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Kishijoten
August 29th, 2008, 11:18 AM
The wonders of life
seem to fade away as
our problems expand through the
day.

But some soothing petals
lighted up our day it's the
Garden of hope in everyway.

Though we had ups and downs
I casted a magical spell. The
spell lure in the happieness of
light and faded the bad things
that occured in are life.

And here was the magical spell"

Face the sunlight and the light and
turn away that frown. Scatter around
a viel of light to cast this magical spell.

Once the spell was finally done the The garden
of hope fwee the happieness sweets

Poet by~ NinetalesSakura


post a comment please.

N-XIGE
August 29th, 2008, 12:06 PM
Well...I' just act as a mentor for now...


This poem had too many; not rhyming situations...

But atleast, like every normal poem...it was an expression of the heart.

5/10...