PDA

View Full Version : Rob-120's Comix


Rob-120
August 21st, 2008, 02:22 PM
Hello everybody ^_^ and welome to my Sprite Comic thread!

Also...theres been a problem with the pictures loading, if it doesn't pop up, click refresh a couple times...

Comics Ratings
THESE COMICS ARE G-PG-13 rating!!! (I think, its just a guess because some pople may find more things offensive then others, I truly don't know what to rate them)

Index of comics:

Random comics #1
Pg: In intro

Random comics #2
Pg: In intro

Kirby Adventures #1
Pg: In Intro


Forms (Jobs, joining, ect.):


Random comics

Name of charcter:
Dimension: (My brain, old dimension, or advance)
Sprite sheet:

Kirby & Jade Adventures

Name of charcter:
Alliance:
Sprite sheet

Jobs?

Name:
What you think you can do to make my comic better:


Current Poll:

Should Megaman and Medabots return in some way?
Yes: 2
No: 0


Banners:


Page link (take away the double spaces ( This - equals spaces http - www - pokecommunity) http:// www. pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=3867878#post3867878

How to add hyperlink (just if you don't know how):
when you place image, click on it then press the globe and put in this link...

Images and their links:

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2979/bannerrchg0.gif

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2979/bannerrchg0.gif

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8779/bannerkazh9.gif

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8779/bannerkazh9.gif

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8356/bannerjalo1.gif

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/8356/bannerjalo1.gif


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
RANDOM COMICS/ (new name will be revealed when comic #3 is out)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Random Comics Issue #1

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=7941

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=7943

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=7989

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8031

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8106

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8107

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8108

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8109

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8110

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8112

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8113

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8114

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8115

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8116

If you noticed...in these first few pages...I FORGOT TO ADD MOUTH MOVEMENT ><
*sigh* oh well -.- i've started to add mouth movement since I noticed that...

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8144

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8145

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8146

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8147

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=9962

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=8950


Random Comics Issues #2

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=9965

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=9966

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=9967

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=10262

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=10263

http://www.pokecommunity.com/picture.php?albumid=1356&pictureid=10411

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1064/rcissue2p7wi3.gif

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/7464/rcissue2p8oj4.gif

http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/1850/rcissue2p9qc9.gif

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/1585/rcissue2p10zh4.gif

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/8281/rcissue2p11cj0.gif

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3474/rcissue2p12ud5.gif

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7475/rcissue2p13ek7.gif



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
KIRBY & JADE ADVENTURES
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

KIRBY & JADE ADVENTURES #1

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7616/kissue1p1wv7.gif

http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/2035/kissue1p2mr8.gif

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/9751/kissue1p3ws0.gif

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4922/kissue1p4rc9.gif

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/7888/kissue1p5ie2.gif

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9792/kissue1p6wb4.gif

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/199/kissue1p7kk8.gif



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Pokemon Dark Knights
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Pokemon Dark Knights #1

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/5995/pkmdkissue1p1cj8.gif

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/9346/pkmdkissue1p2pv5.gif

http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/7298/pkmdkissue1p3el4.gif

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/3411/pkmdkissue1p4pp7.gif

http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/7934/pkmdkissue1p5ls9.gif


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Staff Credits:

Rob-120 - Comic design
(Freinds outside of forum at school)
Thomas (a.k.a. Spike) - Story line
Seiji (a.k.a. Sage) - Jokes


Credits For Sprites:

-neox
-deekman
-skylights
-shadowbot
-Zero the Hedgehog
-Fatazz (Srry, thats his name though)
-DanielSidney
-Domenico
-Mecha Crana
-CylentNite
-Nazo64
-Shadina
-AkumaTH
-Fox Omega
-DArk Shrine
-Gabriel
-Archnefox
-Gamenerd Advance
-Majaller
-Geo Prower
-Lightning

If you notice a sprite and think it belongs to someone I didn't credit, please tell me and I will add them to the credits list...

Jayster23
August 22nd, 2008, 11:48 PM
umm their okay but not great you could do better

Try to put a box over the speech bubbles and make them square/circular square bucause the circle doesn't look good

tkheezy
August 23rd, 2008, 12:10 AM
Aww man! I loved Medabots! I really wish I could find some of the old episodes that show was great! I mean miniature robots that fought other ones in battle. Ah pure sweetness.

Anyway the comics were pretty good! I see you still have to finish them up though. I would really enjoy seeing more of your work!

More Medabots! More power!

Rob-120
August 23rd, 2008, 08:19 AM
YAH! GO MEDABOTS! Lol. I'll put up the tally here also...

(This tally is over...)

Megaman: 2
Medabots: 2

HURRY! REPLY NOW FOR YOUR FAVORITE GAME/SHOW!!!

Also, yeah, the circles look kinda bad now that you think about it...but squares look weird too ><

Bombah!
August 23rd, 2008, 09:21 AM
I love Medabots.
The games are awesome, I have them for emulator.

Aniway, your comic isn´t bad, but... not great.
Theres no real point, right?

But good luck and HF,
Bombah!

Rob-120
August 23rd, 2008, 09:28 AM
actually...at first I wasn't gonna have a story line...and so far the only dimension that has a story line is the old one...so you could say its kinda random...

edit: also, my realm and the other realms intertwine sorta, considering they can control minor things in the comic...

edit edit: Okay...
Shadow: Trying to gather chaos emeralds and...what was that blue light
Sonic: He has none really...his story sorta intertwines with my realm...
and Ashura: Hes trying to fight off Nazo...

idrum4all2see
August 23rd, 2008, 10:21 AM
For Starters, this is Really.... random...
BUT! I think random comics are awesome!
I think what someone said earlier about the speech bubbles may be true.
But don't worry about it just yet.

Oh and Umm...Can You add Darkrai somehow, cause he is my favorite Poke of all time, and should mess something up somehow :]
Random FTW!

Rob-120
August 23rd, 2008, 11:22 AM
hmmm....lol, I have an idea of wich I can add Darkrai...

Rob-120
September 6th, 2008, 03:37 AM
UPDATE
In about 5-10 minutes I will have the last two pages of the comic in and a new one will becoming out in and hour or so. So keep your eyes peeled because you don't want to miss whats gonna happen next >< !!!

Hoppyfred
September 14th, 2008, 12:27 AM
LOL. That was funny. Its nice to have no Pokemon for a change (I'm not being blasphemous! Don't strike me down, Arceus!).

I think you've stopped taking the tally, but just so you know, MEDABOTS SUCK!!!

Rob-120
September 14th, 2008, 06:47 AM
lol, thx, and yeah, the tally did end...

Charizard EX
September 15th, 2008, 02:26 AM
The best part is............There's MEGAMAN in it. I love megaman!

Rob-120
September 21st, 2008, 12:23 PM
okay...I need to go and start a new comic...and get the Darkria one over on this puter... and you know what...MEDABOTS AND MEGAMAN WILL RETURN...or you ppl can decide and that will be the next poll...

the bitter end.
September 21st, 2008, 04:14 PM
Hey! Medabots pwn Megaman XD, I think they're awesome so Medabots FTW!

Comic Tragedy
September 21st, 2008, 04:16 PM
Great job on these. If you know about sonic, it is really good. Great job keep it up!

Rob-120
September 22nd, 2008, 10:28 PM
Thanks for the comments guys, and I've been having some trouble latley with my computers...stupid floppy disk won't save stuff and all that (yes I'm useing a floppy disk >< !!!) and until I can get it to work its gonna be impossible for me to move my comics from from puter to the other :(

UPDATE

~The Darkria encounter episode is finally loaded up!!!

~Also, in a time limit of 15 minutes - 1 hour a new comic will be issued out!!!

~And in other sad terrible news, I'M RUNNING OUT OF SPACE IN MY ALBUMS TO STORE THINGS!!! If anyone knows of a web site that you can store images on without out the photos getting messed up when stored please tell me and I will thank you and find out a way to reward you ^^

UPDATE (Again)

~ First pages of secound issue are posted!

~ New organization in intro!

~ Still having trouble with a place to hold pictures :(

Hoppyfred
September 23rd, 2008, 09:30 AM
Don't mean to be stingy, but...

1) What happened to your Sonic Rob-120?

2) Isn't it Darkrai, not Darkia?


BTW, I love it so far, but I kinda wish you didn't mix Sonic + Pokemon...it doesn't really go...

And also, I have no idea of how you can store images...

But, i suppose, you could use what I use:

http:www.imageshack.us (http://www.imageshack.us)

Basically, it gives you a link, which when you post on forums shows up as the image. You could just store / save the links on MS Word or something...hope this helps!

Rob-120
September 23rd, 2008, 02:50 PM
Thx for the comment and website (I'll try it out) and the Darkai thing...I did it for someone else who asked for it and thats why I put him in there...

Rob-120
September 28th, 2008, 07:09 AM
UPDATE

~MORE PANLES FOR RANDOM COMICS!!!

~New comic coming out featuring...ba da da da! KIRBY!!! So stay tuned ^^

~New title for Random Comics and new names for Rob people!

~NEW COLOR SCHEME IN INTRO! lol ^^

UPDATE

~KIRBY AND JADE ADVENTURES STARTED!!!

~More panels added to random comics ^^

Fox♠
October 3rd, 2008, 08:26 AM
Wow.

This is easily one of the worst thought out comics I have ever seen.

Bad jokes, no real plot, no decent punchlines, horrible speech bubbles, mixing of sprite styles and a God complex.

And then you just randomly take a request from someone and slap darkrai in there? I mean, do you actually seriously have ANY idea where your comic is going?

It's confusing, a lot of it makes no sense, you stretch speech bubbles in ridiculous ways that just make things even harder to enjoy. Also, you seem to have no concept of how Sonic talks or acts.

I could go on for ages about the errors and other problems, but I haven't the time. I doubt you'll even take this in anyway.

Rob-120
October 3rd, 2008, 12:18 PM
Bad Jokes/ Bad Punchlines: If there is a joke, its supposed to be stupid or funny...if its not funny...its just stupid...(I don't care about my jokes just to piss you off)

No real plot: Orly now...last time I checked...THERE WAS! Well...not in the first comic really but in the secound one and in KIRBY AND JADE ADVENTURES theres a story/plot...

Horrible speech bubbles: Well that what you get when you only have MS Paint and PowerPoint...

Mixing of sprite styles: WTH? Where? I WOULD NEVER!

God complex: OF COURSE THERES A GOD COMPLEX! ITS RANDOM COMICS! READ THE FLIPPIN TITLE ><!!!

How Sonic acts: Sonic is supposed to act like Sonic...if you mean this as in I don't make him act really stupid...well...thats how people have munipulated him, thats not truly how he acts all the time...

Sublime
October 3rd, 2008, 12:36 PM
Bad Jokes/ Bad Punchlines: If there is a joke, its supposed to be stupid or funny...if its not funny...its just stupid...(I don't care about my jokes just to piss you off)

No real plot: Orly now...last time I checked...THERE WAS! Well...not in the first comic really but in the secound one and in KIRBY AND JADE ADVENTURES theres a story/plot...

Horrible speech bubbles: Well that what you get when you only have MS Paint and PowerPoint...

Mixing of sprite styles: WTH? Where? I WOULD NEVER!

God complex: OF COURSE THERES A GOD COMPLEX! ITS RANDOM COMICS! READ THE FLIPPIN TITLE ><!!!

How Sonic acts: Sonic is supposed to act like Sonic...if you mean this as in I don't make him act really stupid...well...thats how people have munipulated him, thats not truly how he acts all the time...

Get GIMP. problem solved

Foxhound is right, Sonic doesn't act like that. He has a laid-back slightly in-your-face aditude.

Rob-120
October 3rd, 2008, 12:39 PM
I'll take what you said into consideration ArmyGuy...

Edit: CRAP! YOUR RIGHT ABOUT THE SONIC THING >< !!! I'll fix that...

Fox♠
October 3rd, 2008, 01:09 PM
Bad Jokes/ Bad Punchlines: If there is a joke, its supposed to be stupid or funny...if its not funny...its just stupid...(I don't care about my jokes just to piss you off)

No real plot: Orly now...last time I checked...THERE WAS! Well...not in the first comic really but in the secound one and in KIRBY AND JADE ADVENTURES theres a story/plot...

Horrible speech bubbles: Well that what you get when you only have MS Paint and PowerPoint...

Mixing of sprite styles: WTH? Where? I WOULD NEVER!

God complex: OF COURSE THERES A GOD COMPLEX! ITS RANDOM COMICS! READ THE FLIPPIN TITLE ><!!!

How Sonic acts: Sonic is supposed to act like Sonic...if you mean this as in I don't make him act really stupid...well...thats how people have munipulated him, thats not truly how he acts all the time...

You sir, are an absolute idiot who obviously has no concept of how to make a comic. You feature stupid type faces in your comics because you blatantly can't even edit a simple sprite to do the expression.

Using paint is an absolute pussy out excuse. Most people use paint, you're just lazy. It's funny how you rag on at other comics for things you do, yet when someone points them out in your comic, you throw a fit.

Rob-120
October 3rd, 2008, 01:14 PM
hmmm..your right, I'm lazy, yes I know there are problems that can and should be fixed, of course what your saying to me I could apply to you with you halfed-assed comic, dude, just stop talking dude...

Fox♠
October 3rd, 2008, 01:16 PM
My comic is intentionally bad to highlight how Not to do it. You've never, ever seen a comic I've put effort into, because I tell you, they look a God sight better than these.

Rob-120
October 3rd, 2008, 01:21 PM
Orly...you want to prove your theory?

Glitter Stain
October 3rd, 2008, 01:49 PM
The font isn't good. The text bubbles are a bad idea. Just because official comics use them doesn't mean you should.

And why is Metal Shadow saying "Bzzzzt"? A character shouldn't say "Bzzzzt" unless it's name is Rotom-(letter).

Rob-120
October 3rd, 2008, 02:05 PM
hmmm...yeah your right about the whole metal shadow bzzt thing, a freind at my school pointed that out...

Hey! I like the classic text bubbles...I changed them from round to squarish already, maybe I'll change them again later when it really gets meesed up and, that text is just the normal set text and the font is the smallest I could get it without it killing itself (i think, I'll see if I can fix the font a little better)

Rob-120
October 10th, 2008, 06:40 PM
UPDATE

~OMG! I ACTUALLY HAVE FREINDS FROM SCHOOL HELPING ME WITH MY COMIXS >.< !!!

~Two new comics for Random Comics are coming out soon so watch for those

Employee News

~FREIND 1!!! (A.K.A. DUDE WHO WRITES STORY) I NEED A STORY LINE WRITTEN UP BY...ummm...SOON!!!

~Freind 2 (GUY WHO WRITES JOKES!) keep up the good work...

Rob-120
October 12th, 2008, 08:44 AM
UPDATE

~Updates on comic

~New comic comming out!!! ~Pokemon Dark Knights~

Employee news

~no new employee news...

PwnzorzAlpha
October 12th, 2008, 07:07 PM
Nice use of sprites Connor... But yeah... the plot needs more work.
Some artistic pointers from a fellow friend?

1) When you start a story, always have a background! The story needs a foundation to build off of. With out that. It's screwed.

2) PLOT HOLES!! A big boo-boo for story writing. If you tied the story up more properly, it would be action pack. Add rising action and falling action, like something that puts you at the edge of your seat, and end the comic short to something exciting to make the people poop in their pants to see the next comic.

3) You used Microsoft Paint, didn't you... I HIGHLY recommend you NOT to use MS Paint unless you're drawing it with a tablet and are just making a short picture. Seriously... use FireWorks MX. It's a heck of a lot better. Trust me.

4) IT'S NOT FUNNY! I don't know if it's supposed to be funny. But every great-heart felt-gets-your-girlfriend-tear-eyed story has a little humor in it. I know I'm being a jerk BUT IT'S funny... to Seiji that is...

5) MAKE THE FRICKEN CHARACTERS MORE BELIEVABLE! Always with characters you want to base them off of real people... unless you're godly at making people from the top of your head. The characters have to pop out of the page (not literally or all the characters and friends that I drawn in my comic to do every whim I wanted them to do would kill me with swords, knives, lances and what ever I drew them with.).

So pretty much follow that and your fine. I just created an account on this forum to see how you're doing ;)

Ciao (Dissapears in a dramatic mist of smoke, as the crowd gasps at my amazing exiting pose with two fingers sticking out in a V shape standing for victory as the sounds of my foot steps leaves the stage.)

Oh yeah... You misspelled "friend" D:

Rob-120
October 12th, 2008, 11:39 PM
To sam: *bows* I am but a small amobea compared to you and your art skills...I will heed your advice...

To Seiji: What? That was funny but confusing at the same time...and you wrote in like...a run on...its going off to the side of the page on my computer >< !!!

= GPR =
October 13th, 2008, 09:33 AM
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!

Rob-120
October 14th, 2008, 02:15 PM
good Idea Gp Arts! Hound...you just got nicknamed!

wonthelotto10
October 14th, 2008, 06:02 PM
Connie, I normally wouldn't be writing to you. But here's the message: Ya gotta step up the plate. U wanna no what happens if u dont. LP becomes a sorority group, that's what! swear, man, I have recieved several grim preiews of our fate. There are no words to describe this. Okay there r but not on a pokemon website. anyhoo,Ya gotta step up the plate.

By the way got ur reply. -.-' Genius, man. PURE genius.

Glitter Stain
October 14th, 2008, 06:07 PM
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!
Sorry, but Matt's negativity is pretty acceptable, especially in this case.

"Very good" didn't even pop into my head when I was reading this. It's a mess, to be honest. Why people like you give smart people like Matt nicknames like that is beyond me. <_<;

Rob-120
October 14th, 2008, 08:15 PM
thx seiji and...Mobile TSK...WTH is all I got to say -___- i mean...are you trying topick a fight O.o ...because, thats just stupid, I can't get pissed off anymore by what you say ^^...I have found peace and tranquility...wich to find all I have to do is...EAT PIE ^(^.^)^ !!!

[NovaPirate]
October 15th, 2008, 12:48 PM
Rob-120 you have shown repeatedly your incapability to take criticism. I am sorry, but if you're going to post comics on the internet, you're going to have to deal with people who actually can tell what a good comic is. Foxhound is not negative, he is only brutally honest.

Now, onto the actual comic. Your Sonic (Or whatever it is) comic is a disorganized and haphazardly placed comic with a style blend. Do not mix styles/generations of sprites in the same comic. Unless done perfectly, it looks horrible. You have a God/Author character, which is an amazing cliche and an excuse for you not to have a plot. Which you do not have. Not a respectable one, at least.

Your Kirby comics I did not bother to touch. Maybe later. Your Pokemon comics are also a generation blend. Must I reinforce this? DO NOT BLEND GENERATIONS. You also seem to have a knack for bad grammar and bad plots. I'm not sure if this comic was intentionally horrible, but it fails nonetheless. Here you have a generic Pokemon comic with generic Pokemon sprites and plot, with no humor whatsoever (Therefore taking any hopes of it being a good spoof comic OUT) and yet you seem to like arguing that it is better than everyone elses.

Frankly, listen to advice, read a few good tutorials, develop a nice plot, DON'T BLEND GENERATIONS, stay away from horrible recolors, and start over. Please don't go back to your Random Comics, and don't quit, just keep on doing as I said until you either become a better comic maker or move on. Now have a nice day.

Rob-120
October 15th, 2008, 02:38 PM
no see...what I do is..I take your criticisum...then I kill every other word you said so what I got out of what you said just now was...

~listen to advice, read a few good tutorials, develop a nice plot, DON'T BLEND GENERATIONS, stay away from horrible recolors~

Edit: Lol...you know whats funny is I didn't blend generations in my pokemon comic >< Get your eyes checked out man...(unless you count how I'm useing the national pokedex from Diamond and Pearl when I'm useing Fire Red overworld sprites...I think)

UPDATE

~ Because of hateful disgust to my Random Comics...Ashura's story will be in a seprate comic and the Advanced sprites will be in another comic...the god/author complex is going to stay with the Advanced comic because it goes with the
plot dam it ><


Employee news

~THOMAS!!! GET YOUR BUTT ON THAT STORYLINE!!! ACCORDING TO THESE PEOPLE MINE SUX!!!

Fox♠
October 15th, 2008, 04:11 PM
lol... nicely done... this is long... grueling... and i did laugh a bit... but im digressing. the speech bubbles were a bit mishped and misplaced, and a couple of times i was a bit lost... but it was very good never the less! great job...

i say from now on we name foxhound captain negativity! that seems to be all he posts!

I say we call you captain stfu. Because all you seem to post is spoon fed crap.

I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me.

I find it funny, how anyone who is a decent critic, is automatically labeled a bad guy. Yet you've failed to mention the idiots spamming the forum up with pure crap, which is against the rules.

And yes Rob, NP is right, you did mix styles. You;ve got MD overworlds, FR/LG overworlds and then R/S/E overworlds.

Glitter Stain
October 15th, 2008, 06:05 PM
~ Because of hateful disgust to my Random Comics...Ashura's story will be in a seprate comic and the Advanced sprites will be in another comic...the god/author complex is going to stay with the Advanced comic because it goes with the
plot dam it ><
Regardless of whether it goes with the plot, it's still an old, overused joke that stopped being funny quite a few years ago.

Rob-120
October 16th, 2008, 06:02 PM
I say we call you captain stfu. Because all you seem to post is spoon fed crap.

I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me.

I find it funny, how anyone who is a decent critic, is automatically labeled a bad guy. Yet you've failed to mention the idiots spamming the forum up with pure crap, which is against the rules.

And yes Rob, NP is right, you did mix styles. You;ve got MD overworlds, FR/LG overworlds and then R/S/E overworlds.

you know dude, just because you can do that, doesn't mean you have to, if you don't like it say so, say whats wrong and stop posting here. And you know what Fox Hound, I see I've messed up O.o...I think...I have no idea -___- but dude...if you can tell the diffrence there..wow...cause I truly can't...you guys are just picky...O.o have you ever heard that stupid girl song that goes "Nobody's perfect blah blah blah" well I'm not perfect -___- deal...

Fox♠
October 17th, 2008, 02:43 AM
Anyone can easily see the difference between 2 completely different styles.

I have told you what is wrong, Tsk has told you what is wrong, Nova has told you what is wrong.

You just completely ignore us every time.

Glitter Stain
October 17th, 2008, 12:15 PM
you guys are just picky...O.o
The things that we point out in your comic aren't trifles. They're blatant flaws that anyone with a working pair of eyes could easily see.

Fallen Angel_Messiah Of Black Roses
October 19th, 2008, 07:00 AM
Look, I liked it, for a sprite comic, it is pretty good. Also, just to say it....

You don't need to be a first degree ******* to be a critic, constructive criticism is one things, being like you guys are being is a... Mockery of how real criticism should truely be.

Fox♠
October 20th, 2008, 02:21 AM
Look, I liked it, for a sprite comic, it is pretty good. Also, just to say it....

You don't need to be a first degree ******* to be a critic, constructive criticism is one things, being like you guys are being is a... Mockery of how real criticism should truely be.

If you actually liked the comic, then had the nerve to give us lip, I'd call you the mockery to criticism. I mean, Jesus, do you think film critics are paid to be extra nice even if the film sucked? Course not. Why should it be any different for comics?

Mr. Epic
October 20th, 2008, 02:31 PM
I mean, this thread is 78% spam, 20% poor comics, 2% me. and 0% Kyen :classic:
Yeah okay the comics are pretty bad but come on. I would say people begin posting helpful criticism instead of arguing!:rambo:

Glitter Stain
October 20th, 2008, 02:40 PM
and 0% Kyen :classic:
Yeah okay the comics are pretty bad but come on. I would say people begin posting helpful criticism instead of arguing!:rambo:
What are you talking about? We've been giving him nothing but constructive criticism the entire time.

Fox♠
October 21st, 2008, 07:42 AM
This is going to turn into a 2006 esque flame war before long.

Mr. Epic
October 21st, 2008, 11:11 AM
What are you talking about? We've been giving him nothing but constructive criticism the entire time.
Well you fooled me, there was no argument was there?
Are we allowed guns in this thread?

Glitter Stain
October 21st, 2008, 01:47 PM
I'm going to go LOL at both of the above posts. Matt's for being funny, and Kyen's for being "funny".

I never said there wasn't an argument. You said that no one had been giving helpful criticism, and I then corrected you on your incorrectness.

Fox♠
October 21st, 2008, 04:18 PM
Well you fooled me, there was no argument was there?
Are we allowed guns in this thread?

No.

unless you mean the herculian badboys emerging from my shoulders

Amachi
October 21st, 2008, 09:00 PM
k, you guys have gone far enough off-topic. If you want to discuss comics there is the SC lounge. And lol, flaming.

Rob-120
October 23rd, 2008, 05:25 AM
Wth...O.o how long have I been gone...3 days and some how theres a 20 post argument oin the thread -___- ... wow just wow... and who ver said I'm not taking your critisism...um...I just forgot about it...I need to write it down somewhere I guess...

hawksworthy77
November 7th, 2008, 05:40 PM
guys this comic isn't that bad you guys spent 3 pages arguing about this. connor its an OKAY comic

Rob-120
November 9th, 2008, 09:46 PM
HOW DARE YOU THOMAS TT____TT you back stabbed me by saying what you just said....And wow O.o...when was the last time I did anything to this comic....