Criticize my team?

[-Hikari-]

I only have two badges and I have not reached up to the third badge yet. Plus my recently obtained Ponyta needs some more training before I go up to that. I take my time and try to train my Pokemon for the Elite Four and the Champion, plus the stuff afterward. I also like battling against friends and such so training is a big thing for me.

If you see any major weaknesses in my team or any other problems they may have please tell me in a way that I can fix and rethink my team. Give me ideas to fix them too please! Please note I did not hack any of these Pokemon and have either caught them myself, traded for them, or have been given them my Prof. Roan. I am raising this by myself without an Action Replay.

I AM NOT trading any of these Pokemon do not ask. They are my Gym and Elite Four battling team.

Team:

Prinplup (Piplu) lvl 24
Water Type
Item: Shell Bell
Moves: Bubblebeam, Peck, Pound, Water Sport

Luxio (Sii) lvl 24
Electric Type
Item: Quick Claw
Moves: Spark, Tackle, Bite, Charge

Staravia (Star) lvl 24
Normal/Flying Type
Item: None
Moves: Wing Attack, Tackle, Quick Attack, Double Team

Roselia (Dewie) lvl 24
Grass/Poison Type
Item: Poison Barb
Moves: Mega Drain, Cut, Absorb, Stun Spore

Kadabra (Auber) lvl 24
Physic Type
Item: Cleanse Tag
Moves: Confusion, Miracle Eye, Hidden Power, Psybeam

Poyta (Blaze) lvl 22
Fire Type
Item: Exp. Share
Moves: Ember, Tackle, Stomp, Tail Whip

Trainer:
IDno: 35956
Name: Hikari
Money: $48716
Pokedex: 57
Score: 1498
Time: 18:10
Adventure Started: May 03, 2008

[watery-wonder]

that a good team, its similar to my team: torterra, luxray, staraptor, lucario, gastrodon, and rapidash

[Oniko]

I'm not asking you to trade for anything, but if you'd like to trade to evolve your Kadabra into Alakazam, I can help you out a bit.

It seems like the basic starter team, which covers most of the elements. They really don't give you many options at the beginning without having outside help, which I can offer some slight assistance if you'd like...

I'm a breeder, so if there's a Pokémon you need, lemme know, I'll give you an egg. I'm always ready to help out people who aren't raging morons, and you seem intelligent, so I like you ^.^

[hothead]

Like everyone said its a good team but i would dump Luxray but that is mainly cause i don't like it but good team spend some tim training and that team could be great

[Zetta Despair]

what a nice combination, though staravia might be better with the quick claw

[Charizard_Man]

Overall, very good team. The quick claw should go to one of your slower Pokemon, Staravia already has a descent amount of speed. I think Luxio does as well, but just keep training and they will develop into a fine team. I mainly say that because I have a Luxray and Staraptor in my team, the pokemon that evolve from your Luxio and Staravia. Once they evolve they are very powerful pokemon.

Like Oniko said, I can assist you with some needs you have. I can breed pokemon for you, and I was wondering something. Do you have a Ponyta in your team because its the only available fire type, my bro had the same problem. So I breeded him a Magby, would you like me to breed you a Magby? I can level it up a bit for you if you want.

And again, just keep training and its cool. And I personally would switch Kadabra and wait for a Bronzor, but that's just my opinion. Good luck with your team! ^_^

[mmight_halo]

that a good team, its similar to my team: torterra, luxray, staraptor, lucario, gastrodon, and rapidash

Your team is just exact as my team. I do have the same team. (Coincidence)

[Pokemaster K2]

Hello

Nice team I like it and I use to take time with my training good times good times ^_^

[Pkmn Breeder Jack]

I have to say, you've done a good job training. I personally don't like having six pokemon so early, but you've trained a lot, so they're all at decent levels. I agree with Charizard Man on the Bronzor idea, just because, even in ingame, it helps to have someone who can take hits. That's just me though, if you like Alakazam, by all means, train him.

Overall, a great team. Good job!

[Matt-O]

Since its ingame it doesn't matter what you use. That team will do just great.

[Britney Spears]

This would belong in the S&M Section. However, since this is in-game, anything will work. If you wish to try competitive battling, read the stickies and post. If you posted something like this, it wouldn't be approved.