how it is, I just wanted to make a peom and post it on here for you guys can see, so here it is.

When I was rejected that day,
It reminded me when I was in that section again.

I was feeling affection but I think it’s a collection to me,
When I was having a connection with her, it went to the other direction.

When I was thinking of her everyday,
It felt like I had an erection blowing up because she was fine as hell.

When I went to the doctors, I thought I had an infection,
So the doctor came in and gave me an inspection,
When it was done, I was in perfection but,
The doctor said that I have to use protection.

I told him to look in the reflection and pick the selection,
When I went back, I wasn’t having a recollection, I was having a resurrection.

Mr.Roserade
April 17th, 2008, 06:04 PM
The beginning of the poem wasnt that bad. But torwards the end it made me geek out bro, thanks for making me smile. Maybe you should just try to write funny poetry?