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iRawr-x
July 9th, 2008, 04:57 AM
Hello, I've been through a few comics ;D
So I decided to make Rawr Shorty's ;D (Info: Shortys are not comics.. But are just 1 single framed or maybe 1 ~ 3 paneled picture,)
Please Rate /10

Heres 1 I made!
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Vanished Pokemon:
http://img510.imageshack.us/my.php?image=vanishedpokemonocm1.jpg
Prof.Oak Battle (Unfinished):
http://img362.imageshack.us/my.php?image=profoakbattleju8.jpg

Gary, the Magic Fairy
July 9th, 2008, 08:19 AM
They're very... uninteresting? You have an image of a pokemon center with the nurse saying something that isn't really enough to make a comic of. If you had put like a joke or something, then it would be... okay, I guess, but since it's not... it's just boring.

and... 4 parts of a battle. O__o

They're jpeg-ed, so that makes them messed up and low-quality. PNG is the best for them to be saved as.

Honestly, they aren't good. The battle's parts aren't aligned properly, and they're also probably a little short, since the steelix is almost totally cut off in the 4th part of the battle...

jimsta
July 10th, 2008, 03:44 PM
I Totally agree with Kenji SAVE AS .PNG

SytheXP
July 17th, 2008, 05:36 PM
I see all you are getting is bad reviews. Take it as constructive critisism all artist get it. I however have to agree with them. A 3 panel-4panel comic is only good with a joke in it. And portable network graphic save format is a must so your pics dont look distorted and blurry. I wish you the best of luck.

iRawr-x
July 22nd, 2008, 01:15 PM
I totally give up now.

~Someone close this thread
Reason: I quit making these things.