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brendan mc
August 30th, 2008, 01:26 AM
She's gone
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by Brendan McAleer &+ Phill Vidler


I've known you since we where young,
Why did this have to be,
You looked so cute, sticking out you tounge,
And now you gone, age fourteen

Now she's gone,
My hearts broken.
Now she's gone,
My eyes are finally open.
Now i can see,
That you and me.
Will never be...
..Never be...


I loved the way you handled fear,
We had our ups and downs,
But you never shed a tear,
Why have you gone and drowned?

Now she's gone,
My heart is broken.
Now she's gone,
My eyes are finally open.
So i can see,
That you and me.
Will never be...
..Never..be..
Ohh... ohh..ohh

I remember we sat and talked all day
Under the old oak tree,
Even when it was late, we'd stay,
Until you finished playfighting me.

Now she's gone,
My hearts broken.
Now she's gone,
My eyes are finally open.
So I can see....
That you and me..
Could never.. be.....

N-XIGE
August 30th, 2008, 08:56 AM
Well, this poem is really good, hope you dont mind me rating it...

8.5/10 Thumbs UP!!:)

brendan mc
August 30th, 2008, 12:24 PM
thanks, This is getting Turned into a song..

i would be happy if people rated this :P :D

Thanks.. Ive wrote loads more. I will post them Shortly.. :D