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Kishijoten
September 1st, 2008, 11:31 AM
Love has arrived.

As I burst my bud open from a
shy young girl, you had bursted
me alive.

You were the only one who
knew that I was alive and
yet I knew you from this
beginning of this life.

As joy showered through
the sizzling day it is you
Darkshade who made my
day.

You were open and alone
so I came to you because
you are the only one who
knew me as a simple girl.

Even though we are far apart
I will think about you everyday
no matter even if I get a depressing note
I cannot help it but to
love you for life.

From my depressing life had soon
been showered with a happy sight
I thank you DarkShade that you
had certainly made my lovly day.

by~ NinetalesSakura

DARKSHADE
September 1st, 2008, 11:36 AM
ty ^^
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\ / it was supposed 2 be a heart but it went wrong :(

Akarei Yorume
September 1st, 2008, 11:56 AM
Love has arrived.

As I burst my bud open from a
shy young girl, you had bursted
me alive.

You were the only one who
knew that I was alive and
yet I knew you from this
beginning of this life.

As joy showered through
the sizzling day it is you
Darkshade who made my
day.

You were open and alone
so I came to you because
you are the only one who
knew me as a simple girl.

Even though we are far apart
I will think about you everyday
no matter even if I get a depressing note
I cannot help it but to
love you for life.

From my depressing life had soon
been showered with a happy sight
I thank you DarkShade that you
had certainly made my lovly day.

by~ NinetalesSakura

Were you talking about someone specific...?

N-XIGE
September 1st, 2008, 11:58 AM
Well...my fellow Poet has fallen inlove...it seems that you wont be writing anymore sad poems...

Just hope he's the right person...

Btwn: I believe you broke the lines again...its seems each stanza is actually a line...

Coordination: 4/10

Concept: 7/10...

That makes 11/20...anyway, I just felt like rating it, don't mind me...but I'm sure you wouldn't care, after all...love is the most pressing matter right now.Goodluck