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Nytkoi
May 23rd, 2008, 05:32 AM
POKEMON CHRONICLES
BY KAI.

INTRODUCTION:
I have learned a new way to make a comic, while I was away, and I am going to see if you people at PC like it! ;)

STORY:
One kid named Phoenix (me) gets his first pokemon from the littleroot lab. Meanwhile, a team of thugs steal pokemon from the Oldale Pkmn Center. The newspaper says its been happening all over the pokemon world. Phoenix and his sister, July, set off to get the pokemon back to their rightful places before the thugs turn them evil. They make many new friends on the way and there are many sidequests.

COMICS:
001: http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z227/ataylan/issue1copy.png
002: http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z227/ataylan/issue2.png

LATEST COMIC:
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z227/ataylan/issue2.png?t=1211562528

CHARACTER BIOS:
COMING SOON

THANKS FOR READING~

Hazuki
May 23rd, 2008, 08:02 AM
... I'm comfuzzled... WHERE ARE THE CHARACTERS???? oO;;

Nytkoi
May 23rd, 2008, 08:16 AM
Well, this is in the darkness, a servant is taking to his boss, but you cannot see any characters yet. This is sorta like the proluge comic.

GreenStorm
May 23rd, 2008, 01:14 PM
Well, good but way too short for a single strip. You used flash for the inner glow, bubbles ,bevels, and drop shadow right? Anyways, the graphics are good. I'm betting that the blurry thing is him jumping over the ledge, right? Overall, this looks like a good one.

Nytkoi
May 23rd, 2008, 01:45 PM
Eh, no. I use Photoshop CS2. Oh, thanks a bunch! :D

.Eevee-Chan
May 25th, 2008, 04:04 PM
It seems good,keep it up!

Gary, the Magic Fairy
May 25th, 2008, 08:30 PM
Um.. in the first one, if they're supposed to be in darkness... why not make the gradient thing... dark? O_o

One major thing that bothers me is all the unneeded text on the tops and bottoms. The only text that really should be there would be "Pokemon Chronicles - Made by Kai" small in like- a bottom corner, and the title of the comic. The copyright information or whatever that is and the "I hope you liked this issue" are very distracting.

I would comment on the story... but it's so terribly vague at this point... I can't. XD

Aero-LyNx
May 28th, 2008, 10:00 PM
Wow, cool comic. The graphic is nice, and the bubbles speech is nicer. But, can you make it to the point or more boxes at 1 page?