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FlameJuli
July 11th, 2008, 03:48 PM
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01. Boys and Slinkies (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip1.png)

02. Miltank's Nose (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip2.png)

03. Sea Sponges (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip3.png)

04. Old Man In An Elevator (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip4.png)

05. Welcome to... (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip5.png)

06. Proffessor Oak. (http://i339.photobucket.com/albums/n470/FlameJuli/strip6.png)

Gary, the Magic Fairy
July 11th, 2008, 03:57 PM
XDDDD; they're great, I love them. I told you about the first one earlier, how it needs some sort of punctuation after "slinkies." Other than that I don't really notice any other errors.

So I assume they're all going to end with the -_-' thing?

Silver Destiny
July 11th, 2008, 04:05 PM
Those are hilarious I thought #4 is my favorite

FlameJuli
July 11th, 2008, 08:00 PM
Ohm I forgot to say a new one is up now ^.^ Number 05. Welcome to..

mefju
July 13th, 2008, 04:13 AM
These are great ^.^ Keep up great work

Tyrantrum
July 13th, 2008, 07:37 AM
Funny! ^^
Very, very funny! :laugh:

[NovaPirate]
July 13th, 2008, 12:42 PM
It's chasm, not casm. :]
A couple minor grammatical errors, and I recommend using tails, but they're funny enough.

Ven~
July 15th, 2008, 02:59 AM
LAWL at no.4

if ur going to die in here remember to press the up button

FlameJuli
July 16th, 2008, 06:31 AM
It is meant to be CASM not chasm... its play on words... CASM stands for Cool American Sports Merchandise (it was a shop in Russia that was closed down).

New Comic up btw. Number 06. Proffessor Oak.

Mitchman
July 16th, 2008, 08:39 AM
Did you just see a naked proffesor oak run by? Nope! LOL. But why the -_-' at the end of everything?

[NovaPirate]
July 16th, 2008, 10:51 AM
Another small notation, but when using speech bubbles the conversation goes downwards.

[Here is the first comment]
[Here is the second]
[Here is the third]

Etc. It makes it much easier to read comics than having to guess what order things are in.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
July 16th, 2008, 11:47 AM
heh. These are good, I have to admit.
I love the recurring "-_-'" theme at the end.

overall, I suggest continue these funny pages (I would call them panels, but your the one who made the title), and take nova's advice. :D