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LipstickTraces
June 4th, 2008, 12:35 PM
~~~~~
How about a killer punch,
A clip around the ear?
Skimpy in my sports gear,
I overcame my fear.
Stood aside my rival,
He was gleeful in his sin,
I prepared myself, clenched my fist,
And speedily tore his skin.
His face became distorted,
Everyone gathered around,
All I could hear, the piercing screams,
Shushed the horrible sound.
Now I stand a hero,
Barley a scratch on me,
I stood up and had enough,
Never knew I had the stuff!
~~~~~

Binary
June 10th, 2008, 08:06 AM
Wow, it's a really nice poem with a good feeling of standing up for ourselves.
It really teaches us to do something. Really nice!

mcrc
June 11th, 2008, 05:24 PM
I like the sort of attacking style you had it was a real fun read