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Đ a r κ
May 9th, 2008, 04:13 PM
Homecoming Exodus

Deep within the hidden leaf forest lie secrets of past events. Some, worthy of being remembered honorably, while others are dreaded by the thought. One story, in which the forest protects, is the tale of six shinobi whom consumed their time into researching a process to gain power. After four years, they crossed a potion that would grant them titanic power. They then looked to one of their female members to obtain the ingredients from her clan, who, at the time were the best location for finding additives. Now in possession of the correct ingredients, the six carried them to the hidden leaf forest, where they would commence with their process, but before they were able to add the last piece of the mixture, they were ambushed by the Anbu black ops, who stopped their operation. It seems that one of the members of Kango, the clan the girl was apart of, had reported that the six shinobi had been acting suspiciously, and using odd factors for some type of potion.

After a couple days of confinement, the group was escorted by the Anbu to the Third Hokage. He had explained the situation and gave them two choices, to either go to prison for ten years, or leave Konoha, and never to return. They had chosen to leave entirely, and so they packed their belongings to leave. Once ready, they were taken to Konoha's gates, where they began their exodus. It had been a while since leaving, but the kunoichi who obtained the ingredients had been attacked by quilt, so much that she ran back for Konoha, the other five, allowing her to leave without second thoughts. As she entered the gates, she was stormed by the Anbu yet again, being tied, and taken back to the Hokage. The girl had explained her situation and how she would rather spend time atoning for her crime than hide from it. The Third had hailed pity on the girl after realizing her strength in leaving her friends who walked down a bad path, and instead, took the right, and decreased her time to five years.

Through those five years in jail, Kagetsu (the girl) endlessly thought of her betrayal on her friends, who she spent the best and worst times of her life with, but on that final day in prison, the guard had taken her to a room inhabited by an old man planted on a wooden chair with a box on his lap. Kagetsu sat upon the chair facing the man and awaited his words. The elder handed her the box and explained that she would be the last member of Kango very soon, for Kagetsu and the elder were the last living members, but he was expected to die fairly soon. The reason for this decrease in the people on Kango was due to an attack from rouge ninja who also stole ingredients for the potion that Kagetsu and her friends attempted long ago. Once the box was opened, Kagetsu noticed that it was her family's secret to a forbidden jutsu, but the thought of being the last of Kango haunted her mind completely.

The day of Kagetsu's release was a breath of fresh air. Though, all she thought of was that she was the only one of Kango and could be targeted by the rouge ninja, whether they truly were her friends or not, but she took her necklace that the elder gave her, and walked onward into the new world.

-Role-

In recent days, reports have sprouted, announcing that sightings of strange figures outside of Konoha are circling the village at mid-night. It's unaware of the situation, but precautions are slowly being taken to withstand an ambush from enemies, but until there is proof of enemy plans, the event will not be dealt with dramatically. For the moment, The Fifth Hokage has given two genin teams the mission to search the area where people have seen these "shadows", as they are seen to the witness'. You are a member of one of these teams, your mission has been stated and you are to head out immediately.

-Spots.-
[Team leaders will be explained once things get rolling.]

[Reservations]
1. Kansas

Team Yamiyo
C//I [ Yomosugara Gingitsune]
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Team Riki
Narutard [ Kyouka Byakko ]
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Name: Yomosugara Gingitsune

Age: 14

Gender: Male ♂

Personality: Yomosugara, usually being called "Yomo", is an amazingly quirky person, his mood possessing the abnormality of going one way or the other depending on the situation at hand. When events that give Yomo the sense of happiness, he can be a fairly lighthearted human-being. Although, when an unfortunate event appears, forcing Yomo to be angry, he will be the most wicked beast on earth. With this feature, Yomosugara can also be a quite comical character, being both witty and zany. He generally prefers the night rather than the day. Yomo loves that during the middle of the night, the streets are unpredictable. There are so many possibilities, such as whether there will be noise, or just silence, someone waiting around the corner, or just a wall. The possibilities are nearly endless through his eyes.

Description: Lets begin from top to bottom. Yomo's dark brown, straight, and glossy hair rains over his forehead, the ends reaching over his eye brows. Upon his sleek face are dark brown, semi-beady eyes, a baby-like curved nose, and his ears hidden by his hair. As well Yomo's skin tone is a light brown. Over his decently built chest, Yomo wears a white T-shirt with a Fennec's tail curving upward. Over the shirt, Yomo has a collared, and buttoned, short-sleeved jacked. This jacket has blue lines stretching in a nearly graph-like pattern, with white marks between the gaps appearing almost as one would view a star in the night. Yomo's pants are dark black, covering most of his blue ninja shoes.

-Ninjutsu-

1. Ensho-no Jutsu (Heat Wave Jutsu) [ Yomosugara combines the heat stored within his body with his chakra. He then exerts the heat through the palms of his hands in waves of heat that reach throughout the area for about ten feet.]

2. Hottosupotto (Hot Spot) [ Yomo creates a nearly invisible circular sphere where if the enemy comes within three feet to Yomo, they will begin to become hot, the longer they stay in, the more chance of gaining risky burns.]

3. Kaon Hirameki (Heat Flash) [As Yomo touches areas on the earth, he places bomb-like flames signaled to burst into the air with fire once he performs the correct seals]

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-Taijutsu-

1. Enkou Hira (Flame Palm) [ Yomosugara motions the heat in his body to his hands and begins to attack the opponent, leaving slight burns on their body. The more hits in the spot, the more the burn will increase. ]

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History: Yomo's sister Byakko, she is one of the Gingitsune clan's most talented prodigies. Byakko's talent nearly exceeds the clan's leader. She has proven the ability to perform the clan's most difficult techniques with ease, and with great effectiveness while also using them in an elegant manner. As well, she is able to create brand new techniques in which only the most talented ninja seem to be possible of performing. With all of this fame, Byakko has formed one large shadow for Yomo to hide behind. Due to his sister's superiority, the clan members believe that Yomo should be just like her, talent wise. The only issue, is that Yomo has yet to even perfect the most simple jutsus that the clan created. Though Yomo has appeared to be the opposite of Byakko, he has the ability to do amazing techniques, but he doesn't yet understand how to control that amount of power since all of his teachers believe that he doesn't need such simple training. Although, Byakko does try to help her brother at times, being the only one who understands him, she trains him to control the fire element within him and be able to focus it around his body and then exert it out. Byakko has even been training him to use a new technique only known to her, and Yomo. She plans on having Yomo introduce the amazing technique once he perfects it to prove himself to the clan.

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Name: Gingitsune

Description: The Gingitsune clan is known, mostly for it's wealth in furs, creating coats upon many other clothing and items. As well, clan members are quite fond of using fire based attacks. Although, in this clan, some jutsus are only accessible through meeting a certain level in their training. The members of this clan are able to store heat within their bodies and then exert them to attack.

Bloodline: Eibunni (Emperor's Hearing) [ User is able to hear the most silent of noises, even things walking on sand ]

Technique: Enkou Hira (Flame Palm), Ensho-no Jutsu (Heat Wave Jutsu)

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1. All PC Rules Apply
2. All RP Forum Rules
3. No God-Modding
4. No Character/Techniques Resembling ones from the Anime/Manga
5. Once The RP Begins, No More Sign Ups At All Unless Another User Must Leave Entirely. If This Occurs, PM Me Your Sign Ups.

N-XIGE
May 10th, 2008, 02:35 AM
Name: Kyouka Byakko, meaning Mirror flower White tiger.


Nickname: Spiked Jizo

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Height: 6’3 feet

Weight: 57kg

Appearance: Kyouka is an average height Genin. He happens to be wearing a navy blue sleeveless top virtually all the time, with his a ying yang sign at the behind; at the centre. His White hair is kept in a neat undercut shape such that he has a long ponytail falling down his back. His light-blue eyes are slightly hidden by his hair. Below, he wairs a pair of navy-blue trunks that have blue fire markings on them. Below this leads to series of undue bandages wrapped round his left thigh, beneath, the custom blue ninja sandals. His palms are covered by gloves that reveal his fingers.

Personality: Kyouka is a tiger with an attitude, based on his personality, he is a person not to be around as his outermost appearance scares others way; what he would like to call “a precaution warning”. Kyouka has a cold sadistic mind that is interested in seeing others get harsh judgment, perhaps this was meant to make him more of a Jashin, or better yet a real Shinobi, it is quite uncertain. Kyouka’s personality is like a horned shell which retains a butterfly inside; scary on the outside but nice on the inside. People close to Kyouka may not like him until he considers them friends, which is when he hangs around like a normal kid.


Rank: Genin

Fighting Style: The Byakko clan’s “Art of the White Tiger”. A unique style of fighting common only to these people, it involves some specific features like fighting on all fours and is commonly associated with fighting the opponent ruthlessly in a situation whereby the you are regarded “Invisible”

TAIJUSTUS:

Jutsu Name: Byakko Rendan (white tiger combo)

Requirements: C-Ranked
Description: The RPC first creates a mist, fog or smoke with or without jutsu and then begins this move. He launches out at the enemy in a guise of being invisible; fighting ferociously in a thick fog, giving the opponent a series of punches and kicks.
By the time the fog is dispersed, the person would either be hidden or have escaped.

Byakkotsuga
Description: This is a swifter version of Byakko Rendan with more differences...as Byakko rendan, this is done in an "invinsible" situation, but instead each attack is an effort to keep the opponent bound in ropes or bandages.


GENJUTSUS:
Jutsu Name: Eye of the White Tiger; Revelation of Death. (Literally, He cant use this move yet!)
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Requirements: Stage 2.
Description: Once the genjutsu has begun, the target would see only a sensation of bright white light…nothing else but a total area of white light. Now, the target is actually in his normal environment, but he/she cannot see nor feel anything but light. Soon, the target hears the words; “you are moving towards the light”, it is repeated twice and then 2 eyes appear; the actual eyes of the genjutsu user…of course, the target can now see himself in his normal environment through the eyes, and then there is blood scattered around, the target sees himself dead on the floor; he is now dead. The jutsu is actually logical, but dangerous…when the target cannot see anything real, the Byakko says the latter words to him three times as he himself is staying in a comfortable spot quite far away from reach of the target, preferably sitting on a tree branch, aiming the foe with either an arrow or spear, once the target can see his eyes, he would put a large amount of charka into his hands and the weapon begins to crack with lightning, once satisfied with his aim, he would release the arrow, which would move at an incomparable speed like that of a bullet, and it blocks any survival chances.
This jutsu is known as the Byakko’s greatest genjutsu, but yet, it can be evaded; the secret to its evasion is known only to those who have seen it kill before; it is logic, a good timing shunshin technique would help to disappear in an instant so that the arrow or spear misses the target.


NINJUTSUS:


Ryujinjakka - (Flowing Blade/fang like Flame)


Kiri Gakure no Jutsu (Hiding Mist Technique)
Name: Kiri Gakure no Jutsu, literally "Hiding Mist Technique"
Type: D-rank, Supplementary
This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, causing anyone within to lose the advantage of sight.



The Ten spirits of the tiger
This tecnique allows him to possess 10 bodies at once, 9 beings clones and the last being him, each of these clones excluding himself take different appearasnces, but never the less, are clones.

Ni dai senbon
The handseals for this technique end in Tiger, and immediately, two flute sized needles fly at the opponent.
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The Byakko Clan (The White Tiger Clan)

BLOODLINE HISTORY:
Speculations surrounding this clan suggest that this tribe was once a group of hunters who practiced forbidden justu with the aim of adapting, or better yet, surviving in the harsh environmental forces in the thick black forest. Living in the dark, they were not enlightened in any form to civilization, and so, their existence has been a secret which began to unveil about 20-40 years ago. This clan inherited some curses as a result of the forbidden justu practiced by their ancestors, perhaps, this is one of the reasons why among others, they are referred to as the “Cursed Hunters”.
Their maximum potential is well known among themselves, implying that, there are no remaining secrets in this clan that are yet to be unveiled to mature members. They are hunters in the making, their metabolism is such that they can live, and survive in the wild under almost any climatic condition. That aside, they are also known for mass killings in the forest, the secret behind their blood lust is the fact that they are faithful “Jashin” disciples. Jashin; meaning wicked heart, is a religion that encourages killing; sparing lives is a sin.
For about 25 years now, the clan has started to move into villages, and illiteracy has started to become a thing of the past, as village-based members have begun to move the clan towards civilization; it would not be easy.

Specific details:
Note that both male and female undergo the same metabolisms
- There are stripes (seals) on specific parts of the body: two on each side of the cheek from the lower jaw almost to the nose, six on each arm; two between the hand and the elbow, three between the shoulder and the elbow and one on the shoulder, two big stripes on each side of the back starting from the side almost to the spinal cord, two on the thigh, and two on the leg; between the foot and the knee.
- They have long white hair: Being born into the Byakko clan subjects you to white hair; it is unconditional, compulsory, from birth. They are born with, silvery-white hair and are subjected to letting it grow with cutting it.
- They have sharp, long canine teeth: Their canine teeth are relatively sharp and long compared to normal human beings.

Hidden features:
- Their Blood is toxic: This clan’s activities and body metabolism changes affect the cells in the blood tissues, such that when the blood is exposed, as it becomes dead and mixes with other impurities, it becomes a lethal poison. This could also be the reason behind the name “Cursed Hunters” as whichever animal drinks their blood will die.

NOTE: The Byakko bloodline can only be transferred through birth from either male/female parents.

AS A BYAKKO, THR RPC IS SUBJECTED TO A FEW STAGES IN LIFE

STAGE 1:
This is the very first stage, and it occurs right from birth. Immediately the child is born, black stripes begin to appear on his skin at specific parts. This process takes 10 years to complete as it is drastically slow, in fact, the stripes may not be visible till the child is about 2 years old. The stripes do not appear one after the other, they appear at the same time but would be very faint at first, and may resemble a dirty part on the child’s skin. And so, a child who is below ten years of age is referred to as an underling, once this stage has been completed, he is referred to as a hunter/tiger, this stage is compulsory, and the stripes remain forever.

STAGE 2:
This is the second stage and it is temporary, it is mostly called the coming of age test. Whoever has not ascertained such a level can be spoken to anyhow by anyone who is considered a hunter/tiger. This stage takes a fast process; as it takes place in a matter of a bout 2-3 minutes (about 3 sentences). It can only take place when there is great need for survival instincts to survive. Once life is threatened, adrenaline has pumped and there is great need for survival instincts, the stripes on the person would glow dark red, and a magnificent thing would happen; the individual would begin to change, his long white hair would extend longer than it was, his nails would extend to sharp claw-like nails, his canine would project 3cm forward, stripes would yet stretch, straight hairs/furs would begin to sprout out of his/her skin, and his face would take a distinct tiger look. And apparently, his senses are sharped.
There is need for more charka; and so, the seals release the 10 years worth of slowly stored survival charka; this is the reason for the above change. The RPC would begin to release more charka than he can use; and the character begins to convert the charka to aid his speed as this level is meant for escape in order to survive. The charka would finish definitely, and so the currently utilized charka is sealed to allow more charka generation. Yet, there is a problem; too much utilizable charka is generated, and so, the persons systems would inevitably release sealed charka to allow more flow and regeneration, and it is unnoticed that stamina is heavily decreasing. Once this has been repeated for about four-five times (within1hour, 4 paragraphs) the person would gain control over his systems, given him the choice to stop the cycle, and relax, so that stamina is regained, or pressing on. Once he refuses to stop the flow, his stamina loss becomes revealed and each foot step on the floor is heavy and painful, the cycle cannot be stopped now, it would go on for another four to five revolutions, once that has been achieved, the character becomes immobile…that is why this level is also referred to as “ The Last Resort”, as it was meant to be used as a getaway, to cling unto life, once this stage has achieved once or twice, the person can allow it to take place at free will. {It takes a lot of time to regain lost stamina and energy}

Đ a r κ
May 10th, 2008, 05:42 AM
@Narutard: Wow, I like it, but there are a few problems. The first one is the age, it's 13-16 years. Also, the Jujin Bunshin seems a tad too similar to Kiba's "Man Beast Clone". I'll have to ask you to change it so it doesn't break rule#4 xB
This isn't necessarily an issue, but I find the area about the toxic blood to be unnecessary. I mean, if your character starts to bleed during a battle, it would be quite unfortunate for someone to become poisoned out of randomness. I wont make changing that important, I just found it a little odd.
I believe that is all I found wrong with your sign up, so please correct the mistakes.

N-XIGE
May 10th, 2008, 06:08 AM
Before I edit it i wanted to say somethings...
I actually made the char as an academy student o a different forum, so I actually edited rank but forgot age...

And, you say you want completely new techniques? Cos the one you are
against is not only particular to kiba, i'l still change it.

And about toxic blood, on the forum where I made this, I needed alot of detail, and since the clan is called the surviro clan "Cursed hunters" I wanted it like they were made for the wild...as predators...drink theor blood and die.

Ive edited it.

Đ a r κ
May 10th, 2008, 07:39 AM
I guess that makes sense ;o

Accepted

N-XIGE
May 10th, 2008, 08:10 AM
I don't think this RP will kick in soon, cos people wont like making clans...

Kansas
May 12th, 2008, 01:57 PM
EEEEEE heres my reservation for now....

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