A pokerap

[Vash]

i just thought i'd flow for a second you can give me feed back and write yo own!

Kyogre,Flygon,Salamence,Sellow
level 20 sum 'volved from a taillow
out of the trainers 1's my numba
kyogre go ahead kill em wit thundA
flamethrower for the sucky grass
low sp. defence gloom kiss my glass
FLUTE!, payday dun stole my loot
tired of foresight on a hoot hoot
lotta hours, internal battery's dead
Dum Berry virus' going to my head
it's red, just like a quils flame
the end of this rhyme so keep playin yo game!

Thats it so give me some feed back and i want to see your responses and rhymes too.

[Kid Frost]

that was so cool i wish i can rap like that

[Makaveli]

Wow...a platinum rapper...

[Vash]

thanks! i apprerciate the comment

[Makaveli]

lol.You don't want a battle round here,cannon.

[Vash]

Are U serious! u want a battle hey challenger goes first.

[Makaveli]

O fa real tho cannon?Aiight

Gimme 20 seconds

O fa real tho cannon?Aiight

This Makaveli and it's gone have to be wat it have to be.
Wats crackin see?
This cat ain't clappin.
I got my Gat(Absol LVL. 100) wit me.
Actually,half yall trainers wack to me
Yall actually gone need a hundred stacks
I don't rap for free
Listen up!
I spit sick
I have ppl spittin up!
Different stuff
I change it then rearrange it and flip it up
I switch it up
EV ER RY bar
Dog,are u quick enuff cuz like when thugs lickin up the twisted Dutch,man,my ish is nuts!
Hold up tho,close ya mouth.I'm bout to get open tho.
Ock,I'm rich
Knot so thick I can't even fold the dough
Got 2 Pokemon shoot and the 4 brawl
That's how I'm rollin tho
Roll the dro and burn so u can learn how u spose to flow!!!!!!

Philly!Scream at me!

[Vash]

go head homes do yo thang!
Aiight then, i do this 4 da A!


Like mobb deep u kno u got it twisted
My 'gons dragon claw is too heavyfisted
down here we certified head bussas
yo girl cheating i don't kno if u can trust 'er
I'm a tru pimp i keep my ones clean
i got so many gurls 4 u dats juz a dream,
kno wat i mean, i packed for sumthin naughty
it's poppin in my room wit 2 shawties
i'm too fresh in my white tee
alll da honies keep flockin round me
i see red it's a stain on urs
you gurl busted more than a lip on urs!

[Makaveli]

Those some aiight sprites tho.Credit is definitly due.

I'm busy man.Hur up

[Vash]

i editted it and thanks makaveli (tupac)

[tmbjr]

I'm no rapper but those are pretty good

BTW...since freestyle rapping is a form of poetry, I'm thinking this should go in Pokémon fanfiction...

feel free to move it back if I was wrong, Oni...

[oni flygon]

Gonna move it...gonna move it now... ^^

[Jeremy]

Oh, oh, oh, LiL Pika gona busta flow.
My name iz LiL Pika,
My Pokémon gona beat ya.
You gona loose to my lil Chikorita
I know I will defeat ya
Cuz I iz teh Masta
I know I've subpast ya.
Cuz with Pikachu me
As you can see
Nobody can be
The greatest masta then me
The lil AZN MC
But these jokers they the best
Come'on yall from the north, east, and west
It's time to take the ultimate test
But after my partnas defeat ya, you finna need a rest
now you angry with me cuz you know I'm the best!
But if ya gone mess with me, you finna get slice
By my Pokémon, which is cold as ice
You bettah have the luck when you roll the dice,
cuz when you mess me, you gonna pay the price!

[Vash]

nice, nice, Vewy, Vewy Hard!