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.inLOVE
September 4th, 2008, 12:46 PM
This is a remake of a poem I wrote in 11th grade. You may qoute some of it, but make sure to give me credit. I hope you like it!

There Shall Be

With laughter, there shall be tears,
With friendship, there shall be quarrels,
With insecurity, there shall be confidence,
With love, there shall be torn hearts.

With light there shall be darkness,
With pureness there shall be hate,
With cleanliness there shall be dirt,
With hatred there shall be forgivness.

With happiness there shall be sadness,
With tears there shall be a shoulder to cry on,
With Alpha there shall be Omega,
With beggining there shall be ending.

N-XIGE
September 5th, 2008, 02:25 AM
Very good poem; thought there would be oxymorons there too but; nah...most of your errors came as a result of break in rhyming...the rest; I could not see as the text is too bold.