View Full Version : Scream!!!! Ow......

May 16th, 2008, 2:08 PM
Today I went out to play,
There I intended to stay.
Then a exploud came out,
Started to scream and shout,
And now I'm in the hospital till May!

May 20th, 2008, 8:52 AM
Wow that's short, but sounds good.
Nice work mate. It would be better if you added more verses?

May 20th, 2008, 9:30 AM
Try not to put your effort into rhyming and put a little soul into your poems.