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Ninetales
July 31st, 2004, 09:30 PM
Well, all songs (almost) are poems if they have lyrics... but here's a few of my poetic songs...

This first one's a giant metaphor...
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Flying Through a Fog

Flying through a fog
I can't see anything
Who cares, 'cause I'm on wings
That's because I'm flying through a fog
My ship sails on the sea
The clouds blow over me
Flying through a fog

Ever since the time I turned sixteen
My life's taken on a whole new scene
It's like I got in a boat and set asail
On this journey, I can't leave behind a trail

When I start at first, it's sunny and clear
But a storm comes oh so near
I have no control; I enter it then
I'll come out, but I don't know when...

Then I'm flying through a fog
I can't see anything
Who cares, 'cause I'm on wings
That's because I'm flying through a fog
My ship sails on the sea
The clouds blow over me
Flying through a fog

I enter the storm with utter fright
It's a good thing I was so not right
There's no thunder, no rain, and no strong wind
The waves are calm; it's a fog I'm in

I turn around and I can't see the shore
I can't see my future anymore
I climb onto the bow and pretend I can fly
Through the thick, gray sky

Yeah, I'm flying through a fog
I can't see anything
Who cares, cause I'm on wings
That's because I'm flying through a fog
My ship sails on the sea
The clouds blow over me
Flying through a fog

I want to dive underwater to see
But then the ship might leave without me
I want to fly above the fig, up into the air
But what's ahead might give me a scare
I'm stuck in the fog...
Must stay on my ship...
Gotta wait for a sign...
To let me see it all...
I'm flying through a fog...

Now I'm flying through a fog
I may not be ready
To see what's ahead of me
So now I'm flying through a fog
Focus on the present now
Appreciate life somehow
I sure like flying through a fog
I can't see anything
Who cares, 'cause I'm on wings
That's because I'm flying through a fog
My ship sails on the sea
The clouds blow over me
Flying through a fog

Flying through a fog...
Flying through a fog...
And I believe fate will guide me
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Well, any comments? *looks around nervously* More coming soon... (Yeah, I know, this one has a chorus...)

Sarafina
August 6th, 2004, 01:35 PM
Heh, like your title, anyways, *clears throat* this is nice, this would make a good song just like Dizzy's poem, (well no duh they would make good songs, THEY ARE SONGS!) :laugh: