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destinedjagold
May 4th, 2008, 08:15 AM
again, I'm bored, but I hope you'll like this poem, and this time, it rhymns. :laugh:


I can see the water,
flowing down the river,
if love comes to a teenager,
then out comes a love letter,

so if you receive a love letter,
hide it well from your mother,
if caught, she'll tell your father,
dead comes your lover...

:P

Jak
May 4th, 2008, 03:11 PM
xD

That's great.

Although, I think my mom would have a go at my boyfriend rather than my dad.

I love eet. <3

Toblerone
May 8th, 2008, 11:58 AM
Me too! Nice poem, i liked it!

Binary
May 10th, 2008, 12:37 AM
The peom is great <3 The first two lines don't really relate with the poem though...
But this really teaches us a lesson, lol.

Superjub
May 10th, 2008, 02:50 PM
The poem is funny yet good. Your father will kill your lover XD
I doubt my dad would do that, unless he killed a family relative or something.
Funny yet excellent.

Tamaki
May 11th, 2008, 03:25 PM
Aww, that's sweet :3 You're a good writer~