Love/Emo Poem

[Trogdorhump]

I made this thinking of the girl I have a serious crush on, Megan MacLachlan...



I decided to love you, you decided to not
So away you went, I felt like I was shot

I saw you again, praying for luck
Only to see that you are not nearly as struck

You didnt give a damn about me, you didnt give a crap
And then when I approached you, you decided to snap

"What are you doing?" you asked with a frown
"I love you, Megan" I said like a clown

I was pushed around for the rest of the year
Even my friends screamed in my ear

I felt destroyed, ruined, any of those at least
Then I realized that you are truly a beast




The first poem I ever wrote :D

I promise I'll make more if enough people like this one :)


EDIT: I call it emo because I tried to let my emotions out...I dont know if it worked :P

EDIT2: This is mainly hypothetical...she is in no way a beast! If I ever get a picture I might post it...:3

[N-XIGE]

Well...nice poem...I'll give it 8.5/10...it's a combination, a poem from the best of my knowlede, but t needs Lenght..goodluck!

[squirtle rocks!]

I made this thinking of the girl I have a serious crush on, Megan MacLachlan...



I decided to love you, you decided to not
So away you went, I felt like I was shot

I saw you again, praying for luck
Only to see that you are not nearly as struck

You didnt give a damn about me, you didnt give a crap
And then when I approached you, you decided to snap

"What are you doing?" you asked with a frown
"I love you, Megan" I said like a clown

I was pushed around for the rest of the year
Even my friends screamed in my ear

I felt destroyed, ruined, any of those at least
Then I realized that you are truly a beast




The first poem I ever wrote :D

I promise I'll make more if enough people like this one :)


EDIT: I call it emo because I tried to let my emotions out...I dont know if it worked :P

EDIT2: This is mainly hypothetical...she is in no way a beast! If I ever get a picture I might post it...:3

that is a great emotional poem lol well done! 9/10

[fade101]

Emo or not...
ITS GOOD!!
Too good for someone your age...
I give a 9 outta 10!

[Trogdorhump]

Thank you everyone! I will work on another poem now :)

Maybe a song...just in case you didnt look at my user title, I am both a guitarist and a writer. I suck at writing songs though...Yeah, probably a poem...Ill work on it right away :D

Oh, and thank you for not making fun of me :)