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obLonG
August 29th, 2008, 03:28 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6421/banner3n.png

THE HIATUS IS OVER!
IMPORTANT:I am looking for an assistant with the comics.Pm me if you want to sign up.
This is my first sprite comic,whaddaya think?Isn't the banner awesome?And please comment if I need work done or just want to comment about my comic:
These comics are rated from G to pg-14

Title Page (http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5544/coverzp3.png)

1: Brendan and Handy. (http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2635/comic1gs9.png)

2: Not Goodity (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6681/comic2cj3.png)

3: Hated Love (http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6872/comic3js5.png)

4: The hand, the bitxx and the axxhole (http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/7802/comic4ze6.png)

5:This is not a Plot Device (http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9851/comic5ay5.png)

6:Stupid backpack,love is for kids (http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9229/comic6mv4.png)

7:Rise of demon may (http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4108/comic1q.png)

8:Beams and Pee (http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/560/comic2r.png)

Filler: Point of view (http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/2540/pokeballe.png)

9: He looked (http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/7819/comic3s.png)

10: They're shiny (http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4989/comic4h.png)

11: Discussing, Disgusting (http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3991/comic5a.png)

12:Suspense and Crossbreeding (http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/4900/comic6.png)

Filler:Important Generation Rape (http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/7308/fillera.png)

13: Slap of Bitxxiness[Pg-13] (http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/1914/comic7p.png)

14: The Anti-Heroes (http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5553/comic8d.png) [NEW]

Gary, the Magic Fairy
August 29th, 2008, 03:42 PM
I... don't get it. He's on a truck... and that thing is Ping Pong? I'm confused. O___o;;

obLonG
August 29th, 2008, 03:46 PM
In pokemon Ruby you start out in a moving truck,so hes in a moving truck playing ping pong on the computer with a giant floating glove

FlameJuli
August 29th, 2008, 04:01 PM
-_- i dont get it either... although my 'comics' never made sense either but i like the hand.. but i dunno why.

obLonG
August 29th, 2008, 04:02 PM
He's just on the computer(The box thingy hes sitting in front of)playing ping pong with the hand.

dragonqueen0210
August 29th, 2008, 08:01 PM
ohhhhhh...i get it now. He's riding in a truck playing ping pong on the computer and with it. So, why did you decide to put the computer as a hand?

obLonG
August 29th, 2008, 08:10 PM
The hands not really a computer.Its a living breathing hand(breathing not actual feature)just read comic 2

Soul.//Silver
August 29th, 2008, 09:39 PM
Is the hand meant to be master hand from Super Smash Bros/Melee/Brawl? lol I like the last scene in comic 2.

obLonG
August 30th, 2008, 02:43 AM
Thanks and no its just a normal hand.

dragonqueen0210
August 30th, 2008, 06:30 PM
wow, alot of questions about a hand. lol. anyway, haha psycho mudkip. loved that bit.

FlameJuli
August 30th, 2008, 06:40 PM
i seriouslt still get it or find it funny... im sorry but i dont and bit with the title is way to messy

obLonG
August 30th, 2008, 07:04 PM
The titles are also written in normal text right above the Comic but I'll fix the titles in the next comic.I also got the Title page up

iEdster
September 4th, 2008, 11:11 AM
I actually love this :)
First I didn't understand, then I got it.

obLonG
September 4th, 2008, 01:45 PM
Thanks man.And i'm sorry that I took so long to get the 4th comic up.Its just that I had this play I had to perform.

agurcsik
September 5th, 2008, 11:42 AM
these are great, i love how its not a total cliche pkmn comic u gotta make more

the hand is the one from in your PC when u move pkmn and stuff

obLonG
September 5th, 2008, 12:48 PM
It was the originaly going to be the pc hand but I changed it to the Sinnoh trainer card hand cuz thats more manipulatable to show what its doing or how it feels.And comic 5 is up.Do you think I should make some supporter banners?

agurcsik
September 8th, 2008, 12:44 PM
i think that supporter banners would be cool

Gary, the Magic Fairy
September 8th, 2008, 01:12 PM
... I still don't really understand alot of this. Okay, so you have a hand as a character, I get that, but...

Okay, the 2nd makes sense for the most part, but then what's with the weird transition between 3 & 4? The mudkip chasing the person does nothing really funny or important, it's just kinda thrown in there. I assume it was just to set up for #4, but... it just seems like wasted potential, that could've been entertaining if it wasn't rushed through.

#5 confuses me also witth he masterball part, but... I'm not sure I want to know. XD

And, may I ask... what is going on with the backgrounds of random sprites? They're distracting from the actual comic, and look time-consuming. You could just use your time to make more comics, since I doubt anyone has a positive reaction to them. The first comic's layout looks nice, and the title doesn't distract from the comic. I suggest using that, it looks much nicer.

obLonG
September 8th, 2008, 09:24 PM
Thanks for the feedback and yes #3 was just a set up for #4.And you don't want to know the masterball meaning in #5.Trust me I didn't like it either.

poke-scooter-mon
September 12th, 2008, 11:19 PM
thats pretty cool. i suck at those thingies

Bludycomicsinc
October 12th, 2008, 03:04 PM
This is a pretty awesome comic. It's a good thing I posted before one month was up.

Gym-Badge
October 13th, 2008, 11:32 AM
lol this is well good when you Posting your next one?

Glitter Stain
October 13th, 2008, 11:56 AM
This is a mess. I can't tell what's going on at any point in time and the panels are spread out all over the place. Why not just put them side-by-side?

obLonG
August 14th, 2009, 08:08 PM
A note to say that this comic is now on hiatus(as if it wasn't while I was gone.Heh)until further notice.Read my sig for details.

obLonG
August 18th, 2009, 03:51 AM
For those of you think I'm just sitting there trying to fool you,well you're wrong!
To show you what I'm working on I'm going to upload a sneak peek from time to time to show you anything new underway.

So sneak peek #1 away!:
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7909/sneak.png

endopker
August 23rd, 2009, 12:22 PM
LMAO masterball.....pg-14 indeed....
Other than that I get theres a hand but why? and umm why does May faint at the site of the main char?
and LOL catches the infatuated mudkip then punts it...
comes back and catches the hand....man its funny but it took abit to understand most of it
EDIT: just an idea you might want to change the background for pokepark all those pokemon look cluttered, than to top that off the writing is in red so it sort of blends in with the poke's. (not too big a deal becuase you write the titles right above the comics but still...(and it's only for comic 3 so it's even better if you understand it)

obLonG
September 3rd, 2009, 01:32 AM
heh...masterball
anyway may had fainted because of the hand of course because who in the world of pokemon has ever seen a large floating white hand and besides handy's backstory will be revealed in due and/or undue time.I'm glad you enjoyed my work!I still don't know about user banners though...

obLonG
September 15th, 2009, 08:11 PM
Finally.It took awhile but I got the comics made but I have good news and bad news.The bad news is I'm under a tight schedule and can only update once a week and the good news is the comics are now 6 panels long!Anyway, Enjoy.

Masterge77
September 16th, 2009, 09:29 AM
LOL, plot device teddy! That was so funny!

obLonG
September 29th, 2009, 04:12 AM
Sorry I took so long so you get two comics to make up for it.

obLonG
October 1st, 2009, 09:20 PM
I got this weeks update up.Wasn't very hard to make except for the last panel.

Blazing Phoenix
October 4th, 2009, 04:25 AM
Erm. Its a little, strange...
Although I like the effect used when the ursarang destroyed may. Heh.
Still, this particular comic is weird. :cer_no:

obLonG
October 4th, 2009, 04:42 AM
It felt weird too while I read over it but it is necessary to move the plot along...so yeah.It took me some time to get that Hyper Beam just right so it looked awesome in the end.Looks like it worked.:)

Edit:

Got comic 10 up aas well as a banner!Yay!I also made a new archive system with the spoiler tags.

Edit:SUPRISE UPDATE!!!Heh.I didn't want to make you guys feel annoyed as you waited a week and got this lousy update.But atleast you learned something about Pokemon, right?Anyway, hope you like it.

Edit:

Hey everybody.Sorry to keep on *counts posts* quadruple posting like this but this is important.I'm am currently looking for an assistant author to review premade comics and make comics when I'm away.If you think your up too it just PM me with your current comic making skills as well as an example of it as a sample comic(four panels or more).You must be commited and truthful if you want to give feedback as an assistant and be oblidged to help me out.
The applications are allowed until I actually find a suitable assistant.
Oh yeah just a little question.Where can you find PMD sprites and RSE route sprites since spriters resource is down.

Edit: Comic 12 is up along with suspense!

Edit:Hey there guys.New comic up and it is important.Seriously.If your fans of Pokepark I really recommend you go read it.
Also would you guys like support banners?

Edit:New comic is up!Not suitable for my younger readers though, sorry you guys.

Weatherman, Kiyoshi
October 22nd, 2009, 04:04 PM
Oh lord, I am glad you PM'd me.

I have been looking a this comic in and out a few times, even before it went on hiatus, and I can truly saw you've improved,
You could use some better text bubbles,
but overall, your humor and storyline structure is improving!
You could still improve, but it's improving!

I genuinely chuckled!

I really am looking forward for more.
You have major comic master potential.
Let's see if you reach it.

(Oh, and, you might want to merge those 7 posts so the mods down flip a ship)

obLonG
October 29th, 2009, 08:05 PM
Thanks for the review. Good to know you like it.
Anyways I got a new comic up, introducing the anti-heroes or villians.I consider this one a meh comic though, it seems like I effect *****d it a bit too much.

ScizorZ
October 30th, 2009, 12:06 PM
Go Back To How You Displayed It Before!!! I hate it this way!