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destinedjagold
May 4th, 2008, 07:57 AM
I am a bit bored, so I made this poem...
It's kinda not like a poem, though, since it doesn't rhymn...
But oh well... I hope you'll like it. :3


Tonight,
I'm lying on my bed,
looking up the moon,
and the stars,

The sky is so clear,
and the night is so peaceful,

But then...
I realized...

MY GOD! Where in the world is the CEILING!?

Binary
May 10th, 2008, 12:27 AM
Looks like you're really in a poetry mood XD
It doesn't rhyme but it's a nice poem. I like it, especially the last part 8D

Alli
May 10th, 2008, 08:07 AM
Peaceful...

Then...

BAM!

Nice. But you know, poetry doesn't have to ryhme. :D