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Amy-chan
August 8th, 2004, 11:02 AM
This poem was written by someone named Wilf Williams. I didn't write it,but I like it. It's called 'Once'.
I dreamt of you again this night,
running with wolves,
caught in their eyes,
free as I was as leaves from trees,
wild as the wind chasing our fur
and I awoke.
In panic and pain
stealing the sight that you'd gone.

Sarafina
August 13th, 2004, 09:38 PM
Wonder why nobody has posted for this poem. This is great! The title made me want to read it. But it was short. But I'm sure you can can make it longer and just as well! ^_^

Entei
August 13th, 2004, 11:55 PM
I think It was good. Hope you put more up soon.

Amy-chan
August 26th, 2004, 10:02 PM
More? Unfortunately,that's all there is. :( That poem is great,but it's too short! *cries*

Blaine
September 2nd, 2004, 08:38 PM
I've read a bit of Wilf Williams' work... It was all right, though I had corrections for his work, mainly literary liscense things. The poem above wasn't my favorite... But it's interesting...